https://padlet.com/24mgoldstein1/f40kjgtir6wc Thank you for leaving a comment. en-us 2018-12-05 17:54:33 UTC 2018-12-07 18:02:29 UTC hello@padlet.com 24dgomez https://padlet.com/24mgoldstein1/f40kjgtir6wc/wish/312342825 Let me start by saying you story was really interesting. I loved the mature and intriguing plot. The way you wrote about the mother's death really kept me interested. Another star would be how you used your word choice to describe the scene. For example, the way you wrote about the mother and her death truly painted a picture in my head. One wish would be to make sure you fully explain your scene before moving on. For example, in the beginning you wrote about conversation. However, you didn't finish the it before moving on. ]]> 2018-12-07 17:54:04 UTC https://padlet.com/24mgoldstein1/f40kjgtir6wc/wish/312342825