https://padlet.com/23achuy/ex7fdedpa59s Hello and welcome to my feedback padlet! Thank you for reading my writing pieces. Please comment positively. en-us 2017-06-22 13:31:31 UTC 2018-03-28 12:48:38 UTC hello@padlet.com 23mboone https://padlet.com/23achuy/ex7fdedpa59s/wish/237374193 Something that I really enjoyed about your piece was you varied your sentences and how descriptive you were. Another thing that I enjoyed about your piece was how you were able to show all the differences and similarities but explained them very differently. Some to look forward to work next time is like little spelling errors and other minor things that could've been fixed to make the writing piece better than it already was.
-Morgan Boone]]> 2018-03-02 13:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/23achuy/ex7fdedpa59s/wish/237374193 23mwhitney https://padlet.com/23achuy/ex7fdedpa59s/wish/237522337 STAR: You did a really nice job of describing the setting. I could really picture the whole story in my head because you described it so well. The actions of each character were written out so thoughtfully that it was like a movie in my head.
STAR: The dialogue of the characters matched their personality so I could tell who was speaking even if there weren't dialogue tabs.
WISH: Next time, I recommend to spend more time working on word choice to add to the description even more. Overall, I really liked the plot of your story! Nice job!
-Maggie Whitney]]> 2018-03-02 17:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/23achuy/ex7fdedpa59s/wish/237522337 23dclavijo https://padlet.com/23achuy/ex7fdedpa59s/wish/246859058 I really liked your story. It was original and something different. I wonder what made you do this. You have one or two mistakes so I would change them, other than that it's perfect.]]> 2018-03-28 12:31:05 UTC https://padlet.com/23achuy/ex7fdedpa59s/wish/246859058 23inunziata https://padlet.com/23achuy/ex7fdedpa59s/wish/246866291 2018-03-28 12:48:34 UTC https://padlet.com/23achuy/ex7fdedpa59s/wish/246866291