https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th en-us 2019-02-27 18:27:41 UTC 2026-03-06 18:48:36 UTC hello@padlet.com sloughclass https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338021642 2019-03-05 17:22:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338021642 https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338121550 Writing score- We gave the writer a score of 4 because they included examples, but did not explain their points. They structure was adequate. We felt as if the student could have elaborated further on her examples. We also felt the student could have had better conclusions on their paragraphs.  Grammar score- We give the student 4 on grammar. There were not too many mistakes.]]> 2019-03-05 20:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338121550 https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338121941 Student response 4
Writing score -
We give the writer a 5 because there are many mistakes.  They have no transition words which the writing hard to follow.  However they had very good language
Language score -
We give the writer a 3 because there were many errors. 

]]> 2019-03-05 20:14:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338121941 https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122220 writing score- we give the writer a 4 because they did not use any textual evidence or facts. they asked many good questions and had many good points, but they should've used more evidence.

language score- we give the writer a 3 because they did not use correct punctuation and had some incorrect grammar. ]]> 2019-03-05 20:15:29 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122220 https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122339 Writing - 4

Language - 4

We gave the student a score of 4 for writing because the student was repetitive and didn't quite get to the point.  
we gave the writer a language score of 4 because there were spelling mistakes and poor grammar ]]> 2019-03-05 20:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122339 https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122341 2019-03-05 20:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122341 https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122485 We gave the writer a 4 because they have several grammar mistakes. They also didn't use any transition word so the paper did not flow well. There also isn't much textually evidence that thoroughly explain the reasoning.
writing score : 4
language score : 3]]> 2019-03-05 20:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122485 https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122673 Language score- We gave the writer a 3.  It was written decently with okay spelling, but has some issues. They were not fluent in their writing, used many fragments, and grammar and spelling were off. 

Writing score- We gave the writer a 4. They only used one piece of evidence for each body paragraph. They used little to no transition words and had poor word choice. The evidence they did use supported their claim and the claim made sense. ]]> 2019-03-05 20:16:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338122673 https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338123016 Writing Score- We gave the writer a score of 4 for the writing part. There position is unclear, and there is a lack of evidence. Also, simple vocabulary is used, and it is not organized in a way where it enhances the meaning. 

Language Score- 3- There are minor spelling errors, and the 4th paragraph has many sentence structure errors.]]> 2019-03-05 20:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338123016 https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338123426 writing score - we gave the writer a score of 4 because there were a lack of transition words, quotes, mentioning of the text, and call to action. they did great word choice and the paper flowed well.

language score - we gave the writer a score of 4 because we did not find  any reasonable mistakes to count off.]]> 2019-03-05 20:18:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sloughclass/7th/wish/338123426