https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v Helpful feedback en-us 2017-02-08 05:57:37 UTC 2025-04-10 14:17:58 UTC hello@padlet.com claire_neale https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152367274 Then add comments:
Are the  'characters'  realistic? How has this been achieved? How does this moment enhance the story?
What does this moment add to the idea of marginalisation?
Would this moment be a good addition to the play?


]]> 2017-02-08 05:59:48 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152367274 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370263 Jerry
Captured Matthew's presence as a real person through other people describing him, and therefore enhances the story]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:04 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370263 xink1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370269 Kevin
- oral language made the characters believable. e.g. kind of, you know, and all
- The moment adds some opinions of Matthew from College that weren't from his friends. Shows new generation tolerance.]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370269 simeod1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370280 Dmitri

- Language is realistic along with the characters that were played
- Mathew was described quite well, adding a lot of information about him through their lines.]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370280 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370282 Emily 

- Realistic language and characters 
- Shows more about Matthew through other characters' speech ]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370282 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370286 Moment fitted well with the book Gracie]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:22 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370286 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370291 - language was realistic for the character 
- gives the perspective of a student like matthew.

Patricia 

]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370291 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370296 Ellen 

Realistic diction, adds character to Matthew ]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:34 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370296 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370302 Max
-Acting was realistic
- Oral language was on point
-Tones of the characters voices changed often throughout the moment.]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:38 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370302 17haineshg1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370309 Harry
The script between the characters is realistic, and the characters fit well with other characters. ]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370309 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370315 Describe's Matthew well.
Realistic to the background in the play and to Laramie.
Characters fit the play and scenario well.]]> 2017-02-08 06:47:51 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370315 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370325 - Realistic scenario]]> 2017-02-08 06:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370325 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370330 Harry
Life style 1.5 
- Good characters, realistic personality. 
- ]]> 2017-02-08 06:48:07 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370330 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370341 Karan.
Characters are realistic, which really makes it seem like they are in the story]]> 2017-02-08 06:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370341 17haineshg1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370379 The lines were clear and audible
It was like an interview
Shows more about Matthew

]]> 2017-02-08 06:48:55 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370379 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370384 Julian
- Characters made it seem much more realistic, like they were having a real conversation.]]> 2017-02-08 06:48:56 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370384 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370469 Anna 

Well worded, insight into Mathew and how other people saw him ]]> 2017-02-08 06:50:04 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370469 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370492 Tsz Ying 
- Character's thoughts were realistic with Laramie's culture/beliefs
- Language was used well]]> 2017-02-08 06:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370492 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370496 Karan.
-Reveals the attitude and personalities of the Laramie people]]> 2017-02-08 06:50:28 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370496 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370499 Kelly
- The dialogue goes along with the style of people in Laramie
- Realistic characters with relatable problems]]> 2017-02-08 06:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370499 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370506 - Realistic acting
- Interesting character background]]> 2017-02-08 06:50:40 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370506 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370519 Emily 
- Shows typical Laramie attitude 
- Realistic opinions from characters ]]> 2017-02-08 06:50:53 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370519 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370531 Good group of characters.
Described the feelings well and linked it too the background in Laramie as most people are just tolerating .]]> 2017-02-08 06:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370531 simeod1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370533 Dmitri

- Acting was well done, along with the realistic lines]]> 2017-02-08 06:51:08 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370533 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370542 - realistic language that matches the character. ]]> 2017-02-08 06:51:13 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370542 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370556 Julian
-Shows more of the people in Laramie and what they are like]]> 2017-02-08 06:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370556 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370577 Max
-Realistic characters
-Good oral language]]> 2017-02-08 06:51:51 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370577 17haineshg1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370585 Harry
Dialogue was realistic because of the slang

]]> 2017-02-08 06:52:03 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370585 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370614 - realistic language that matched the character. 
- captures the views of people in Laramie. ]]> 2017-02-08 06:52:32 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370614 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370618 Emily
- Shows Laramie attitude of not wanting other people to bother them 
- Good characters ]]> 2017-02-08 06:52:35 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370618 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370619 Kelly
- Realistic characters 
- Dialogue fits the style of the original book and reveals the nature of the characters

]]> 2017-02-08 06:52:35 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370619 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370625 - the speech fit well with their personalities]]> 2017-02-08 06:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370625 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370628 Julian
-could have been longer but the characters were realistic.]]> 2017-02-08 06:52:42 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370628 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370641 Ellen

Shows the views on the investigation around Matt Shepard, also shows typical homophobia ]]> 2017-02-08 06:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370641 simeod1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370647 Dmitri

- Shines a new light on how Laramie's citizen's thoughts.
- Goes well with the societal views of the town.]]> 2017-02-08 06:52:56 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370647 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370648 Good diction, fit the scene and background really well. 
Characters linked to the other characters in the play. ]]> 2017-02-08 06:52:57 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370648 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370673 - shows how people are peer pressured negatively. ]]> 2017-02-08 06:53:33 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370673 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370728 Anna

Clear characterisation, bias mostly towards the LGBT+ community (especially bisexuality) shows the difference between tolerating and accepting]]> 2017-02-08 06:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370728 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370747 Really captured the essence of the homophobia well, and discusses how people in the society even just by being associated with somebody that's homosexual, it can cause issues.
Ira]]> 2017-02-08 06:54:38 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370747 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370752 Good choice of perspective Gracie]]> 2017-02-08 06:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370752 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370765 Good opinions and representation of someone close to Matt. 
Its a missing perspective from the play so it would fit the plot quite well. ]]> 2017-02-08 06:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370765 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370769 - Shows culture in Laramie; how others view homosexuality]]> 2017-02-08 06:55:01 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370769 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370770 Emily 
-  Gives information about Matthew from his friend 

]]> 2017-02-08 06:55:01 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370770 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370775 Jerry
Interview structure is unique, and makes sure spoken opinions are realistic]]> 2017-02-08 06:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370775 xink1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370778 Kevin
- It adds more perspective from Matt's side in childhood, which there isn't much of in the book so far.]]> 2017-02-08 06:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370778 simeod1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370779 Dmitri 

- Describes the homophobic tendencies that other citizens have at homosexual people.]]> 2017-02-08 06:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370779 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370782 - ]]> 2017-02-08 06:55:08 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370782 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370788 Kelly
- Realistic interview structure
- Dialogue introduces perspective and information from Matthew's friend ]]> 2017-02-08 06:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370788 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370790 Karan
This scene was generally really realistic since it is definitely something that could happen in Laramie.]]> 2017-02-08 06:55:12 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370790 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370814 -Well constructed characters]]> 2017-02-08 06:55:34 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370814 17haineshg1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370936  Jack & Harry
Involves all characters evenly
Eye witness point of view]]> 2017-02-08 06:57:03 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370936 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370946 Kelly
- Unique and interesting setup about events before the crime]]> 2017-02-08 06:57:08 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370946 simeod1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370957 Dmitri 

- Realistic views on how sexuality does not define a friendship.]]> 2017-02-08 06:57:19 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370957 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370963 Jerry
Interesting highlighting of an eyewitness]]> 2017-02-08 06:57:25 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370963 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370964 Emily
- Good information about events before the crime 
- Different perspective from movie inspiration ]]> 2017-02-08 06:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370964 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370970 Shows the effects even being associated with a gay man can have in a small town, shows a more liberal population in Laramie ]]> 2017-02-08 06:57:30 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152370970 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371024 Julian
-the characters sounded familiar but had different personalities.]]> 2017-02-08 06:58:05 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371024 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371053 Chris: Familiar character and interesting story line, gives good information on personality of characters to shape characters.

]]> 2017-02-08 06:58:28 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371053 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371151 A good view/different side that was not expressed in the book so far Gracie]]> 2017-02-08 06:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371151 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371165 Strong description of Matt.
Good interview format.
Good links to previous information learnt for the play.
New view and perspective  from Matt's friend.
Very strong diction]]> 2017-02-08 06:59:38 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371165 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371170 Details how even those that were in support of the LGBT community, were at times pushed, to conform to the society's view, and gives a different view of how even those that were friends of Matthew could have been turned against him.
Ira]]> 2017-02-08 06:59:40 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371170 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371177
- Realistic and interesting view from a friend tried to protect his gay friend and couldn't take the bullying anymore ]]> 2017-02-08 06:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371177 17haineshg1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371180 Jack & Harry
The character who conforms to the 'Laramie norm' is a well written piece as it shows that people change their own thought so they can be accepted

]]> 2017-02-08 06:59:42 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371180 xink1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371188 Kevin
I think it'll be a good addition, the perspective of a friend who went lengths to protect Matt would be valuable shaping to homosexual cultures.]]> 2017-02-08 06:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371188 simeod1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371189 Dmitri

- Describes the realistic issues and hate that go against the LGBTQ+ Community.]]> 2017-02-08 06:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371189 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371217 Emily
- Shows good perspective on LGBT in Laramie 
- Shows how people receive hate for being close with people in a minority ]]> 2017-02-08 07:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371217 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371228 - good choice of character personalities
- interesting view on matt's friends or the people that surround him]]> 2017-02-08 07:00:09 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371228 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371249 Ellen
Insight into how homophobia affected Matt before the attack, and also that it harmed the people around him.  ]]> 2017-02-08 07:00:23 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371249 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371280 Jerry
Very human, relatable perspective of Matt's friend, perhaps uncommon; an equally viable addition to the play]]> 2017-02-08 07:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371280 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371381 Kelly
- Additional perspective and information from an existing character
- Realistic dialogue that sticks to the style of the original character]]> 2017-02-08 07:02:00 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371381 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371383 Karan:
Realistic situation by using characters that are already in the play to create a realistic styled situation. ]]> 2017-02-08 07:02:02 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371383 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371389 Good follow on from the play. 
Realistic representation of Laramie's reaction to the press. 
Strong depth to the original character Matt Galloway.]]> 2017-02-08 07:02:07 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371389 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371393 Jerry
Deeper interrogation into one of the existing characters, essentially building on ideas; very honest response from the character, full of fear]]> 2017-02-08 07:02:11 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371393 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371439 Ellen 

Leads on from the other moments, and is in the style of the original text. Shows how the media presence around Matt's death effected the town. Gives a lot more depth to the characters ]]> 2017-02-08 07:02:40 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371439 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371525 - Shows depth in character
- Adds more to the play; shows Wyoming culture and considers more perspectives]]> 2017-02-08 07:03:44 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371525 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371534 Chris
Issues that are described are realistic.]]> 2017-02-08 07:03:53 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371534 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371558 Builds on the pre-existing ideas given in the play really well, and shows a different side to people of how they're hesitant to give their own opinions in fear of being ridiculed by others.
Ira]]> 2017-02-08 07:04:14 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371558 17haineshg1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371586 2017-02-08 07:04:38 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371586 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371613 Shows more about the Laramie culture, and how it allowed for homophobia ]]> 2017-02-08 07:04:58 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371613 simeod1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371615 Dmitri

- Shows a good perspective from an innocent bystander
- Has good insight on thoughts of the youth.]]> 2017-02-08 07:04:59 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371615 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371630 2017-02-08 07:05:09 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371630 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371634 New perspective from someone at the bar the same night.
Realistic representation of the perspectives from people in Laramie. 
Diction matches the play.]]> 2017-02-08 07:05:11 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371634 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371637 Emily 
- Shows good bystander perspective
- Also touches on Aaron and Russell's possible opinions 
- Good context on Laramie attitude ]]> 2017-02-08 07:05:14 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371637 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371639 More insight to why people in Laramie thought they thought Gracie]]> 2017-02-08 07:05:16 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371639 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371643 Uses ideas and information of a bystander to give a much different perspective on what was going on. ]]> 2017-02-08 07:05:17 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371643 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371647 - interesting insight to what happened in high school]]> 2017-02-08 07:05:20 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371647 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371664 Kelly
- Insight into the perspectives of people in Laramie regarding homosexuality
- Additional bystander perspective at the bar]]> 2017-02-08 07:05:37 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371664 xink1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371682 Kevin
Local events in the past add to the historical development from 'Highest equality state' to modern Wyoming, so it'll be a good addition.]]> 2017-02-08 07:05:50 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371682 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371859 Kelly
- Interesting perspective of the events
- Relatable and realistic environment and setting

]]> 2017-02-08 07:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371859 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371860 Karan, Gives a perspective on what would happen to matt in the the moment rather then the past as it  gives a much bigger sight on what his life was during the incident.

]]> 2017-02-08 07:08:40 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371860 simeod1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371861 Dmitri

- Shows views from a bystanders]]> 2017-02-08 07:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371861 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371862 Different view on what could have happened. Interesting]]> 2017-02-08 07:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371862 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371864 Jerry
An alternate daunting perspective from a bystander of someone close to Matt, very different perspective on hindsight; adds new content to book]]> 2017-02-08 07:08:44 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371864 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371865 Harry
- Different perspective on the play]]> 2017-02-08 07:08:44 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371865 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371868 - Language is realistic]]> 2017-02-08 07:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371868 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371875 Interesting perspective on what happened on that day, and looking at a different possibility of the events. Gives a possible realistic retelling of what happened.
Ira]]> 2017-02-08 07:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371875 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371883 - interesting view on the event that happened]]> 2017-02-08 07:08:57 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371883 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371890 2017-02-08 07:09:01 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152371890 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152372125 Gives a different and interesting perspective.

]]> 2017-02-08 07:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152372125 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964042 Jerry
The introduction of an Asian is quite new, but would this blend with the play?]]> 2017-02-10 03:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964042 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964154 Karan
-Shows the true depth of the character
-Adds on to previous knowledge to try and help audience to gain a further understanding on the topic. 

-]]> 2017-02-10 03:02:01 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964154 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964259 Harry
-  I think the characters could have had more of a backstory.]]> 2017-02-10 03:03:14 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964259 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964422 Explores the sort of generalized ideals of Laramie, and the different perspective, but possibly too broad in the sense that it doesn't really go in depth into the more subtle parts of the community and more personal views.
Ira]]> 2017-02-10 03:05:24 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964422 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964427 Good story line. 
Linked to the play without using already existing characters.
Good diction. ]]> 2017-02-10 03:05:27 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964427 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964524 Kelly
- Thought-provoking storyline
- Realistic dialogue
- Perhaps could have more depth to other characters?]]> 2017-02-10 03:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964524 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964546 Take on conforming to roles based on race
interesting character perspective]]> 2017-02-10 03:07:10 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964546 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964547 Ellen 

It adds information about racial prejudice in Laramie, and also talks about the issue in the rest of the country 
 ]]> 2017-02-10 03:07:10 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964547 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964561 More back story on the main characters could have allowed more capacity for empathy.]]> 2017-02-10 03:07:19 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964561 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964638 Interesting perspective, the dialogue of the child and parent was really good]]> 2017-02-10 03:08:33 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964638 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964640 Anna
Perspectives of bystanders, no particular bias, interesting characterisation (displaying self preservation)]]> 2017-02-10 03:08:33 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964640 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964655 2017-02-10 03:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964655 17haineshg1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964659 Harry
The scene is well thought out  ]]> 2017-02-10 03:08:45 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964659 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964695 Interesting in the way that it discusses a physical disability compared to the more psychological discrimination of the people in Laramie, and shows a different, and yet similar sense of discrimination.
Ira]]> 2017-02-10 03:09:09 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964695 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964709 Jack
It is deep and has a nice story line. I don't think the moment would fit into the book although it does talk about discrimination]]> 2017-02-10 03:09:19 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964709 xink1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964720 Kevin
- Great, except the narrator could've been used for introducing the characters - I have no idea who they really are.]]> 2017-02-10 03:09:29 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964720 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964723 Good story line, understandable.
Diction meets other characters from the play. 
Could be a real moment in the play. ]]> 2017-02-10 03:09:31 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964723 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964740 Max
- Interesting perspective of the events
- Relatable and realistic environment and setting]]> 2017-02-10 03:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964740 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964741 Anna
Clear imagery, no particular bias but display of being on the side of general goodness.]]> 2017-02-10 03:09:40 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964741 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964752 Kelly
- Interesting perspective regarding parents and disabled children]]> 2017-02-10 03:09:49 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964752 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964813 Jerry
Compares a disabled child to Matt, interesting]]> 2017-02-10 03:10:34 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964813 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964860 Jack

Shows different perspectives of not so close people to matt
Shows a Laramie style thinking type
Classmate has mutual views while parents have discriminative views

Could have been longer]]> 2017-02-10 03:11:05 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964860 17haineshg1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964870 Harry
Demonstrates the homophobic view of Laramie's older generation ]]> 2017-02-10 03:11:08 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964870 17haineshg1 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964949 Harry
Again demonstrates the homophobia of the older generation but also demonstrates racism]]> 2017-02-10 03:12:07 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964949 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964962 Not really about a person who experiences discrimination, good view from his classmates 

]]> 2017-02-10 03:12:15 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152964962 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965016 Anna
Perspective of allies, about eyewitnesses, being known as a friend of a gay person and how it is dealt with.]]> 2017-02-10 03:12:46 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965016 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965100 Gives a range of views about Matt]]> 2017-02-10 03:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965100 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965161 Jerry
Adds African-American perspective, another provoking addition like "Are you new here"]]> 2017-02-10 03:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965161 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965173 Anna
Neutral display towards the media in order to protect image, shows reluctance of society to expose opinions]]> 2017-02-10 03:14:48 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965173 https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965174 Kelly
- Thought-provoking storyline
- Interesting and differing opinions of Matt of the two characters]]> 2017-02-10 03:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/claire_neale/f3ye7w5udc4v/wish/152965174