Elise L. Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Elise Leon https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC 2024-06-18 09:25:51 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972775 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972775 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972776 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972776 30 Basic Human Rights 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972778 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972778 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972779 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972779 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972780 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972780 Rough Draft 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972781 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972781 Final Draft 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972782 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972782 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972783 The person telling my story is third person view and their name is Savannah.]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972783 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972784 My story takes place in the summer of 2017 at Beverly hills. What  makes it unjust is that there is a racist person that is not allowing certain people geit hired at her clothing store.]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972784 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972785 My characters are
The Boss at clothing store: Veronica
The girl looking for a summer job: Savannah
Savannah's best friend: Vanessa 
Savannah's boyfriend: Jake
Savannah's mom: LIzzy
Savannah's dad: Larry]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972785 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972786 The problem is that the boss won't hire Savannah because she is Mexican and she really wants to be a clothes designer. ]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972786 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972787 They resolve their conflict by getting Michell Obama to show a difference that everyone should be allowed to do anything.]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972787 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972789 My characters grow by being kind to everyone and by the world being better then it was before.]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972789 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972790 The most exciting moment is that savannah gets to work at the clothing store and owns it now.]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972790 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972791 In want my readers to know that just being a different doesn't mean anything.]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972791 Due Dates 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972792 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972792 Prompt 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972793 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972793 Theo's Song 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972794 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972794 Rubric 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972795 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972795 Point of View 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972796 The point of view is third person.]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972796 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972798 It makes it an unjust society by not being able to pick your job and it has to do with freedom.]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972798 Characters 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972799 The characters are Theo, Neema, decider, ]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972799 Conflict 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972801 The conflict is that Theo wanted to be a song writer but the government made him a black smith ]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972801 Plot: Sequential 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972802 Event #:Black smiths were working in a smithy
Event #:Theo tells the decider he wants to be a song writer so the decider told him he was a black smith
Event # (Climax):Theo decides to sing his song and the black smiths join him.
Event #: The authorities catch Theo singing and they suspend him from speaking and singing.
Event #:Neema gets mad by whats happens and takes a stand.
Event #(Resolution): The government realizes that they can't force people to work at jobs that they don't want to do. ]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972802 Theme 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972803 The theme is to go with what you want to do and great things will come.]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972803 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972804 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 

I think what its like to live in a unjust society is trapped because you can't do what you want. ]]> 2017-12-13 20:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/215972804 Plot Diagram Example 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/217071336 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 19:06:52 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/217071336 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200702003 https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/217071478 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 19:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/200702003/elecx4t8ilel/wish/217071478