Writing Workshop Week (Section 2/fall 2020) by Rebecca Harris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2 (1st) Plan (2nd) Accomplishments AND (3rd) Comment on 5 classmate posts en-us 2020-10-18 13:29:36 UTC 2025-10-16 13:08:43 UTC hello@padlet.com Dr. Harris’s example dr_rebeccalharris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/838804648 Plan:
  1. To explain the current practice and my reform in more detail
  2. To strengthen the details of my philosophy of education
 
Accomplishments:
  1. I strengthened my research by adding 3 sources.
  2. I developed details on my philosophy of education, the current practice my reform responds to and my reform itself.
  3. Made sure the theme of equity is clear across each section of my essay
]]> 2020-10-18 13:29:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/838804648 Kelly Soderstrum https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/846541562 Plan:
1. Add more detail and strengthen my purpose of education
2. Strengthen the philosophy of education
 3. Make sure all parts are well connected and all flow together

]]> 2020-10-20 20:07:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/846541562 Alysia Bryant https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/846832629 Plan: 
1. For my paper I would like to work on my research by incorporating citations from our class textbook. 
2. I will strengthen my formatting by properly citing all my citation by following APA format.
3. I would also like to elaborate more on my the philosophy of education that mostly relates to my reform.]]> 2020-10-20 22:23:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/846832629 Tylan https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/847275878 Plan:
1. Add more details from sources I find. 
2. Focus more on who I chose to write about that relates to my reform
3. Properly cite my citations]]> 2020-10-21 02:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/847275878 Megan cobbme23 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/847669814 1. I plan to revised all of my papers. I will apply all of the comments Dr. Harris has wrote. I would also find more sources other than the book. 
2. I plan to focus on my reform so everyone can know how passionate I am about bringing change to the young minds I will teach. 

Accomplished Strengths
1. Rewriting two of my paper both were not on the right topic.
2. Grammar mistakes.
3. Adding more to two of my papers.
4. Revising Dr. Harris comments.   ]]> 2020-10-21 06:36:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/847669814 Ellen Casteen https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/848755342 1. Use one citation resource multiple times throughout my paper.
2. I will strengthen my second section of the paper, as I struggled with understanding the objective of the section. 
3. I will use more educated sources, such as reviewed journals from the ECU database. ]]> 2020-10-21 14:06:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/848755342 Jake Pollard https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849589585 1. My first step in my plan is to improve my vocabulary. I often find myself repeating words or having trouble trying to come up with alternatives.
2. My second step is being more detailed. I tend to be short and quick to the point about topics without going into much detail or explaining the topic.
3. My last step is to find a bigger variety of sources. Many of my sources are web based so it would be good for me to find some alternative sources. This could help me be more ]]> 2020-10-21 17:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849589585 Mallory https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849658768 1. First of all, I need to rearrange my paper so that it follows the APA format.
2. Secondly I feel I could strengthen my paper by adding more resources (especially for section 1).
3. Also for section 1, I could strengthen my paper by adding more historical examples as well as going more in depth with influential pioneers. 

]]> 2020-10-21 17:19:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849658768 Sydney Daniels https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849700655 1. Advise each section and fix the parts of each paper that don't flow correctly - take into account DR. Harris's advice.
2. Format my paper more correctly and make sure it's completely in APA..also add the title page and abstract 
3. Edit my whole proposal - weakest part of my whole paper 

]]> 2020-10-21 17:28:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849700655 Rachel Zack https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849921539 1: I plan to revise all of my sections and apply all of Dr. Harris's comments as well as properly cite all my sources
2:. I will elaborate on my section 1 
3:  I will make sure to add in the conclusion and have it all flow together

Accomplishments:

  1. I reviewed all previous sections and looked over Dr. Harris’s comments and applied them to my final paper the best I could
  2. I added a page number header
  3. Made each paragraph flow more with specific examples from the text
  4. Fixed my citations to make them APA
]]> 2020-10-21 18:18:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849921539 Hailey Anderson https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849963138 Plan:
1. First, I want to go through my paper and make sure it follows correct APA format. 
2. Second, I want to read through my paper, clean up some of my writing, strengthen my paper and change a few things based on comment made by Professor Harris. 
3.  Third, I want to make sure my citations are listed correctly and in the right format. 

Accomplishments: 
1. I went through my paper to make sure it properly followed APA format.
2. I also went through my paper and made sure everything was spelled correctly and made some wording changes. 
3. I also made sure my citations were done correctly and according to the correct format. ]]> 2020-10-21 18:28:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849963138 Gavin Bailey https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849994600 1. My first step is to work on my grammar because through out my years of school I have never been the best at grammar because forget most of the time where a comma a semicolon should be placed.So I plan to touch up on my grammar and refresh myself on punctuation.
2. My second step is to stop using run on sentences because this is a problem that I had with one of my other teachers this year. So, my plan is to write the sentence then if I feel that its a run on then I will reread it and fix it if necessary.
3. Let is that I will reread my whole paper and see if their is anything that I need to correct edit of add into my paper. This is how I will improve my writing.]]> 2020-10-21 18:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/849994600 Olivia Tingen https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/850022517 Plan: 
1. To make sure that my final paper is formatted correctly, organized, and flows well

2. Review all of Dr. Harris’ comments on my previously submitted papers and make the necessary adjustments to my writing and organization

3. Strengthen the details of the purpose of education section 

Accomplishments:
1. Organized my paper according to APA format guidelines and made sure all necessary parts were included. 

2. Reviewed all of Dr. Harris’ comments and used her input to make the necessary adjustments to my writing 

3. Strengthened many details in my paper and made sure I used all proper details from my sources
]]> 2020-10-21 18:43:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/850022517 Amber Wiggins https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/850130609 Plan:
1. Fix early sections to fit my revised reform. Make sure the paper reads as a coherent piece instead of a bunch of disjointed thoughts. Fix the flow of the paper. 
2. More research. Add more information from credible sources to back up the claims made in my paper. 
3. Review all of Dr. Harris’ comments and revise as needed. 

]]> 2020-10-21 19:13:05 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/850130609 Grace Brooks https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/850779271 Plan:
1. Better explain my reform, add an example of how it works in the classroom.
2.  Add official proposal and philosophy to final paper.
3. Incorporate more educational sources from more certified databases and authors.]]> 2020-10-22 00:32:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/850779271 Rheanna Elliott https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/850996762 Plan:
1.I plan to effectively correct all of Dr. Harris's comments.
2.I plan to specifically focus on my philosophy section and give lots of attention to correcting that.
3. I will try my best to go to office hours and have tips on my conclusion.
Accomplishments:
1. I edited my paper based on all of the comments Dr. Harris made.
2. I spent time on my philosophy section revising most paragraphs to strengthen my paper as a whole.
3. I went to office hours and received tips to make my paper better. ]]> 2020-10-22 02:28:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/850996762 Ki'Ron Newton https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/851016316 Plan:
1. Strengthen details on my philosophy of education section 

2. Better explain the connection of my purpose to the historical event 

3. Plan and use my time more wisely and ask questions to Dr.Harris on how to strengthen my paper all around.  

Accomplishments:
1. I connected my my purpose to the historical event very well in my opinion
2. I utilized my time wisely and was able to submit my final paper on time. 

]]> 2020-10-22 02:40:25 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/851016316 Morris Jones mmjones262mypittccedu https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/853949470 Plan:
1. First step would be do a more indepth research on my reform and take feedback and apply to a complete paper.
2. Second be able to provide a more fluent paper for reading and explaning my reform.
3. Plan on using APA format better as well as citing all work and to have a more cohesive paper.]]> 2020-10-22 19:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/853949470 Kelly Soderstrum https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/857529434 Accomplishments:
1. I added more sources to my paper to add more detail
2. I fixed up my different sections of the paper and made them more clear
3. I made sure the paper flowed together 

]]> 2020-10-23 23:41:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/857529434 Gavin Bailey https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858213654 Gavin Bailey My accomplishments for strengthening my paper by adding more sources to help strengthen my reason for giving more funding to schools shows that people in poverty receive less funding per student. Another was I read over my work and looked for all my spelling errors and I was able to find them and correct them. Last with my new sources it shows my point of how lower income schools receive less funding per student then schools in a higher income schools.  ]]> 2020-10-24 17:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858213654 Jake Pollard https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858250932 Accomplishments:
1. Added a few more reliable and scholarly sources
2. Was able to go back and add more detail to the necessary sections
3. Was able to go back and use better word choice and fix my vocabulary]]> 2020-10-24 17:39:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858250932 Abby Carroll acarroll7801 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858341077 PLAN
1. I plan to use proper in text citations.
2. I plan to incorporate more scholarly articles.
3. I plan to make my essay more organized and have flow.]]> 2020-10-24 19:24:05 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858341077 Abby Carroll acarroll7801 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858351773 Accomplishments
1. I worked on my citations, and made sure they were in proper APA format.
2. I added in more sources to make my paper have more evidence.
3. I made my essay flow more and incorporated better vocabulary. ]]> 2020-10-24 19:35:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858351773 Ellen Casteen https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858624709 Accomplishments
1. I found new sources for my section 2 that were more reliable and had better information that related to my reform. 
2. Added more detail about how my reform related to the subject in each section. 
3. I fixed my grammar and used better word choice. ]]> 2020-10-25 02:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/858624709 Charlotte Daniels https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/910504253 My plans to strengthen my paper is to find someone to interview who is now an adult and was suspended a lot while in school.
Accomplishments 
1. Make a focus on the difference of low property children and majorities. 
2. Check grammar, pun cation, and make sure citations are right. ]]> 2020-11-10 20:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/910504253 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/972537233 2020-11-30 17:51:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek2/wish/972537233