Ashley p'sRemake of (Model) Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Ashley Pimentel https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC 2023-06-21 01:20:42 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260470 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260470 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260471 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260471 30 Basic Human Rights 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260472 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260472 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260476 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260476 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260477 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260477 Rough Draft 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260478 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260478 Final Draft 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260480 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260480 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260481 My story will be in 3rd person so the narrator is telling the story. I want the reader to see everything that is happening and will happen.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260481 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260483 My story takes place in a country where if you are born with a defect such as hearing loss or autisim you are irrelveant. You are not allowed to get education or a proper home , as a rule you must become a servant or slave . Once they find out you have some type of defect you are sent to a repairment camp were they take your defect away and consentitely remind that when you are with defect you are worthless and useless. if you can afford it, of not you are taken away to the richer were you become a slave for them.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260483 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260484 Syntheia ~ a young girl with hearing loss.
~She strives for a better future
~Once the authorties find out about her defect they take  her away from her family
~Once she finds out how hard life is for those who have impermants she decideds to make a change.
another chrachter is Drew~ Drew is syntheias bestfreind.
~Drew unlike synthia has no "defects"
~ But he doesn't want to see other people suffer like he had before until his wealthy family fixed his impared leg.
~Larrisa is the leader of this unfair society
~Larrisa is afriad that those whon aren't impaired will not have jobs if those who are impared do.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260484 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260485 The problems they encounter are that Syntheia wants to become more than a servant.s  She doesn't want others feeling like she does hearing everyone telling her shes useless. ]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260485 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260486 They solve their conflict by showing everyone that those who are impared can do the same job as them. They create art others music.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260486 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260487 Syenthiea is soon ]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260487 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260488 The most exciting part of the story is when syntheia gives out an isprinational speceh and shows everyone that they are all equal no matter what as she paints a mural with various paintings of everyone with the same thing in all a heart.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260488 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260489                       The theme I want to deliver is that we are all equal and we all deserve the same treatment.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260489 Due Dates 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260491 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260491 Prompt 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260492 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260492 Theo's Song 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260493 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260493 Rubric 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260494 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260494 Point of View 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260495               The point of veiew is from theo which  is 3rd person because the narrator is not involved in the story and there is no "I" or "me". ]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260495 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260496
setting in theos song is the community.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260496 Characters 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260497 The charcheters in Theos song are Theo,Nemma, The authorties,and the decider.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260497 Conflict 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260499 The conflict in the story is that many people like theo were getting jobs they didn't want ,they were unhappy and wanted jobs they actuttaly liked. ]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260499 Plot: Sequential 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260500 Event # When Theo turns 13 he is assigned to be a black smith to the community and abanndons the nursery.
Event #: Theo did not like the job he had been assigned he thought it was cruel and he was unhappy .
Event #: Theo had soft delicate hands he liked to sing that is what he wanted to do instead of a blacksmith.   Nemma told Theo that they chose the oppistie  so they would be unhappy and able to control                        
Event #: Theo soon afterwards decided to make a change for himself and soceity.
Event # (Climax): Theo sings a song even though he's not suppoused to and they join in rebellion.
Event #: people joined in the singing the and Theo got introuble amd wasn't permitted to talk for a whole month.
Event #: Nemma sang the song in rebellion and many other joined in rebellion.
Event #(Resolution): They are now able to chose the jobs they want in the community.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260500 Theme 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260501 The theme is that when we all work together great things can happen and big changes.]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260501 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260503 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. ]]> 2017-12-14 17:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/216260503 Prompt 201000356 https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/217038922 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-18 17:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/201000356/ema94cypqrgc/wish/217038922