[NP = that + S + V]

The main benefit of online learning is its efficiency.

The main benefit of social networking is [that it helps to connect families.]

TOURISM:

• Giải thích/ chứng minh, bình luận, đánh giá, ví dụ

  •  This is because (chỉ ra lí do ...)

  • For example/ instance, Take ABC as an example. Explain

  • like/ such as + NP: tourist destinations like/ such as Tam Dao.

  • including + NP

  • , which led to (the fact that + S+ V) + N/ N phrase (xu hướng nếu trên đã dẫn đến gì)

  
  

• Giới thiệu ý thứ 2 : An additional/ A further/ Another advantage of TOPIC is / concerns/ is associated with NP

In addition, Also,/ Furthermore, S + V (benefit)

Giải thích/ chứng minh, bình luận, đánh giá, ví dụ

• Finally, TOPIC + be + ~ (tính từ tích cực v.v : time-saving/ cost-efficient )

• Giải thích/ chứng minh, bình luận, đánh giá, ví dụ

Another benefit of tourism is the cultural connection with other countries.

Finally, tourism is also good for tourist‘s health.

in addition, tourism earn benefits which can be used to repair heritage sites. as mentioned above benefit, more tourists will visit so increasing profits. for example, Tam Dao in VP very damaged so we can use the tourism industry's profits to repair them

In addition, tourism also contributes to the country's economic growth.

Finally, traveling is an internal healing for each person after a period of hard work.

For example , when a country concentrates on tourism and attracting tourists, ITS TOURIST DESTINATIONS MAY gain high profit and become more popular . THE More tourist destinations THERE are , THE more JOB OPPORTUNITIES (there are for local people), which led to a reduction in the rate of unemployment. Another advantage of tourism is RELATED TO environmental PROTECTION protecting .

In addition,tourism helps people to relax and entertain. after stressed working and studying day.

Finally, tourism improves connection between people and nations.

For the industry, ....

For the tourist, ...

This is because of the demand.By taking a holiday can basiclly benefit a person quality of life. While different people have many different ideas of what make a good holiday

In addition tourism provides the opportunity for escapism. Escapism can be good for the mind. It can help you to relax, which in turn often helps you to be more productive in the workplace and in every day life. This is another way that the importance of tourism industry is demonstrated by this.

For example, in Vietnam, there is a movement to travel for ""healing"". There is even information that pregnant mothers who follow this trend can easily give birth because they reduce pressure on their minds.

However, everything has two sides. Currently, the keyword "healing" is popular, many pregnant mothers also "follow this trend" in many different ways. Actually, healing wounds during pregnancy is not bad at all. During the difficult period of moving and participating in other activities, if not carefully prepared, it will be very dangerous and can affect mother and child.

All of that example proves that traveling has negative impact in terms of intelligent thinking. Tourists will relax and not care about their current situation.

This is because tourism increases the economy significantly and helps create more employment opportunities. People are always need as tour guides, booking agents, hotel and restaurant staff, transportation personnel, etc. So tourism has huge benefits to bring to the table for any country and its local population. 

Another advantage of tourism is that it helps to boost the nation's economy.

However, tourism has negative impactS on the environment such as air pollution, water pollution or destroy the living environment of animals.  For instance, in Ha Long, visitors leave litter in the beaches causing a lot of garbage floating on the sea. In addition, LOCAL citizen’s life is affected seriously by tourists activities. Many residents can’t rest and work because of noise and pollution.

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Additional disadvantages OF tourism concerns are increasing social problems. For example, the number of arrivals raises the number of people in area, which that causes traffic jams and social vices.

finally, traveling is one notable issue