Scarlett C.'s Narrative writing: My unjust society by Scarlett Contreras https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC 2026-01-13 01:09:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888663 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888663 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888664 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888664 30 Basic Human Rights 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888665 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888665 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888666 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888666 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888669 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888669 Rough Draft 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888671 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888671 Final Draft 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888673 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888673 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888675 in my story the boy,the main character, is telling the story]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888675 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888676 My story takes place in a town surrounded by walls being isolated to everything around them and are convinced to believe that everything around them is bad,]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888676 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888678 My first character is Arwin Ackerman
- he is very shy and not very outgoing
- He's best friends with Eric 
- He is currently 12 and soon to be 13
My other character is Eric yeager
- unlike Arwin he is very outgoing
- he isn the brightest person
- Him and Arwin have the same birthday and are both turning 13
The deciders
- control who has to go out
- enforce the rules]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888678 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888680 The society is forced to send out three teams that consist of 7 people. The deciders are the ones who choose who goes outside the wall. The way they choose is by test, twice a year,in the beginning and end, 13-17 year olds must take a test and depending on what they score they are either safe or in danger. Teens with high test scores stay inside the walls,and teens with low test scores must go out and fight. The main problem is mostly the fact that Eric is chosen to go on team 5 and go out and fight,and Arwin stays and he wants to help protect Eric]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888680 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888681 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888681 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888682 Arwin starts off being very shy and quiet in the start of the story and later after he realizes how he needs to stand up]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888682 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888683 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888683 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888684 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888684 Due Dates 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888685 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888685 Prompt 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888686 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888686 Theo's Song 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888688 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888688 Rubric 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888690 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888690 Point of View 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888691 In the story the narrator is explaining what is going on so it would be 3rd person view because the narrator is not in the story]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888691 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888692 This society is unjust because people around the world have the right to choose their career most of the time and in the story the government is choosing the jobs for people,and they're choosing jobs that the people don't want and are miserable.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888692 Characters 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888693 The characters in the story are Neema Theo and the government]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888693 Conflict 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888694 People are being assigned jobs that they don't want ]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888694 Plot: Sequential 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888695 Event #1: We learn that the black smiths are working in the smithy,which tells us the setting
Event #2: Theo becomes a blacksmith at the age of 13 because of the government
Event #3: Theo meets Neema at work and she explains 
Event #4: Theo gets taken into the interview room after the authorities find him singing at work
Event #5 (Climax): While Theo is in the interview room an authority comes in and places a string around Theos neck
Event #6: The man tells Theo he wont be able to speak or sing for one month
Event #7:Neema takes a stan and sings the same song Theo was singing and the blacksmiths began to join in aswell
Event #8(Resolution): The government realized that they couldn't stop people so,they gave up and let people choose their jobs.]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888695 Theme 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888697 I think the theme could be that you cant let people control you because at first Theo was a blacksmith but changed things and he ended up becoming a musician]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888697 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888698 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 
Living in an unjustice society ]]> 2017-12-13 17:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/215888698 Plot Diagram Example 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/217023299 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/217023299 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200900853 https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/217025007 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:08:45 UTC https://padlet.com/200900853/ek4dcpbt7t9b/wish/217025007