https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-10-04 14:45:35 UTC 2022-04-27 11:21:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f47d.png Emmmmmmmmmmm https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/1793966185 One thing I like is how honest you were with your peers. I also loved how you described camping. But the one wish I have is that you check your grammar. :)]]> 2021-10-05 17:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/1793966185 https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/1797359431 Something I really liked was the way you described the fact your mom tries to make you eat strawberries. This made me laugh because of the way you described the fact that she does that. I also like the part where you say you're lazy! I like how honest you are with your writing. One thing I would suggest is to look at the grammar and to explain more things about your likes and dislikes. In other hand, I love you piece!]]> 2021-10-06 17:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/1797359431 https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/1920766031 I thought it was amazing! I loved how you chose Mickey as the moment. I thought you described how he felt really well. I should know I take him out of his cage literally every time I come to your hows. Your figurative lsnguage was very good. Thw way yiou  described the rocks so vividly way great two. However I think you couls hgave narrowd i  t down to a smaller moment. ]]> 2021-11-30 16:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/1920766031 28abogdan https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/1923034206 2021-12-01 15:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/1923034206 https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/2081958943 hi, Katie! I think your essay is really good. I especially like all the descriptive words you use. I also really like how you said the teenage boy's heart was beating as fast as a cheetah after eating. However, make sure you leave a space after you put punctuation.

]]> 2022-03-07 15:50:57 UTC https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/2081958943 28zzikas https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/2156742619 Hello Katie, I think that the descriptive words you used were very good and creative. I also love the name “My Spicy Chicken Didn’t End Well” . I think that is a suitable name for your story that really works to make the reader wanna read it. However I think you could do better with spelling and grammar. For example instead of saying “Sundays are a special day for me and my son’s special day together.” You could simply say “Sundays are a special day for me and my son to be together!” Other than that I love your story!]]> 2022-04-25 15:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/2156742619 https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/2160190048 Hi Katie. A strength in your writing is the way you used details in the beginning of your story. (I would always stay home with my son and cook at home on sundays”. In addition, I like how you explained why Sundays are special. However, a suggestion is you could explain what you do on Sundays to give more detail on that section of your story.]]> 2022-04-27 11:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/28khansen/en75o1tlokap8l2w/wish/2160190048