LMS 7 (2) Jay Hour Parent Feedback- by usamimi74 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1 en-us 2016-04-15 16:24:31 UTC 2016-04-27 01:01:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.storage.googleapis.com/portrait/smiley.jpg Student Name usamimi74 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106054568 Parent Name

Feedback and comments]]> 2016-04-15 16:26:04 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106054568 Hailey Smyly https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106188463 Kim Smyly
1. She knew her subject very well, She told me a story instead of just reading from her slides , And she was excited.

2.Her slides need to be polished and she needs to rework the last slide.

3.I loved her researched.]]> 2016-04-17 18:17:10 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106188463 Alexis Huffman ahuf9462 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106211214 Sheila Huffman

!.) I liked how many facts and information she had to back up her reasoning

2.) She did have a few spelling mistakes 

3.) She had some great pictures to go along with her information]]> 2016-04-18 01:37:00 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106211214 Delaney Harmon dhar1560 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106212673 Melissa Duffett

3 things Delaney did well:

1.  She provided a lot of background information on the topic of TB.
2.  She definitely understands the disease and the concept of strains of disease.
3.  She had a well thought out essential question and answered that question throughout the presentation.

Two things Delaney could improve on:
1. Delaney needs to proofread all of her slides.
2.  She needs to work on not writing run-on sentences; she needs to break up her ideas.

One thing I loved about the presentation:
1.  I am always impressed by Delaney's writing style.  It is much more advanced than most students her age.]]> 2016-04-18 02:00:50 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106212673 Emily Valentine https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106274881 Renee Valentine
1.  She had an interesting topic.
2.  She provided good research data.
3.  She information was presented in an appropriate manner that engaged the audience.
4.  She had a few spelling mistakes.]]> 2016-04-18 11:48:50 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106274881 Ty Kuehl https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106412038 Kristie Kuehl

1. I could tell that Ty was interested in his topic.  I also enjoyed hearing his ideas on how to improve safety.  Lastly, I think that presentation was well thought out. 

2. I think Ty needs to add a conclusion slide. Also, he needs to correct some grammatical errors on his slides.

3. I love that Ty was open to ideas to improve his presentation and worked hard to make it better.]]> 2016-04-18 20:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106412038 Parker McGee https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106656652 Sherri McGee
3 Things he did well:
1. I thought the pictures went well pages.
2. The facts used were relevant to the topic.
3. Did a good job promoting people to take action on keeping lakes clean.

2 Things to improve on
1. Although most slides had good use of bullet points, some slides had too much information on them.
2. Make sure to check spelling and punctuation. 

1 Thing I loved
1. The use of pictures really got the point across, and were used very wisely. ]]> 2016-04-19 21:47:30 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/106656652 Catherine Duncan cdun6204 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107125689 Carrie Duncan

3 Things she did well:
1. Nice pictures
2. Interesting topic
3. Good list of resources

2 Things to improve on:
1. Spelling mistakes
2. Capitalization issues

1 Thing I loved
1. Great picture of our sweet Maggie!]]> 2016-04-21 22:24:41 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107125689 Connor Johnson https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107142833 Elsa Johnson

3 Things Connor Did well:
1.The Pictures are a good part of the presentation.
2.He give out good positive points on his topic.
3.Connor give good benefits of some video games.
2 Things Connor Should Improve on:
1.Make sure to check spelling.
2.Add more pictures about the main topic.
1 Thing I Love:
1.I love that he picked Simcity for his presentation. ]]> 2016-04-22 02:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107142833 Theresa Sudholt https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107148454 Shannon Sudholt

3 things she did well:
1.  Lots of things to think about.
2.  Pictures really supported the topics.
3.  Interesting topic.

Things to improve on:
1.   Double check grammar.
2.  Watch spacing on the slides.

1 thing I loved
1.  How passionate Theresa is about the topic.]]> 2016-04-22 03:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107148454 Kyler Williams kwil1597 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107321300 Amanda Williams 
3 things Kyler did well:

1.  He spoke very clearly. 
2. There was lots of info.
3. I like that he had citations. 

Things that can be improved:
1. There background could have been more interesting. 
2.  Also it was quite dull.
Something I loved:
1. I loved all of the videos and images. 

]]> 2016-04-22 19:50:13 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107321300 Olivia Centa ocen5821 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107436242 Nicole Centa

1.)  It was a very different presentation format, The pictures went well with information, the pictures helped me understand what she was talking about
2.) She needed to fix some mistakes, work on fast speaking
3.) She seems ver happy about this subject]]> 2016-04-25 01:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107436242 Caden Murphy https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107619849 Chris Murphy

1. It was a very interesting
topic.
2. He had a lot of research on each slide.
3. He had good pictures that matched what he was talking about.]]> 2016-04-25 18:14:10 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107619849 Caden Krutsinger ckru4304 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107621588 3 things good:
  • Diagrams are very insightful
  • Information that it is everywhere not just in specific areas
  • I think it is a great idea to ensure that every area has plenty of bug repellent
2 things bad:
  • Description of the virus needs simplified.
  • On the last section i could not tell if that was left blank because it will be a question during the presentation or if this would be filled in.
1 thing to work on:
  • Wording of sentences.  Some seem a little contradicting.
]]> 2016-04-25 18:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107621588 Zach Smith https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107621816 Andrew smith

3 Things he did well:
1. Nice pictures
2. Interesting topic
3. Good list of resources

2 Things to that were bad:
1. Spelling mistakes
2. Capitalization issues

1 Thing to improve on was: 
1. looking at the people when he talks]]> 2016-04-25 18:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107621816 Cooper Phipps https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107629088 Holly Phipps 
1.He had a bad problem as a topic which needs to be solved.
2.He had lots of good info and good websites to research from.
3.He Seemed very into his topic.
1. Needs to work on speaking louder.
2. Needs to work on being more enthusiastic.
3. and needs to work on some spelling not much]]> 2016-04-25 18:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107629088 Sofie Howard show2351 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107655382 Heather Howard

3 things she did well:Information provided was very clear and understandable. Lots of info provided - very thorough. Good citation of sources

2 things to improve on:
Maybe add a picture to the web pages to make it a little more visually appealing. Nothing else I can think of. 

1 thing I loved:I loved the forms! Very impressive!!]]> 2016-04-25 20:54:28 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107655382 Lily Finkey https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107908369 Gwyn Gaither
Three things done well:
1.  She presented her presentation like she was well informed.
2. The topic chosen is one that many people are passionate about.
3. Grammar in presentation.

Two things to improve:
1. More graphics and/or pictures.
2. She could be more clear or more forthcoming with information. i.e. More clarity on what neglect is, ect.

One Thing I loved: 
1. Her advice and suggestions on how to help prevent future cruelty.]]> 2016-04-26 23:01:17 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/eisq19y9vps1/wish/107908369