OT Research Project Thesis Statements by Candace Brown https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np English 2 2021 en-us 2022-04-14 04:17:40 UTC 2022-05-12 04:48:07 UTC hello@padlet.com How do the strategies used to propel this social movement mimic or imitate the strategies used by Charles Dickens in Oliver Twist? (Consider Pathos, Sarcasm, Symbolism, Juxtaposition, Imagery, Hyperbole, etc.) https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2144652371 Write something incredible...]]> 2022-04-15 04:55:30 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2144652371 I am studying the pro-choice movement because I want to find out if both OT and the pro-choice movement use personal narratives to promote social justice. rodriguezs37 https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2144691490 Good start! What's a term you can use to describe using  "personal stories"? Would that be a type of rhetoric or something else? Then, rewrite it as a statement.]]> 2022-04-15 06:01:38 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2144691490 With children coming from backgrounds of low-income and restricted from the opportunity of accessing education, the global education movement utilizes irony to provoke sympathy from the population, paralleling Charles Dickens' strategy of calling out on the ironic justice system in Oliver Twist. https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2144698930 Nice! I dig you using irony, but the fact that you're talking about Dickens calling out the justice system makes me think you mean "satire" instead. One point of critique: don't use "utilizes." It's fluffy (verbose). Just say "uses." :)]]> 2022-04-15 06:13:13 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2144698930 With so many people unaware of slavery's ongoing existence in the world today, the End It Movement aims to bring awareness towards child trafficking to the world by appealing to people's emotions, which is similar to Charles Dickens use of pathos when writing Oliver Twist, in which his aim was to advocate for the poor. https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2155307459 I would take out the first phrase, correct the grammar (toward), and check the why. Does the movement just want to "bring awareness"?]]> 2022-04-24 14:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2155307459 The global education movement uses satire to provoke sympathy from the population, paralleling Charles Dickens' use of satire in Oliver Twist. https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157790494 The first phrase is good for your introductory paragraph, but you don't need it in your thesis. The rest is great! ]]> 2022-04-26 03:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157790494 The Global Citizen movement emphasizes this issue with pathos writing as well as ethos similarly to Charles Dicken's book "Oliver Twist". The Global Citizen movement emphasizes the issue of poverty especially in times of the epidemic and hopes to advocate for everyone in need but especially for those that have critical health needs but don't have the appropriate funding to receive medical attention. https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157790922 I think the percentage is good, but it's not a piece of your thesis statement; it'll also need a source. :) As for the thesis, does the movement "emphasize the issue"? Why are they drawing attention to it? ]]> 2022-04-26 03:50:12 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157790922 Dicken’s emphasis on poor education in Oliver Twist collates with our path to recovery today to achieve global education. https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157796664 Collates doesn't really work here (collate's connotation is really more about page arrangement than it is about physical colliding or combining. Also, it's not OUR path to recovery as you and I are not actively working to achieve global education. Name your movement there. ]]> 2022-04-26 03:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157796664 The #enditmovement is a leading campaign around the world who are fighting for freedom, while bring awareness, prevention, rescue, and restoration to communities across the nation. I am studying it because I think Dickens uses a strong sense of Pathos regarding the issue of human trafficking https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157800610 The first phrase is good support for your introductory paragraph, but it's not your thesis. Your thesis is saying how both the movement and Dickens use pathos. ]]> 2022-04-26 04:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157800610 The End It Movement fights for people's freedom trapped in slavery by appealing to people's emotions, similar to how Charles Dickens used pathos when writing Oliver Twist to bring awareness to poverty. https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157802124 GREAT. :D ]]> 2022-04-26 04:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2157802124 The Innocent Project fights to exonerate the innocent by using pathos, like how Charles Dickens called for reforming the corrupted justice system by evoking the reader's feelings in Oliver Twist. https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2160621047 Remember to make your thesis parallel; consider using "pathos" instead of "the reader's feelings"]]> 2022-04-27 15:39:04 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2160621047 The Girls not Brides community posts interviews of girls who were forced to marry as a child and people who supports the Girls not Brides program ideas, writes quotes about local people trying to stop child marriage, and shows organizations they have in different countries for the purpose of bringing out empathy from others. This is similar to How Charles Dicken uses pathos on Nancy from Oliver Twist, the girl who got into an abusive relationship in her early years, to bring out people’s empathy for her. hsuc24 https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2161564639 2022-04-28 05:02:41 UTC https://padlet.com/brownca15/el2cdkofdv3t51np/wish/2161564639