A friend I admire a lot. by José Roberto Salmerón Casco https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy Write a short paragraph describing a friend you admire a lot. Use grammar structures and vocabulary we've studied during the first Didactic Sequence. In addition, use connectors and correct punctuation. en-us 2020-09-10 04:25:34 UTC 2025-12-07 16:01:12 UTC hello@padlet.com My friend https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1099175236 I admire a lot my bestfriend Nicole, she studies veterinary medicine carefully because she works with exotic specie and those species could be scary.
She is brave in her work and easily try to help an any wounded animal, sometimes she sings very well when she's happy and when she's a angry delicately try to steal your food, sometimes when she's playing videogames games she screams angrily when she lose.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.  Just pay attention to some verbs is third person such as "try - tries" - "lose - loses".]]> 2021-01-18 22:20:19 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1099175236 My Sister. https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102283637 The person who I admire so much is my sister Karla. My agreeable sister works so hard as a salesperson because in that way she receives directly the money. When she was younger she used to work and study cheerfully at the same time, no matter how exhausting it went she graduated capably and that is why she inspire me.
Liliana Coreas.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, Liliana.  Well done!]]> 2021-01-19 17:06:46 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102283637 Sofía Menjívar. https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102415037 My admirable person is my Father. He is really smart and he does his work with carefully because he is a Major in one institution and he teaches effortly. I like that he supports me lovely in every responsable decision that i take.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, Sofia.  Just pay attention to some spelling mistakes such as "Major - manager"; "responsable - responsibly".

]]> 2021-01-19 17:30:27 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102415037 My best friend. https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102463851 a person I admire a lot is my friend daniel he is very intelligent, a hard work person also he does his homework very carefully the best as possible and he always get good grades. he is gentle, honest, funny, and he plays soccer very well. i'm glad to have a very good friend like him.
Josue Dominguez.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, Josue. 

Just pay attention to some mistakes related to capitalization in the parts I highlighted.]]> 2021-01-19 17:39:06 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102463851 My best friend https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102553633 my best friend's name is Monica she is an amazing person, she has a great heart,she loves help people, and she is really good listening, also she is very funny. I love her a lot, she means so much to me.
I am very grateful to have her with me, she support me all the time, and I am very sure I will never change her.

Katherine Franco

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, Katherine.  

Just pay attention to some mistakes related to the third person singular such as "support - supports" and pay attentio to include period and capital letter in the parts I highlighted.]]> 2021-01-19 17:55:13 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102553633 My best friend https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102971992 My best friend’s name is Rosario
She is a cool person, she is very intelligent and funny, she sings very well and she dances beautifully also she advises me and she is really sincere. I am very lucky to have such a friend in my life

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.  Well done!]]> 2021-01-19 19:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1102971992 My friend. https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1103653190 My friend his name is Francisco, but his name is potato.  Francisco is 18 years old and a good soccer player.  he's got curly hair and dark. Francisco is cool guy and always work very hard  to archieve her goals and I admire that.

Romel Rodas

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, Romel

Just pay attention to the third person of the verb "work - works" and the work "nickname".

]]> 2021-01-19 22:46:37 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1103653190 https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1103847057 Herber Miranda

I really admire my mom 'cause she is very smart and creativo, she makes me happy everyday, she is a persona who likes work carefully and she put all her love in everything that she do, and I admire that, she teach me a lot of things that only she can do it, I love her so much

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, Herber.

Just pay attention to some spelling mistakes such as "creativo - creative" and some mistakes with the third person singular such as "do - does" and "teach - teaches".]]> 2021-01-20 01:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1103847057 https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1103887358 My best friend
I admire my friend her name is Veronica. She is 23 year old. She is a single mom, she is responsible and very loving, despite the difficulties she continues to give the best to her daughter, but her daughter gets badly because she doesn't have a dad and for her it is very hard to be patient with her because she is very small, but it's very funny and they have a good time together.
Alison Amanda Juárez Estrada.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, Alison.  Just make sure to include period and capital letter on the part I highlighted.
]]> 2021-01-20 01:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1103887358 My best friend Erick. https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1103963724
The person who I admire is my friend Erick, he is an intelligent man whit whom I studied in High School since then we are having an amazing relationship with respect, confidence, and so on.

He studies System Engineer at National University, I could say that he gets my back at any time. Whenever I have problems, I know that he is going to be for me. He has taught me a lot about how to be a better person. By the way, he is good at teaching maths, chemistry, and physics. He cooks extremely well because in his free time he works as a Chef in his mother’s restaurant. We used to hang out constantly but now because of the pandemic; we could not see each other.

Juan Aldana

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, Juan. 

Just pay attention to the spelling in the following word:  "whit" - with".
]]> 2021-01-20 02:39:15 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1103963724 My Best friend https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1106383406 I really admire mi best friend. Her name is Gabriela. She is a good person. She is a student and she works with her mom too. She is very kind and treats people respectfully. She loves animals, specially dogs and rabbits. She means so much to me and I'm grateful to have her in my life.
Abigail Urbina

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, Abigail.  Well done!]]> 2021-01-20 16:03:43 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1106383406 My Best Friend mariajoseduran87777 https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1108257422 I really admire a lot my best friend Daniela Argueta due to the fact that she is such an amazing girl in all the possible ways, she likes to help people, also she has a marvellous heart, she´s such a good English speaker I really admire her skills  in the language.

Moreover she has passed through  hard situations  and she always has been positive and optimist, when I feel blue she is always there for me in order to help me and provide me advices and she always has the perfect words to make me feel better, I don´t have doubts that Daniela is going to be an excellent professional in a future, and I hope she continue being my best friend.

María José Durán Meléndez

Thanks for sharing your paragraph, María José.  Well done!]]> 2021-01-21 02:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1108257422 My best friend. https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1118815679 I have admired my best friend, because he is a good person and he does not stop fighting even if the situation is difficult.  He is a person who has supported me a lot and always encourages me to get ahead, in addition, he is very intelligent and kind.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.  Well done!]]> 2021-01-24 14:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/josesalmeron/eqae6s0e5a3n3ujy/wish/1118815679