IELTS WRITING DAY 5 ADVANCED by Thi Tran Thanh Hien

task 1 (nina)

2021-06-05 12:05:15 UTC

The illustration provides a detailed description about how alumina from bauxite is produced. Overall, the process can be outlined in 2 main steps. The first step describes how they make the bauxite smaller and the second step shows the process of producing alumina.
The production commences when bauxite has been extracted from the mine. After that, the large bauxite balls will be passed through a grinder to be reduced. Then the process will be continued on the conveyor belt until the bauxite is small enough for the second step.
The second step is started when bauxite is small to reach the digester, then the bauxite will be mixed with acid and water and passed through a conveyor belt to filter to reject Bauxite residue. The process continues with trucking the Bauxite remainder to landfills and precipitating the other. Then Alumina sediment is separated and excess water is removed. Afterwards, the sediment is put into a Rotary Kiln, in which it is heated in high temperature to dry out wetness and improve texture. In the end, it becomes Alumina and be packaged for delivery.

Task1: T.An

2021-06-05 12:05:26 UTC

The given diagram illustrates the production of alumina from bauxite.
From an overall perspective, there are 6 main stages involved in the production beginning with crushing the bauxite and finishing with going through high temperature to create alumina.
To begin with, natural bauxite which has been unearthed from mine goes through a crusher and becomes small chunks. In the second stage, the rather large pieces returns to the crusher again. Simultaneously, the small, finer chunks are dropped into a mixture made from acid and water called digester. As the bauxite dissolves, the mixture then goes through a filter, the residue of bauxite then be separated and transported to local landfill. In the subsequent step, the remaining undergo the precipitator to split the alumina sediment, at the same time remove the excess water. Having been segregated, the sediment comes into the rotary klin. Finally, it goes through an evaporation stage and makes an enhancement to the texture.

Task 1 Trong Nhan

2021-06-05 12:05:28 UTC

The figure below depicts the process of manufacturing alumina from bauxite.

The process comprises of several steps, beginning with the collection of bauxite from mines and concluding with the successful production of alumina.

In the first step, bauxite is crushed into small bits by the crusher. The little bits are then mixed with acid and water in the digester, and the remaining large pieces are delivered back to the crusher to be crushed.

In the next step, the freshly created mixture is transferred to the filter to remove to residue. The bauxite residue is segregated and trucked to landfills, while the rest is delivered to the precipitator for the next step. In the precipitator, excess water is removed after separating the alumina sediments.

In the final step, the new nad nearly finished mixture is brought to the rotary kiln to drive to wash off moisture at high temparatures and improve texture. After that, The rotary kiln pumps out a type of material called alumina.

Task 1 (Mavis)

2021-06-05 12:05:34 UTC

The diagram illustrates the process by which alumina is manufactured from bauxite. As can be seen, the production invovles 5 stages starting with Bauxite is being collected from the mine and ending with being turned into Alumina.

The production commences when collecting and transport the Bauxite into factory. After this, those bauxite is put through the machine called crusher and become a mixture of powder and large pieces. Following this step, the large pieces will be returned to crush again until they become powder completely.
Gradually, the powder is mixed with acid and water and the liquid then being moved to the filter to reject Bauxite residue. The process continues with trucking the Bauxite remainder to landfills and precipitating the other. In the next phase of the process, Alumina sediment is seperated and excess water is removed. Afterwards, the sediment is put into a Rotary Kiln, in which it is heated in high temperature to dry out wetness and improve texture. In the end, it became Alumina and be packaged for delivery.

Task 1: Phuong

2021-06-05 12:05:34 UTC

The diagram illustrates the stages in the manufacturing alummina from bauxite. Generally speaking, there are 10 main stages in this linear process, starting with crushing bauxite from mine and ending with becoming alumina.
At the beginning, mines are smashed into small pieces by the crusher. Following this step, the large pieces will be returned to crush again until those become bauxite powder. The process proceeds with digesting which makes it become a mixture of acid and water. At the next phrase of the process, the mixture is moved to filter machine so as to reject bauxite residue. Next, bauxite residue is piled onto trucks to be transported to landfills and preciptated the other. The process continues with sperating and drying alumina sediment due to removing excess water..
Having been removed excess water, alumina sediment is put into a Rotary Kiln where it is heated in high temperature to drive out moisture and and improve texture. In the last stage, it becomes alumina which can be packaged into bag.

task 1 (H.Nhan)

2021-06-05 12:05:36 UTC

The picture illustrates how alumina is produced from bauxite

Overall, the procedure involves seven main steps, beginning with delivering bauxite from mine to the conveyor and finishing with producing alumina.

To begin with, the bauxite from mine goes through two spinal wheels to be crushed into several pieces. The larger of which is transported to the conveyor in order to be crushed the second time. After that, other pieces are digested by acid and water before going to the filter, where the bauxite residue is trucked to landfills.

The process continues with separating alumina sediment and removing excessive water simultaneously from the results of the previous step in precipitator. the process ends with using a high temperature to evaporate moisture and texturing final products, which is alumina.

task 1 (khang)

2021-06-05 12:06:16 UTC

The diagram illustrates how alumina produced from bauxite.

Overall, there are 2 steps in the process of making bauxite powder, while the process of transforming this powder and digester into alumina includes 3 steps .

At the first stage of producing bauxite powder, bauxite from mine is put through the crusher machine and become a mixture with powder and large pieces. Following this step ,large pieces will be returned to crush again until the become bauxite powder.

The first step of making alumina from bauxite powder is combining with different materials. This powder is mixed with acid and water in the digester, after that the liquid is moved to the filter to reject bauxite residue.Then alumina sediment is separated and removed excess water .Next, alumina sediment is put into Rotary Kiln where it is heated with high temperature to drive out moisture and improve texture.Finally, it become alumina.

Task 1 ( Kenny)

2021-06-05 12:06:26 UTC

The picture illustrates the process of obtaining alumina from the bauxite.
Overall, there are 2 phases in total. The first one describes how the ores that are used to acquire alumina is pretreated . The second one depicts the process of getting alumina from the bauxite.
Firstly, bauxite is acquired from the mine and delivered to the factory where it will be treated. The ore is then broken down into smaller pieces by a crusher, after that, they are cleaned in a bath of digester( acid and water).. Moving onto the next phase, the precipitation of the alumina will be taken out by removing the water, but before that, the remnant of the bauxite must be removed. Finally, alumina will be dried by a rotary kiln under high temperature, and the result which is the alumina will be collected and used.

task 2 (nina)

2021-06-05 12:16:57 UTC

In this day and age, many people have argument because of the development of technology. One of the most common issues is that

they are monitored by smart technology such as smartphone, security camera. Like two sides of the same coin, this supervision involves both advantages and disadvantage.
To begin with, one of the biggest disadvantages is that people will not have freedom. Every action they do is monitored. They can not be free to do whatever they like because some technology is recorded and then it is posted in the internet. Besides, some people also maliciously edit clips to make ordinary actions into controversial issues. Sometimes the online community even makes people angry in the clip, causing them stress and can lead to suicide. In addition, this action can cause many people to feel stressed or have psychological problems. They will always feel like someone is watching them. They will have to pay attention to every action, no longer feeling comfortable. For example, there was once a person who was trying to save an animal stuck under the wheel of a bicycle but someone else filmed it and edited it, people misunderstood and condemned the action so that person lived in fear for a while.
On the other hand, this concern also have many advantages. The first things we need to mention is people will feel safer with security cameras. Thieves or bad people won't do anything to they in front of cameras because those cameras are usually monitored by security guards or police. Thus, the security of some countries has also improved more. In addition, people will also strictly obey traffic laws. They will no longer run red lights or drive faster or don't wear helmets in traffic. Besides, base on the technologies that when a case happens, they help a lot for the police to solve the case. They can find out what happened and find the whereabouts of criminals.

In conclusion, although people will feel uncomfortable asking because they will be monitored all day, they will be more protected and the country will be more secure. Therefore in my opinion it will bring more advantages than disadvantages.

Task 2 Trong Nhan

2021-06-05 12:35:04 UTC

In our modern era, it is more commonly believed that technology plays a main role in our everyday life. Some people claimed that this development has opened the door to the ability of technology to monitor what individuals are saying and doing, and this is extremely inconvenient for them. But there are still some go so far as to say that this is actually a benefit, with which I strongly concur.

Firstly, when it comes to using technology as a means to monitor people's activities, many people give convincing arguments to support for their disagreement. Take for instance, they assert that this might have an influence on their privacy in life, of which it is being free to say and do comfortably. Once affected, they might lose their confidence to face judgements. Not only that, being monitored in incrediblly harmful due to the leak of personal information, it might lead to many terrible consequences.

Aside from the negative aspects of monitoring technology, there are indeed benefits which can easily outweigh the drawbacks. First and foremost, and also the prominent function of the monitoring technology, is the protection. For example, against thieves or even the proof to justify that one is innocent, the recordings can really do a favour. It recognises criminals, helping the authorities to apprehend them. Moreover, the journey cameras, which is imposed on automobiles or, in some cases, motorcycles, can keep track of everything that happens as the vehicle moves. Thus, when an accident happens and there is a dispute over who is at fault, the journey camera is always a precise explanation. Last but not least, the voice recorder serves as a method to obtain evidences of bad behaviour, in order to bring them to light.

As illustrated in this essay, there are clearly pertinent reasons to use the monitoring technology as a way of protecting the interests of individuals. Besides that, there are still some harmful intentions when using them, making it a means to work for the bads. Anyhow, it is reasonable and worthwhile to use the monitor technology.

Task 1(Tin)

2021-06-05 12:51:15 UTC

The picture illustrates how Alumina is produced from Bauxite.
There are only two main steps in the process of marking Bauxite powder. Meanwhile, the process of transforming this powder and digester into Alumina includes three steps.
Bauxite from mines is crushed in the first stage of the production of Bauxite powder, resulting in a mixture of powder and large fragments. Following this, the bigger pieces will be crushed again until they are totally transformed into Bauxite powder. The first step in making alumina from bauxite powder is to combine different materials.
In the next phrase, Alumina sediment is separated and become dry because of removing excess water. Next, Alumina sediment is put into a Rotary Kiln where it is heated in high temperature to drive out moisture and improve texture. Finally, it becomes final Alumina and then packing into bags.

Han part 1

2021-06-05 12:52:12 UTC

The picture depicts the process of how alumina is produced from bauxite.

Overall, there are only two main stages in the process beginning with producing bauxit powder and resulting in a mixture of powder and large pieces. Following this, the large pieces will be crushed again until they are completely transformed into bauxite powder.

The first step in producing alumina from bauxite powder is to combine various materials. This powder is combined with acid and water, and the resulting liquid is routed to a machine known as the filter, which rejects bauxite residue. The process of transporting bauxite residues by road to landfills. Next, alumina sediment is put into a rotary kiln where it is heated in high temperature to drive out moisture and improve textture. Finally, it becomes final alumina whic can be packaged into bags.

Task 2 (H.Nhan)

2021-06-05 12:55:35 UTC

TASK 2
In this digital era, our speaking and behavior are recorded and monitored, sometimes, without our permissions. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon and I believe the latter is dominant.

To begin with, the most important benefit is the convenience for companies and customers. For example, some companies are collecting their customer’s data in order to know what kind of products their customers are in need of. Therefore, the companies can advertise their products to the customers and both of their needs are satisfied. Furthermore, in Covid-19 quarantine, monitoring employees is also necessary. Because the employers have to be know how much works is actually going on or the fear of productivity losses and declining profits will be realistic.

On the other hand, recording people without their permissions is another affair, which is literally illegal. Recently, Mark Zuckerberg , the founder of Facebook, met a lawsuit due to being accused of leaking more than half of million user's information. Criminals can use these data to send blackmail threats to any person. Moreover, your banking account, passcode and other identified data are available for everyone. It means that you are facing a threat of losing not only your money but also your private life.

To conclude, I am of opinion that the drawbacks of monitoring people's outweigh the benefits.

thitth01 — 2021-06-05 13:11:05 UTC

to bags. tick GRADE Your avatar Add comment more_vert Han Avatar of anonymous Anonymous 1m Han Part 1 The picture depicts the process of how alumina is produced from bauxite. Overall, there are only two main stages in the process beginning with producing bauxit powder and ending with DELETE APPROVE tick GRADE more_vert Task 2 (Kenny) Avatar of anonymous Anonymous 1m Task 2 (Kenny) DELETE APPROVE tick GRADE more_vert Task 2 (H.Nhan) Avatar of anonymous Anonymous 1m Task 2 (H.Nhan) TASK 2 In this digital era, our speaking and behavior are recorded and monitored, sometimes, without our permissions. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon and I believe the latter is dominant. To begin with, the most important benefit is the convenience for companies and customers. For example, some companies are collecting their customer’s data in order to know what kind of products their customers are in need of. Therefore, the companies can advertise their products to the customers and both of them are satisfied. Furthermore, in Covid-19 quarantine, monitoring employees is also necessary, because the employers have to be know what DELETE APPROVE tick GRADE more_vert Task 2: Phuong Avatar of anonymous Anonymous 1m Task 2: Phuong In this day and age, technlogical devices such as surveillance video or mobile phone are utilised for monittoring public activities. Although some people think such monitoring system may bring some drawbacks, i support the positive side of it. DELETE APPROVE tick GRADE more_vert Task 1 ( Kenny) Avatar of anonymous Anonymous 11m Task 1 ( Kenny) The picture illustrates the process of obtaining alumina from the bauxite. Overall, there are 2 phases in total. The first one describes how the ores that are used to acquire alumina is pretreated . The second one depicts the process of getting alumina from the bauxite. Firstly, bauxite is acquired from the mine and delivered to the factory where it will be treated. The ore is then broken down into smaller pieces by a crusher, after that, they are cleaned in a bath of digester( acid and water).. Moving onto the next phase, the precipitation of the alumina will be taken out by removing the water, but before that, the remnant of the bauxite must be removed. Finally, alumina will be dried by a rotary kiln under high temperature, and the result which is the alumina will be collected and used. tick GRADE 1 comment Avatar of Thi Tran Thanh Hien Thi Tran Thanh Hien 1m kenny oi, is it too short? you can easily explain the overview in two sentences instead. you might want to use the structure we have learn such as having.../being... instead of the same boring structure s+v+o (passive voice) Your avatar Add comment Task1: T.An Avatar of anonymous Anonymous 14m Task1: T.An The given diagram illustrates the production of alumina from bauxite. From an overall perspective, there are 6 main stages involved in the production beginning with crushing the bauxite and finishing with going through high temperature to create alumina. To begin with, natural bauxite which has been unearthed from mine goes through a crusher and becomes small chunks. In the second stage, the rather large pieces returns to the crusher again. Simultaneously, the small, finer chunks are dropped into a mixture made from acid and water called digester. As the bauxite dissolves, the mixture then goes through a filter, the residue of bauxite then be separated and transported to local landfill. In the subsequent step, the remaining undergo the precipitator to split the alumina sediment, at the same time remove the excess water. Having been segregated, the sediment comes into the rotary klin. Finally, it goes through an evaporation stage and makes an enhancement to the texture. tick GRADE 1 comment Avatar of Thi Tran Thanh Hien Thi Tran Thanh Hien 5m you have missed some article such as a digester or a local landfil/ the local landfil. good that you have tried to use some structure we have learnt last week. Your avatar Add comment Task 1 ( Clara ) Avatar of anonymous Anonymous 30m Task 1 ( Clara ) The process illustrates the steps used in the production of manufacturing alumina from bauxite. As can be seen, the process involves 10 stages, beginning with getting the bauxite and ending with using high temperature to receive the products. The production starts when bauxite from mine is collected and then put in the crusher to become pieces. Small pieces are stayed at the digester, which contains acid and water, large pieces are then returned..At the next phase of the process, mixture of crushed bauxite, acid and water are moved to the filter through a pipe. One part of the mixture are then moved to the precipitator, the residue of the bauxite are carried to the landfills. In the precipitator, the alumina sediments are separated and the excess water is removed out of the mixture. The diagram concludes when that mixture is transferred to the rotary kiln with high temperature in order to remove moisture and improve texture. tick GRADE Your avatar Add comment Task 1 (Mavis) Avatar of anonymous Anonymous 1m Task 1 (Mavis) The diagram illustrates the process by which alumina is manufactured from bauxite. As can be seen, the production invovles 5 stages starting with Bauxite is being collected from the mine and ending with being turned into Alumina. The production commences when collecting and transport the Bauxite into factory. After this, those bauxite is put through the machine called crusher and become a mixture of powder and large pieces. Following this step, the large pieces will be returned to crush again until they become powder completely. Gradually, the powder is mixed with acid and water and the liquid then being moved to the filter to reject Bauxite residue. The process continues with trucking the Bauxite remainder to landfills and precipitating the other. In the next phase of the process, Alumina sediment is seperated and excess water is removed. Afterwards, the sediment is put into a Rotary Kiln, in which it is heated in high temperature to dry out wetness and improve texture. In the end, it became Alumina and be packaged for delivery. tick GRADE Your avatar Add comment Task 2 (Mavis) Avatar of anonymous Anonymous 1m