In the second empty scene(9), the bird came in, called twice, echoed, and left.

Create a feeling that although it a same scene, but it’s a little bit not right.

3.Advice for shot4,
the apeman come into cave looking for shelter, scard >look around >(think it’s a perfect shelter)>relief >nervous( someone is getting into the cave)>partner. Turn to shot5

4.Shot 5 to 6

They creating weapons, and use two rocks to kick it together, sparks come out，turn into huge frame，and become smaller turn to shot 6.

5.Shot 6 to 7

They start putting hand on wall, start painting, and when the narrator talk about “just like other livings, they reproduce…”, kids come out, hug, parents becomes bones, kids stand up and become adults.

Shot 7, leaving.

6.Advice for time 

Lighting, Prefer only use the size of the lighting shows the time passing .

Stuff changing, the black stone of the cave, when it goes to time passing part, stone dropping down change a little bit.

Cut the hug part, it will loosing the attention. Changing to one is making the fire (have already have some paint on wall),new one bring a dead animal body in and put down the animal’s body.

Sundown time, turn into evening. 

Evening 

Making fire movements (don’t use rock, drilling wood for fire)

fire on, left painting, right turn his side to wall also painting