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      <title>Beta Wed lesson 15 by Lau Ling</title>
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      <pubDate>2025-05-07 10:09:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>tang pei ern corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>        The examination was just around the corner. Ben headed to John's house to do some revision. It was late at night after finished revision, he waved goodbye to John.</p><p><br/></p><p>        On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. So, he quickened his footsteps ang hopping at once to reach home faster.</p><p><br/></p><p>        All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly behaviour and his advised him don't out late at night alone. Ben also promise that he would not do this anymore.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    The examination was just around the corner. Ben headed to John's house to do some revision. It was late at night  <strong>after finishing revision</strong>, he waved goodbye to John.</p><p>          On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. So, he quickened his footsteps <strong>and hopped </strong>to reach home <strong>at once.</strong></p><p>         All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly <strong>behaviour and advised him not to go out late at night alone</strong>. Ben also <strong>promised</strong> that he would not do this anymore.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:19:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Joe mun corrected</title>
         <author>joemun2020</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The examination was just around the corner Ben headed to revision John. At was late at nights after doing revision, he waved goodbye and hurried home.</p><p>  </p><p>    On the way home, he felt someone following him. He heart was tumping wildly against his rib cage. He quickened his footsteps hoping at ance.</p><p>  </p><p>  All of suddenly, patted his shoulder. Be screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben’s silly behaviour and his advised him don’t out late at night alone. Ben also promise that he would not do this anymore. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>          The examination was just around the corner.  <strong>Ben headed to John's house to revise</strong>. <strong>It was late at night</strong> after doing revision, he waved goodbye and hurried home.</p><p>        On the way home,  <strong>Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage</strong>. He quickened his footsteps, <strong>hoping to reach home at once</strong>.</p><p><strong>       All of a sudden</strong>, <strong>someone patted his shoulder</strong>. <strong>Ben screamed</strong> at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben’s silly behaviour and  <strong>advised him not to go out late at night alone</strong>. Ben also <strong>promised</strong> that he would not do this anymore.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:21:50 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lam Hoi Ling corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>       The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house to do revision. It was late at night after doing revision, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p><br/></p><p>         On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, he quickened his footsteps hoping to get home safely at once.</p><p><br/></p><p>           All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of hid lungs. When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. Then his uncle laugh at him for his silly action. His uncle also advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he won't do that again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>          The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house to do some revision. It was late at night, and<strong> after finishing their study session, </strong>he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps, hoping<strong> to get home safely.</strong></p><p>         All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle<strong> laughed </strong>at him for his silly reaction and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he wouldn’t do it again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:23:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Loh kah Him corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The examination was just around the corner, Ben went to John's house to do revision. It was late at night after doing revision, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home. </p><p><br/></p><p>  On the way home, he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, he quickened his footstep, hoping to reach home at once.</p><p><br/></p><p>  All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at he silly behavior. His uncle advised him not to stay out late st night. Ben promised that he would not do it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>         The examination was just around the corner, <strong>so </strong>Ben went to John's house to do some revision. It was late at night, <strong>and </strong>after finishing their revision, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>        On the way home, he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps,<strong> hoping to reach home safely at once.</strong></p><p>          All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and advised him not to stay out late <strong>at night.</strong> Ben promised that he would not do it again.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:25:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jessmin corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>      The examination is just around the corner, Ben went to John house to revision. Late at night, Ben waved goodbye to John and go back to home.</p><p>        On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage and hopping at once to reach home.</p><p>         All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben silly behaviour an advised him don't out late night alone. Ben promised his uncle not do this again.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>     The examination <strong>was</strong> just around the corner, <strong>so </strong>Ben went to John's house to revise.<strong> It was late at night, </strong>Ben waved goodbye to John and <strong>went </strong>back home.</p><p>        On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his pace, <strong>hoping to reach home quickly.</strong></p><p>      All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and <strong>he </strong>was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly behaviour and advised him not to go out alone late at night. Ben promised his uncle that he <strong>would not do it </strong>again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:26:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yihan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>       The examination was just around the corner, Ben went to john's house to do revision.  It was late at night After doing revision, Ben waved goodbye to john and hurried home.</p><p>         On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. Ben's heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. So he quickened his footsteps and hopping at once to reach home quicker.</p><p>            Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him dont stay out late at night alone. Ben promised he would not do this ever again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The examination was just around the corner, <strong>so</strong> Ben went to John's house to revise. It was late at night. After finishing their revision, Ben waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>         On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footsteps,<strong> hoping to reach home quickly.</strong></p><p>       Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night alone. Ben promised he would never do<strong> it again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:27:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Law Qin Er corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John house to revision. It was late at night after doing revision, he wave goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>     On the way home, he felt someone following him. His heart  was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps hoping at once to reach home. </p><p>     All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. He screamed at top of his lungs. When he turned around he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour. His uncle advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he won't stat out late any more.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house <strong>to revise.</strong> It was late at night, <strong>and after finishing their revision,</strong> he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>      On the way home, he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps, <strong>hoping to reach home as soon as possible.</strong></p><p>All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. He screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he wouldn’t<strong> stay out late anymore.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:27:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Khor Jia Xian corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The examination was just around the corner.Ben went to John house to do <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://revision.It">revision.It</a> was late at night after doing revision,he waved goodbye and hurried home.                                                                         On the way home,he felt someone following him.He heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage,so he quickened his footsteps and hoped at once to went home faster.                                                                          All of a sudden,he felt a stranger man patted his shoulder.Ben screamed at the top of his lungs.He turned around he head,he was surprise to see his uncle.He uncle laughed at his silly behaviour.He uncle advised him not to stay out late at night.Ben promised that he didn't make it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house <strong>to revise.</strong> It was late at night, <strong>and </strong>after finishing their revision, he waved goodbye and hurried home.</p><p>         On the way home, he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footsteps, <strong>hoping to get home at once.</strong></p><p><strong>     </strong>All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was<strong> surprised </strong>to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that <strong>he wouldn't do it again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:28:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lucious corrected</title>
         <author>onglucious</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The examination is just around the corner Ben went to John's house to revision. He does revision until late at night, and waved goodbye to John.</p><p><br/></p><p>  On the way back to home, he felt someone is following right behind him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps and hopping at once to reach home faster.</p><p><br/></p><p>  All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was very surprised to his uncle right behind him. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior and his uncle advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he won't do this anymore.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The examination was just around the corner, so Ben went to John's house to revise. <strong>He did his revision until late at night </strong>and then waved goodbye to John.</p><p>         <strong>On the way home, </strong>he felt someone following him closely. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps, <strong>hoping to reach at once.</strong></p><p>           All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and was very surprised to see his uncle right behind him. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he wouldn’t do <strong>it again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:28:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zhen Hong corrected</title>
         <author>nickylim22</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/eui609uqjne8fep2/wish/3439969676</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house to do revision. It was late at night after doing revision, he waved goodbye and hurried home.</p><p><br/></p><p>  On the way home, he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage; he quickened his footsteps and hopping at once to reach home faster.</p><p><br/></p><p>  All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. Ben turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. He laughed at his silly behaviour. His uncle advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that next time will not walk home alone.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house to revise. <strong>It was late at night, and after finishing his revision, </strong>he waved goodbye and hurried home.</p><p>        On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footsteps, hoping to get home <strong>at once.</strong></p><p>       Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night.<strong> Ben promised that he wouldn’t make the same mistake again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:28:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Liew Jia Yu corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   The examination is around the corner. Ben head to John's house to do revision. It was late at night after finish his revision,he waved goodbye and walk back home.</p><p><br/></p><p>   On the way home,Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. So; he quickened his footsteps hopping at once to reach home.</p><p><br/></p><p>   All of the sudden, a stranger  patted his shoulder. ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turn around and he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly behaviour and his advised him don't out late at night alone. Ben also promise that he would not do that anymore.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>         The examination was around the corner. Ben headed to John's house<strong> to revise. </strong>It was late at night, and after finishing his revision, he waved goodbye and <strong>walked back home.</strong></p><p>         On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footsteps, <strong>hoping to reach home quickly.</strong></p><p>      All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly behaviour and advised him not to go out late at night alone. Ben<strong> promised t</strong>hat he would not do that anymore.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:29:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Giselle Cham corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The examination was coming soon, Ben went to John home do revision .It was they after doing revision he waved  goodbye .</p><p>       On the way home, he felt someone following him.His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage,he quickened his foot steps at once of home.</p><p>        A stranger patted his shoulder.Ben screamed at the top of his lungs.He turned around is he uncle .his laughed at his silly behaviour.His uncle advised him not  to stay out late at night.Ben promised that not do it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The examination was approaching, so Ben went to John's house to revise. After finishing their revision, he waved goodbye <strong>and headed home.</strong></p><p>        On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart pounded wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps<strong>, eager to get home.</strong></p><p>       Suddenly, a stranger tapped him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around <strong>and was relieved to see his uncle.</strong> His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour <strong>and advised him not to stay out late at night.</strong> Ben promised that he wouldn’t do it again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:30:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Esther corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to his friend house to do revision. It was late at night  after doing revision, he waved goodbye to his friend.</p><p><br/></p><p>    On the way home, he felt someone following him and he heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. Ben quickened his footsteps at once.</p><p>   </p><p>      All or a sudden, stranger patted his shoulder and screamed at the top of his lungs. Ben turned around. He was surprise to see his uncle. His uncle advised him not to stay out late at night.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to his friend's house to revise. It was late at night, and after finishing his revision, he waved goodbye to his friend <strong>and headed home.</strong></p><p>           On the way home, Ben felt someone following him, and his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. <strong>He quickened his footsteps immediately.</strong></p><p>       Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder, and Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and was surprised to see his uncle. <strong>His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben learnt a lesson and  promised he would not do it again. </strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:30:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rou Xuan corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  As the examination was just around the corner, Ben went to John's house to do revision. It was late at night after doing revision, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p><br/></p><p>On the way home,he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps at once to reach home.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Suddenly, the stanger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs for help .When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour. He also advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he would not do it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       As the examination was just around the corner, Ben went to John's house to revise. It was late at night, <strong>and </strong>after finishing his revision, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps<strong>, eager to reach home.</strong></p><p>       Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs for help. When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he wouldn’t do it again.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:30:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>chin hong ze corrected</title>
         <author>m14339563</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house to do some revision. It wasn't. It was late at night, after finished revision, He way goodbye to John.</p><p>           On the way home, Ben felt someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. So, he quickened his footsteps Hoping at once to reach home faster.</p><p>           All of a sudden, a stranger padded his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly behavior, and he advise him don't stay out late at night alone. Ben also promised that he would not do this anymore.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house to do some revision. It was late at night, and after finishing his revision, he waved goodbye to John.</p><p>        On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footsteps, <strong>hoping to reach home faster.</strong></p><p>      All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night alone. <strong>Ben promised that he wouldn’t make the same mistake again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:31:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tan Powell corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The examination was just around the corner. Ben headed to John house to do revision. It was late at night after doing revision, he waved goodbye and hurried home.</p><p><br/></p><p>  When he was on the road of his home, he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, he quickened his footsteps and hoping reach home at once.</p><p><br/></p><p>  All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was surprised, it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay late at night. Ben promised that he never does it again.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>           The examination was just around the corner. Ben headed to John's house<strong> to revise.</strong> It was late at night, and after finishing his revision, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>        As he was walking on the road to his home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart pounded wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps, <strong>hoping to reach home quickly.</strong></p><p>        Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was surprised to see it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben’s silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night. <strong>Ben promised that he would never do it again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:31:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tze Xuan  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>      The examination was just around the corner.</p><p>Ben headed to John's house to do some <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://revision.It">revision.It</a> was late at night after finish revision,he waved goodbye to John.</p><p><br/></p><p>On the way home,Ben felt someone following him.</p><p>His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage.So, he quickened his footsteps anghopping at once to reach home faster.</p><p><br/></p><p>All of sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs.he turned around and he was very surprised to see his uncle.his uncle laughed at Ben's silly behaviour and his advised him don't out late at night alone.</p><p>Ben also promise that he would not do this anymore.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The examination was just around the corner. Ben headed to John's house to do some revision. It was late at night, and <strong>after finishing his revision,</strong> he waved goodbye to John. <strong>He headed home hurriedly.</strong></p><p>     On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, <strong>he quickened his footsteps, hoping to reach the safety of his home as quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>     All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly behaviour and advised him <strong>not to</strong> stay out late at night alone. Ben <strong>promised</strong> that he wouldn’t do<strong> it again.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:35:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alicia Hee corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>      The examination was just around the corner. Ben headed to John's house to do revision. it was late at night after doing revision, he waved to John and hurried home. </p><p>      On the way home, Ben felt like some one following him and his heart was thumping widly against his ribcage, he quickened his footsteps, and hopping to get home at once.</p><p>     Suddenly, the stranger patted his shoulder and he screamed of the top of his lungs. As he turned around, he was supprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his behavior. He advised Ben not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he won't do over again. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>                The examination was just around the corner. Ben headed to John's house to revise. It was late at night, and after finishing his revision, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>         On the way home, Ben felt like someone was following him, and his heart was pounding wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps, hoping to get home<strong> at once.</strong></p><p>         Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder, and Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his reaction and advised him not to stay out late at night.<strong> Ben promised that he wouldn't do it again.</strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:36:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yan Ann corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The examination was just around the corner, Ben went to John house revision. It was late at night after doing revision, he waved goodbye and hurried home. </p><p>  On the way home, he felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, he quickened his footsteps hoping he could go home. </p><p>  Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Be screamed at the top of his lungs. Ben turned around, he suprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour. His uncle advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he will never do it again. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The examination was just around the corner, so Ben went to John’s house to revise. It was late at night,<strong> and after finishing his revision, Ben waved goodbye and made his way home.</strong></p><p>         On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, and he quickened his footsteps, <strong>hoping he could get home at once. </strong>       Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he would never do it again<strong> in the future.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:43:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paris Koh Zi Sum corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The exam is just around the corner, Ben went to John home to do the  revision.Late at night,Ben waved goodbye hasty.</p><p><br/></p><p>            On the way home,Ben felt someone following him.He heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage，he quickrned his footstrps reach home at once.</p><p><br/></p><p>            Suddenly,Ben a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs.He turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. Uncle laughed at his silly behaviour . He uncle advised him not to stay out late at night .Ben also practise that don't stay out late at night .</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The exam was just around the corner, so Ben went to John's house to do some revision. <strong>As it was late at night, Ben waved goodbye hastily and headed home. </strong></p><p><strong>       </strong>On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps, <strong>eager to reach home as quickly as possible</strong>. </p><p>       Suddenly, a stranger patted Ben on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behaviour and advised him not to stay out late at night. <strong>Ben promised that he would remember to stay in when it got late.</strong></p><p>             </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 13:44:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jcelyn corrected</title>
         <author>jcelynyew</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/eui609uqjne8fep2/wish/3440061207</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The examination was just around the  corner .Ben went to John's house for revision until it was late night .He waved goodbye to John .                                                                                                                        On the way home,Ben felt someone  was following him and his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage.Ben quickened his footsteps at once hoping to get home soon.                                                                                Suddenly ,a stranger patted his shoulder.Ben screamed at the top of his <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://lungs.Be">lungs.Be</a>n turned around towards the stranger .To his surprise it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior .His uncle advised him not to stay out late at night .Ben promised that he won't  repeat it again. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     The examination was just around the corner, so Ben went to John's house for revision<strong>, staying there until it was late at night.</strong> He waved goodbye to John <strong>and set off for home hurriedly.</strong></p><p>        On the way home, Ben felt someone following him, and his heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps, <strong>hoping to get home as quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>       Suddenly, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around to face the stranger, and to his surprise, it was his uncle. His uncle laughed at <strong>Ben's startled reaction </strong>and advised him not to stay out late at night. <strong>Once bitten, twice shy , </strong>Ben promised that he <strong>wouldn't make the same mistake again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-07 14:23:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kayson Lau Rui Xuan corrected</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/eui609uqjne8fep2/wish/3441871809</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>     The examination was just around the corner. Ben headed to John's house to do revision. It was late at night after doing revision, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>     On the way home, Ben felt someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. So, he quickened his footsteps hoping reach home at once.</p><p>     All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and he was very surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly behaviour. His uncle advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he would not do this anymore.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>         The examination was just around the corner, so Ben headed to John's house to do some revision. It was late at night, and after finishing his revision, he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage, so he quickened his footsteps, hoping to reach home <strong>as quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>      Suddenly, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. When he turned around, he was very surprised to see his uncle. <strong>His uncle laughed at Ben's startled reaction </strong>and advised him not to stay out late at night. Ben promised that he would<strong> never do it again.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-08 13:24:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tan Yun Xuan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>                     The examination was just around the corner. Ben went to John's house to do revision. It was night late after doing revision, he wave goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p><br/></p><p>                         On the way home, Ben felt someone was following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. So He quickened his footsteps and hoping reach home at once.</p><p><br/></p><p>                            All of a sudden, a stranger patted his shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turn around and he was surprised, it was uncle. His uncle laughed at his silly behavior. His uncle advised him to not stay out late at night.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The examination was just around the corner, so Ben went to John's house to do some revision<strong>. It was late at night, and after finishing his revision, </strong>he waved goodbye to John and hurried home.</p><p>       On the way home, Ben felt someone following him. His heart was thumping wildly against his ribcage. He quickened his footsteps, hoping to reach home<strong> as quickly as possible.</strong></p><p>        Suddenly, a stranger patted him on the shoulder. Ben screamed at the top of his lungs. He turned around and was surprised to see his uncle. His uncle laughed at Ben's silly behaviour<strong> and advised him not to stay out late at night.</strong></p><p><strong>Ben learnt a painful lesson and promised he would heed his uncle's advice. </strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-10 11:48:27 UTC</pubDate>
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