Quick Writing Reflection - Period 1 by Jake Booterbaugh

Dominic Beltramo

2024-09-04 15:19:30 UTC

I would make it more detailed and if I was allowed make it longer and more then one prompt.

Vaibhu Landa

2024-09-04 15:22:21 UTC

I would make my writing better by making it in PEEL format so that it’s more organized. I would also use better transition words since mine doesn’t seem that formal.

Liliana Wicks

2024-09-04 15:24:56 UTC

I believe that if I were to redo or revise my writing assignment, I would add more evidence to support my claim. I retold the story more than I explained my point, so I need to work on that.

Audrey Winkle

2024-09-04 15:26:33 UTC

I would organize it better so it is more clear. Also I would have someone proof read it for errors.

Kaitlyn Samaan

2024-09-04 15:31:40 UTC

I would re-read it a couple of times to check for mistakes in my writing. I would also make it a little more detailed.

Jesse Sackaroff

2024-09-04 15:32:06 UTC

I would make it more detailed, or longer. It was hard to fit the entire conflict and all of the complex pieces included into one stuffed paragraph. I would have done a larger peel paragraph, or something that could fit what I wanted to write.

Max Siedlik

2024-09-04 15:35:12 UTC

I would keep most the same and add slight detail on some writing

Sienna Horton

2024-09-04 15:35:50 UTC

I would try to stay more on topic for the question and have a more organized way. I would also try to make a plan before jumping into the writing.

Samrat Singh

2024-09-04 15:36:27 UTC

I would make sure i would revise and read all of my answers and make sure that I would start with the first few words of the question

Jaden Bernabe

2024-09-04 15:37:31 UTC

I would try to make my writing more detailed and less vague about the story details.

EVAN BARRY

2024-09-04 15:37:55 UTC

I would try to organize it better by using PEEL. I would also try to pull citations from the book rather then just repeating what happened.

Kaimana arroyo

2024-09-04 15:38:08 UTC

I would have someone proof read it to make sure it’s the best it can be. I would also write it in a peel format and not the way we did it.

Dominic Simmons

2024-09-04 15:39:43 UTC

I would use more of the book to add more detail and make it longer for more information

Charlee cline

2024-09-04 15:45:00 UTC

I would improve the format and punctuation of my writing pice

Angela Tennant

2024-09-04 15:47:46 UTC

I would add more detail and periods.

Charlee Draeger

2024-09-04 15:47:52 UTC

I think I need to go more into detail and maybe a little shorter.

Gavin Prevett

2024-09-04 15:52:07 UTC

I could improve my Summer Reading writing assignment by putting quotes directly from the book and shortening my writing style. These two things would make my writing concise and compelling.

cayla

2024-09-04 15:53:28 UTC

I would add like more difficult words and more details

Clara Krumlauf

2024-09-04 15:53:45 UTC

If I were to redo my assignment I would make it have more evidence. I would also make it longer.

Sienna Lee

2024-09-04 15:54:05 UTC

I would use more descriptive adjectives and use more detailed explanations to explain the events from my book. In addition, I would make the explanation of the book a bit shorter.

Braeden Corcoran

2024-09-04 15:57:09 UTC

I would use a lot more detail in my writing, and I would stop making some of my sentences run on sentences.

Finley Green

2024-09-04 16:01:17 UTC

I would edit it more to look for mistakes. I would also add more advanced vocabulary.

Bryson Duffaut

2024-09-04 17:30:07 UTC

If I were to redo my project I would add more detail and evidence. I would probably also make it into a PEEL paragraph to practice more.

Tyler McCaverty

2024-09-04 17:42:51 UTC

Next time I would improve my grammar and spelling. I would also triple check my work to make sure everything is good such as my punctuation and more.

Fiona Furer

2024-09-09 00:05:36 UTC

I would add more details and improve my format