Critique Lesson by Stephany Lazo https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9 What makes the exemplar model, exemplar? Why is the developing example rated a 2? What makes an origami bird a 1? en-us 2019-04-09 20:37:29 UTC 2019-04-13 15:49:08 UTC hello@padlet.com Exemplar https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385337 Looks like sample, all parts developed]]> 2019-04-13 15:44:27 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385337 The small details add to the quality o the bird. https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385386 2019-04-13 15:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385386 Developing https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385414 Create the beak to look like a bird's head]]> 2019-04-13 15:45:15 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385414 clean lines, crisp folds, symmetrical https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385417 2019-04-13 15:45:20 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385417 Details appear to be accurate to the model that is suggested, and all parts of the bird are present. lbr3xx https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385429 2019-04-13 15:45:25 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385429 It lacks detail. The body is too rectangular/long. https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385436 2019-04-13 15:45:33 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385436 more detail than needs improvement jk2an https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385439 2019-04-13 15:45:36 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385439 https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385454 Clean lines, crisp folds, nice symmetry]]> 2019-04-13 15:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385454 Improvement https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385456 Body is evident and constructed.  Would like to see the head and tail to look like a bird

]]> 2019-04-13 15:45:51 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385456 Developing lbr3xx https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385497 This model is almost there! There are only small adjustments needed (like adding a beak to the bird's head) to make this an exemplar model. ]]> 2019-04-13 15:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385497 lacks aerodynamics lhansford https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385500 2019-04-13 15:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385500 https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385510 Take your time when creating the folds]]> 2019-04-13 15:46:35 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385510 It is taking shape. https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385514 2019-04-13 15:46:37 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385514 incorrect folds on the wings https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385529 2019-04-13 15:46:51 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385529 It was done how it should be.. It was defined. https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385533 2019-04-13 15:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385533 https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385566 Needs cleaner lines and folds]]> 2019-04-13 15:47:14 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385566 The clear folds and matching of colors dyeje https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385587 2019-04-13 15:47:37 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385587 I give them credit for trying.. They need to make sure they are following the directions. https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385590 2019-04-13 15:47:40 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385590 Needs Improvement lbr3xx https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385593 You are getting there! Continue your hard work. I suggest that you pay attention to your folds and try to match the colors or directions. The tails, head, and wings need to be folded correctly, but this is something you can easily fix! ]]> 2019-04-13 15:47:43 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385593 Not as clear as the exemplar, however has more folds than the 1. dyeje https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385615 2019-04-13 15:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385615 Looks like a paper airplane, not a bird dyeje https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385660 2019-04-13 15:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/slazo/er9pof4ucgb9/wish/351385660