Padlet Peer Critiques by Garwey P Dual

Diya Rayna

dualgarw — 2024-12-09 14:51:28 UTC

GLOW - I think you had a great visual presentation and I like how you personalized your presentation, this made it easy to connect to you.

GROW - I would have liked to seen a graphic on your survey.

Connor Kriebel

dualgarw — 2024-12-09 14:54:19 UTC

GLOW - I like your reference to your survey and how you were able to apply that to your presentation throughout.

GROW - I think that at times you read your slide, but you were able to expand your thoughts, too. I think sometimes we need less words on the page.

Alexander Desiderio

dualgarw — 2024-12-09 14:57:13 UTC

GLOW - I like how you talked about how you express creativity and were able to incorporate how that differed from your own experience with creativity.

GROW - At times it was hard to hear you on your presentation, but I can relate to that as a low talker.

Rachel Lucas

dualgarw — 2024-12-09 14:59:00 UTC

Glow - your presentation was very thorough and you gave good examples of leaders.

Grow - You did have a couple spelling errors, so you want to make sure you review before your submission.

Margaret Johnston

dualgarw — 2024-12-09 15:01:54 UTC

Glow - I enjoyed how you discussed the recap of the book as a way to summarize our class and what we took from this presentation. I also enjoyed your experience on homeschooling and tying that into your creativity/innovative learning.

Grow - While I enjoyed that experience, I think you stayed on your educational slide a little long.

Lauren Gandy

dualgarw — 2024-12-09 15:04:57 UTC

Glow - You were clear in your speaking and utilized your book well. I like how you put in a graphic from your survey.

Grow - I think that at times your slides were a little wordy. Also, with Sway, it is hard to see the title of your slide and the body of work.