https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq upload your final drawing here for our critique en-us 2016-10-06 15:00:37 UTC 2024-04-10 12:16:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Pictureland.png s1001492 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/128846077 Eleanor Mitchell]]> 2016-10-06 15:04:08 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/128846077 s931696 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/128850378 Samuel Tankersley]]> 2016-10-06 15:12:54 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/128850378 s930969 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/128852379 emma ambrose]]> 2016-10-06 15:16:39 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/128852379 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129125245 2016-10-07 14:06:31 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129125245 carmenalcocer https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129126993 by me


(carmen alcocer)]]> 2016-10-07 14:10:00 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129126993 carmenalcocer https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129129956
i like the yellow flower in the foreground a lot, it adds a lot of colour, but i would add a bit more leaves to the willow tree

]]> 2016-10-07 14:16:13 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129129956 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129130422 Quintin King of the world]]> 2016-10-07 14:16:58 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129130422 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129132328 Max Giesecke]]> 2016-10-07 14:20:56 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129132328 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129132659 KAMERON MESSER]]> 2016-10-07 14:21:42 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129132659 helene_a_hoover https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129133083 2016-10-07 14:22:39 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129133083 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129133557 I like how there are three flowers in the middle and there big and your photo is all about that and i like that, but i will make the mountains better but there in the back so it doesn't really matter.

]]> 2016-10-07 14:23:40 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129133557 helene_a_hoover https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129133727 commenting on Eleanor Mitchell's art, I like the bridge and how its distanced far back over the stream. I would add a little more detail to the foreground leaves.]]> 2016-10-07 14:24:11 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129133727 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129134456 Houdini art...]]> 2016-10-07 14:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129134456 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129134668 2016-10-07 14:26:31 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129134668 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129134960 2016-10-07 14:27:13 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129134960 s1001492 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129142006 I really like the sun set in the background and the colors you used on the mountains, it really makes them pop! I would make the cat in the middle ground a little more detailed, but other than that it looks great! 😊😀]]> 2016-10-07 14:44:03 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129142006 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129143607 Nolan Wright ]]> 2016-10-07 14:48:27 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129143607 s1001492 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129143842 I really like the detail on the willow tree in the middle ground. Although, I would add some more flowers and some bright colors to the background. Other than that, it look awesome!🙂]]> 2016-10-07 14:49:06 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129143842 s931696 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129144028 I really love the detail put into the landscape (especially the sunset) but one thing a would change is to add a little more shading to the piece as a whole and maybe make that fence a bit bigger]]> 2016-10-07 14:49:38 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129144028 s930969 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129144414 I love how you kept most of the colors warm it helps to balance out the large amount of cool colors in the pond also having the bench in the middle ground is a nice touch. one more thing that looks really nice that also you didn't use just green for your plants but you used colors like pink and yellow. something that I think could have been approached better is the grass in the foreground looks abnormally large. besides that everything else looks great! 👌🏻👍🏻 ]]> 2016-10-07 14:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129144414 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129144873 Pink, Pretty Flowers Dancing on Grass]]> 2016-10-07 14:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129144873 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129145155 commenting on helene h. 
I like how she has many big plants such as flowers, leaves, and parts of trees.
I think she could do more stuff in the middle ground and background.]]> 2016-10-07 14:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129145155 s931696 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129146143 this art is very great and i really like the flower its really nice, but one thing I would change would be to add a little more life into the scene such as a few more trees and flowers maybe of different kind and I also would have made the tree a bit smaller to add more depth]]> 2016-10-07 14:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129146143 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129146168 By Rachael Muresan]]> 2016-10-07 14:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129146168 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129146671 Olivia Roberts

]]> 2016-10-07 14:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129146671 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129146782
Lauren krystik]]> 2016-10-07 14:55:52 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129146782 s890417 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147133 2016-10-07 14:56:46 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147133 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147294 I like how on the pretty, pink flower you did not just use pink but you also added purple and red or a darker pink for the outline. I think that you could have made it more clear where the flower's stem is so that it doesn't just look like a floating flower. :)]]> 2016-10-07 14:57:14 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147294 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147411 commenting on Leah Cho's pink pretty flowers dancing on grass

The tress and sunrise look really good. I like how the trees have a good mix of colors. But the sunflower and flower in the front could look more realistic. 

]]> 2016-10-07 14:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147411 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147433 the sunset forest]]> 2016-10-07 14:57:39 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147433 s1001492 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147440 I really like the flowers. The colors and the way you drew them really makes the art look like something you would find outside. One way you could improve is that you could add a little color to you cattails in the foreground. Maybe like a mix of light and dark brown. Other than that it looks amazing.😄👍]]> 2016-10-07 14:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147440 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147687 I like how you cam see the sun peeking out behind the mountains in the background add some purple flowers in the flower  patch in the middleground

]]> 2016-10-07 14:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147687 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147798 2016-10-07 14:58:31 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129147798 s890417 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129148076 i like how the small things have so much detail. the thing u could improve would be maybe add more to the foreground with detail and more plants that look like they have texture ]]> 2016-10-07 14:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129148076 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129148142 commenting on Vincenzo 
I like how your plants get are larger in the foreground and they get smaller in the middle ground and background. 
I think you should add more detail to your trees and flowers.]]> 2016-10-07 14:59:26 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129148142 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129148401 I like how you were very creative on the mountains making them PINK!!!!!!!! I also like how the grass is multiple shades of green. I think you could have put more detail of the tree on the middle-ground though. :)]]> 2016-10-07 15:00:12 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129148401 s930969 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129148550 i think that you used space really well in your artwork altho i think the flower in the foreground is very pretty but it is a little to large for the placement of it the grass overlapping makes it look further back so it looks way to big. another thing you could have made better is your mountains, you could have made them look better with more colors like green or yellow maybe. and in the flowers in the background could have more colors to hem besides pink.]]> 2016-10-07 15:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129148550 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149053 Cabin in the Woods]]> 2016-10-07 15:02:06 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149053 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149256 Commenting on Eleanor Mitchell's "The Duck Pond"

I like the colors in the pond I think they blended really well. You could work more on the pink trees in the front.]]> 2016-10-07 15:02:39 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149256 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149355 Forest on a hill]]> 2016-10-07 15:02:55 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149355 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149433 commenting on Nolan Wrights I love the detail in the background. You need more detail in the foreground.]]> 2016-10-07 15:03:08 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149433 s905091 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149773

]]> 2016-10-07 15:04:00 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129149773 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129150183 commenting on Cade Stanford picture I love the detail with the center tree. But you need more detail in background and foreground and more shadeing.]]> 2016-10-07 15:05:02 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129150183 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129150208 i really like how there was texture to the tree. my suggestion is to not have as many white spaces]]> 2016-10-07 15:05:06 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129150208 s905091 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129151188 Very well made picture with a lot of detail and giving that not detailed spectacle to it, I like the suspense added to the picture running off like a form of mystery, If I were you i would've made the lines more straight and drew it more visible, What I mean is that the middle ground path to the home looks sort-of like little pigs laying down.. so maybe add detail to that part.

]]> 2016-10-07 15:07:27 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129151188 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129151396 august eltz]]> 2016-10-07 15:08:01 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129151396 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129151413 Nolan i really like your pond and all the cat tails. I really like the details on the cat tails. Maybe but more color in sky.]]> 2016-10-07 15:08:03 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129151413 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129151505 2016-10-07 15:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129151505 s930969 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152012 i like how you had clouds in you artwork but one thing that you can do to improve is to make them look more like clouds if you look outside clouds don't have one definite shape. some more things that you can improve on is that you don't use space very well and you dont have very much color. one last thing is that your flowers all look the same i think if you had more flowers and changed up the shape it would look better.😃]]> 2016-10-07 15:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152012 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152086 Elijah Collett]]> 2016-10-07 15:09:48 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152086 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152301 i really like the sky but my suggestion is that u could have blended it better so that it would look ore like a sky

]]> 2016-10-07 15:10:20 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152301 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152476 By Ethan Irwin]]> 2016-10-07 15:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152476 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152479 Haley Scott]]> 2016-10-07 15:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152479 s1001492 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152841 I like the way that you colored the grass, it really makes it look like it has texture. Although, one way you could improve is to add some leaves to the tree in the middle ground.👍🏼]]> 2016-10-07 15:11:43 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152841 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152941 i really like the sky and how the paper is fully colored but i think u could have put more details whe]]> 2016-10-07 15:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129152941 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129153259 I really like the flowers in the foreground. I also like the details in the middle ground. Maybe work on the tree in the middle ground.]]> 2016-10-07 15:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129153259 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129153338  i like the colors of the tree and i think you could have added more to the ski in the background]]> 2016-10-07 15:12:50 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129153338 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129153642 By Rachael Muresan

]]> 2016-10-07 15:13:06 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129153642 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129154069 2016-10-07 15:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129154069 s905091 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129154188 2016-10-07 15:14:31 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129154188 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129154535 By Campbell Ella]]> 2016-10-07 15:15:34 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129154535 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129154858 Rachael M: I really like the detail you put in the pink flower, but the tree does not transition smoothly into the upper branch
es. Make sure you start think at the base of the branches and get thinner.]]> 2016-10-07 15:16:25 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/129154858 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/131340292 I really love the detail in the foreground shown by the dead winter tree and the little fox, but the very close trees could of had something to make them stand out a little more and more detail. I also like the cabin in the far middleground because that illustrates a lot of detail, and makes the picture more interesting.]]> 2016-10-18 01:06:13 UTC https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/131340292 https://padlet.com/oconnorkick/f1z3ff89lvgq/wish/131341105 I really liked the concept your picture and the concept is illustrated through the different colors and plants during those different seasons. I think you should of made the transitions between the seasons a little smoother by mixing the different colors in the middle of those cross sections. I also liked the different styles of the mountains in the background which also had a lot of great detail.

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