https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv HONORS 9 MENTOR TEXT DISCUSSION en-us 2017-09-21 19:36:03 UTC 2023-04-30 00:02:21 UTC hello@padlet.com lucask1 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191341817 I hope class is going well!!! ]]> 2017-09-26 16:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191341817 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346081 I learned that writing is a game and you need to write what your teacher is looking for]]> 2017-09-26 16:33:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346081 brueggemannna https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346262 I learned that writing is a game. I learned that you might have to do extra stuff to succeed such as using a thesaurus for writing. ]]> 2017-09-26 16:33:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346262 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346515 2017-09-26 16:34:08 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346515 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346541 I learned that you need to write to where your audience understands it and you need to stay on that topic]]> 2017-09-26 16:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346541 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346707 I learned that the most important thing is to know what audience you are writing to.

]]> 2017-09-26 16:34:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346707 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346804 I'm not good at writing paragraphs or spelling. I'm also not good at transitioning into a new paragraphs. ]]> 2017-09-26 16:34:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191346804 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347074 -carnahannnnnnn]]> 2017-09-26 16:35:16 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347074 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347408 I learned that writing is a game and it is important to know what and who you are writing to.]]> 2017-09-26 16:36:00 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347408 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347498 I learned that you have to know who you're writing to.]]> 2017-09-26 16:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347498 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347669 I need to work on providing examples for ideas that I write about.]]> 2017-09-26 16:36:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347669 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347900 A weakness in my writing is my ability to transition between ideas.]]> 2017-09-26 16:36:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347900 hackneyha https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347935 I learned writing is like a game and to write good, you have to figure out what and who you are writing for.]]> 2017-09-26 16:36:58 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347935 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347958 I need to work on writing because I am very bad at flowing from paragraph to the next. ]]> 2017-09-26 16:37:00 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191347958 brueggemannna https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191349285 I feel like I need to work on the words I use when I write. I also need to work on my introductions.]]> 2017-09-26 16:39:08 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191349285 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191349403 I need to work on repeating myself, because when I read back what I wrote, I notice I repeat myself a lot. I need to learn on how to move to one paragraph to another.]]> 2017-09-26 16:39:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191349403 hackneyha https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191350109 I need to work on citing evidence and the flow of my sentences. ]]> 2017-09-26 16:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191350109 woodallma https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191350652 I learned what bad writing looks like and what not to do. I also learned some useful things i could use in my writing from the good example. ]]> 2017-09-26 16:41:34 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191350652 woodallma https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191351083 I tend to over explain things and as a result my writing seems disorganized. ]]> 2017-09-26 16:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191351083 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191351991 One thing I took away from the examples is that explaining your points thoroughly is very important to your essay.

]]> 2017-09-26 16:44:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191351991 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191352988 A weakness I have with my writing is that I am not very organized or clear with my writing.

]]> 2017-09-26 16:45:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191352988 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191353901 2017-09-26 16:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191353901 taulbeech https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191353962 The thing I took away is that explaining your evidence is key and important.]]> 2017-09-26 16:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191353962 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191354285 taking away making long sentences]]> 2017-09-26 16:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191354285 taulbeech https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191354705 2017-09-26 16:48:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191354705 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191354904 I need to make more paragraphs]]> 2017-09-26 16:48:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191354904 taulbeech https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191356587 My weakness when writing is not explaining very clear and its not usually long enough.]]> 2017-09-26 16:51:54 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191356587 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191371959 One thing that I took away from the lesson Friday was that your essay should have good evidence explaining your ideas.]]> 2017-09-26 17:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191371959 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191375431 A weakness I have is that I struggle with making my paragraphs flow]]> 2017-09-26 17:22:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191375431 perryal2 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191481834 Comment #1:
One thing i learned from this is to explain a lot. Don’t just say one thing and then change the subject without explaining your reason of saying that.]]> 2017-09-26 22:45:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191481834 perryal2 https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191481935 Comment #2:
My area of weakness is finding the info and putting it in the paragraph. Like for example if I had a passage and I had to write an essay about it I get stuck when I have to put abbreviations and citing where i got my info. I usually get that part wrong and i'm working on getting better at it. I like essay better when they ask about you and you don’t need a passage to answer the question.]]> 2017-09-26 22:46:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/eqiqpglg2dlv/wish/191481935