https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a Use the rubric to evaluate the artwork of your peers. Make a new post for each artwork that you evaluate. Title each new post using the seat number of the artwork that you are evaluating. Each post should contain one STRENGTH and one WEAKNESS/suggestion for the maker of the artwork. Be specific and use the rubric. en-us 2017-02-07 16:34:23 UTC 2017-02-07 20:25:28 UTC hello@padlet.com llaney1 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152202176 This drawing had a really thoughtful GESTURE that captured the angles and proportions really well. Their continuous contour needs more details (specifically in the clothing and stool). They should also look at the angles of the legs on the stool - they seem a little wide.]]> 2017-02-07 16:36:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152202176 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152287684 The artwork takes up most of the paper and includes great details but the legs of the chair went wiggly and poorly drawn]]> 2017-02-07 20:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152287684 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152287939 This artwork has a somewhat of a gesture drawing but it's not complete, but it looks good so far. 
If it was complete I think that it would've looked very nice.]]> 2017-02-07 20:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152287939 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152287965 This drawing has very good detail. It doesn't have any smudges, wrinkles, or tears. But there are some parts that are bigger than others. For example , the shoes don't go with the body.

]]> 2017-02-07 20:08:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152287965 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288171
•The artwork has amazing details and well drawn out proportions 
•It needs a more continuous line instead of sketch looking lines]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288171 10022984 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288224 This drawing has good stool proportions but some of the proportions of the body, specifically the hips and legs, were too long and too short.]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288224 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288241 The drawing showcased a very propositional value within the lining and distance between each limb. However, the lack of detail is something that could be worked on; an impeccable drawing lacking appealing material, the stool being too small compared to the body and the leg is a bit too thin.]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288241 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288273 This drawing has really good structure. It has thoughtful gesture. It's perfect in my opinion. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288273 10030279 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288285 This drawing has no evidence of gesture. No evidence of continuous contour. Some stole legs were longer/ wider than the others. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288285 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288293 I like the way they took the time to  proportionate the body from the stool. The drawing looks like it is ready for contour but they need to fix the stool as the metal circle where to rest your feet is more of an oval than circle and is not porportionate.]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288295 The drawing had a very precise gesture and the face had good details and angles. But the continuous lines could've been neater ]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288295 00026417 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288329 The details in this work are solid and contour was used the artist just needs to work on the proportions. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288329 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288330 I like your gesture and how you can tell it's a person. Your proportion is really good just add more continuous lines and finished your drawing. Great job ]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288331 This piece of artwork fits the paper well, but some of the body parts aren't accurately proportionate, specifically the feet.]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288331 10015082 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288336 This artwork is proportionate and has great composition as it fills up the entire page and included some details from the background of the source image. It could use a little more cleaning up of the details as it looks a bit messy for the details of the clothing. Also, the stool looks too long compared to the source image.]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288336 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288347 Nice detail in clothing although your drawing is not proportional. You should change the arm length]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288347 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288378 When it comes to detail, its clear to see that most of your detail is focused on the lower half of the body, this including both the contour and continuous line. When going back , it would be nice to see you go back and apply these things to the top half of the body. and focusing on accuracy. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:44 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288378 10015028 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288394 A good show of clothing in this image. The composition of the paper is needs improvement it does not fill the complete paper as well as the fact that it is not proportional. There is a fine resemblance to the source image.]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288394 00060342 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288395 2017-02-07 20:09:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288395 10038516 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288403 This drawing has really good continuous contour, but the leg proportion is off and so is the stool 

]]> 2017-02-07 20:09:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288403 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288625 Their strengths are Exemplary in their craftsmanship. They show a great understanding of how to show work in an organized manner. 
Their Weaknesses are composition for the hoodie part of the clothing is much bigger than in the image. 

]]> 2017-02-07 20:10:24 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288625 00060342 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288646 I like that this drawing takes up most of the space on the paper.]]> 2017-02-07 20:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288646 100213011 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288744 the head is kind of small and the proportion of the upper body is too wide while the arms are too small. The chair is off on design as it seems to extend beyond its origin. shoes are too big.]]> 2017-02-07 20:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152288744 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152289256 This Artwork has started out very well but not complete.]]> 2017-02-07 20:12:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152289256 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152289984 Strength: The gesture drawing is VERY clear in the artwork. Very clear with the contour drawing.
Weakness: I wish it was more detailed ]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152289984 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290003 I like the details, but the head can be more proportional with the body because, the head doesn't fit with the body, it looks like a square.]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290003 10038516 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290065 The continuous contour is good, but the proportion of the head, feet, and stool are off. The drawing of his are smaller than it shows in the picture and there are some smudges on the paper

]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290065 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290068 Detail is used well throughout the artwork, but with regards to accuracy and proportion that's where it falls short. Especially looking at how the head is compared to the body.]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290068 00026417 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290069 I can't see the gesture drawing but the artwork is really detailed and neat the craftsmanship is exquisite. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290069 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290074 A strength of the artwork is well proportionate and has a ok continuous contour. Although this paper could fill a little more space needs to erase gesture lines but has good craftsmanship]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290074 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290079 This drawing was neatly drawn with great details but the composition needs improvement]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290079 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290080 I like that they focused on the detail of moving her hair behind the ear as in the source image. It does not feel as in proportioned to the source image. It also does not seem to include aspects that would be ready for the contour lines it should have more detail and proportion, composition.]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290080 10022984 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290088 I like how the person also drew what was in the background of the picture, but the stool seems to be too long and some of the other proportions of the furniture.]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290088 10015082 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290104 The artwork fills the page like the source image does. However, the gesture and contour line isn't completely accurate to its source image. For example, the stool is too wide compared to the size of the stool in the source image.]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290104 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290132 One of the astounding qualities regarding this drawing was the crisp lines and details on the lower body, but you can see that the upper half was a hard task to complete; lacking details and less intricate proportion. The head is a bit too small for the body, and although I like some of the background details shown; I would also note that the stool was drawn a little too wide.]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290132 100213011 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290135 Aside from the no facial features, the head seems to be of good design. The legs are somewhat out of place. The tables however are well drawn . ]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290135 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290136 •I like the Details 
•It needs to me a little neater with a more continuous line ]]> 2017-02-07 20:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290136 00060342 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290144 It's kinda  proportional. The feet and legs are a little bigger than the upper body]]> 2017-02-07 20:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290144 10027135 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290192 The body sits nicely in the paper and it takes up good space.The weakness is the upper thigh seems to be a little to long and the neck is a little thin.

]]> 2017-02-07 20:15:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290192 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290199 This artwork has a lot of great gestures. You can see where this person drew under the body before starting the picture. It doesn't have any smudges or anything and everything fit the body perfectly.]]> 2017-02-07 20:15:09 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290199 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290289 This drawing has a nice composition, but I think the waist of the body needs to be a bit longer and the legs on the stool are widely separated and needs to be more closer together]]> 2017-02-07 20:15:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290289 10015028 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290320 Though the drawing is incomplete its has the beginnings to a great piece of art. The legs s are disproportional to each other and the body but the true detail of the drawing comes in through the left leg of the model.]]> 2017-02-07 20:15:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290320 10030279 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290340 The drawing is good.  The stole legs are crooked and uneven. The feet don't look proportional. 

]]> 2017-02-07 20:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290340 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290343 This artwork has great clothing detail. But the upper body isn't precise with the legs. And there is no facial details. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290343 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290356 You did ok with proportion and great filling the space but you should change the shape of some body parts to match the picture. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290356 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290554 I like how you have some detail in the photo. It's very nice but I would like to see more continuous lines in your drawing and let it take up more space of your paper. His leg is a little bit long also ]]> 2017-02-07 20:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290554 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290585 Their strength is keeping their paper clean as they complete a piece of artwork. Their weakness is composition for the hoodie is bigger on paper than it is on the source image. The chair's legs aren't at an angle other than that the drawing is great. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:16:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152290585 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291619 The gesture drawing is good. But the face is not portional with the details on the face. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291619 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291711 I can tell that this person focused more on the bottom half of the drawing then the top part. But it's still good. Things on top seem to be a little bigger than the lower part.]]> 2017-02-07 20:19:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291711 10030279 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291722 The gesture drawing is perfect. The head looks smaller than the body. Not much clothing details.]]> 2017-02-07 20:19:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291769 I really enjoyed the contour and precise lines in this drawing, the detail was very well proportioned within the lower half of the body. Another thing to note would be the showcase of the background which shows a lot of detail not only to the subject at hand, but also to the things around it; which captures the scenery very well. If I would critique one thing about this to fix, I would presumably be the lack of facial details and the very large amount of blank space.

]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291769 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291771 It obvious to see the gesture under the drawing which was how it was easy to see how they managed to get there picture mostly accurate. One thing would be to maybe go back to the arm area and touch it up so that was its easy to see and more clear. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291771 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291779 This artwork has good gesture. It isn't complete but it is good. The drawing can be more human like in my opinion.]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291779 10015082 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291781 This drawing is proportionate and the gesture drawing can be seen underneath to outline those proportions. I also love the work of the continuous contour. The craftsmanship could use a bit work and there could be a bit more detail added, but other than that, it's perfect ]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:09 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291781 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291818 This artwork was well done on proportion although does not look to be filled throughout the paper.]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291818 10022984 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291822 I like how you included the details on the jacket and pants. The proportions and placement of parts are off: some are too wide or long and overextend boundaries.]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291822 10015028 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291833 Impressive proportions in the drawing although details such as the jeans and shirt are not on the same level of detail as the shoes and stool. In addition This is a unique use of the composition.]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291833 10027135 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291837 The face looks good and the post the figures in is great.The gesture is pretty cool to. Now the things that need attention are the proportions.]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291837 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291863 The artwork shows a great understanding of cleanliness but shows a poor figure for the images leg, it is way longer than the source image Other than that the image is greatly drawn. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291863 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291864 I like the continuous clean lines and how proportionate the drawing is 
I think the drawing could've been a little bigger on the paper itself instead of folding the paper to fit the image

]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291864 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291872 This artwork has great amount of detail and the composition is very nice, but the final line does not appear to be continuous]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291872 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291878 The details that are included in the jacket were drawn well but the proportion of the legs and upper body needs improvement]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291878 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291885 This artwork is near finished. IT has great proportion and good composition. I like how the shoes were drawn and how similar they are to the source image. This artwork seems ready for the contour. Has need detail to the source image. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291885 00026417 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291887 I like the way the artist uses the complete space of the paper and I can tell they used a gesture drawing to make out shapes I would just say the artist should work on proportions of the body so that they match. ]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291887 10038516 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291932 the drawing is good, you could see some of the gesture underneath but the proportion of the left thigh is to large for the rest of the drawing.]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291932 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291937 Strength: The gesture drawing is clear but it doesn't over power the contour drawing
Weakness: It should have more detail.]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291937 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291949 I like the detail you put in and you can tell you didn't move your pencil from the paper. Try redrawing the arm. Other than that it looks good, continue to add detail.]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291949 00060342 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291959 The stool is not proportionate to the body]]> 2017-02-07 20:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152291959 https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152292168 I like your gesture but she needs to be a little bit bigger on the page you could fill up more space on the page. Her feet are way to big for this photo so please finish ]]> 2017-02-07 20:21:30 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/ev4xyz60qa7a/wish/152292168