1NT Elm Narrative Writing by Pathlight School Sec EL (EXP) https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative Made with wonder en-us 2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC 2024-05-23 15:09:44 UTC hello@padlet.com Plan the story outline pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732967 Based on the worksheet given to you, describe the sequence of events. 

1) Introduction
2) Events
3) Climax
4) Conclusion]]> 2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732967 Ms Ingrid pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732969 1) Introduction:
I met my friends at Vivo City and we took the monorail to Sentosa.

2) Events:
When I was Sentosa, we went cycling around the island. We watched a free "Animal Encounters" show.

3) The most exciting event when we saw the Merlion because it was very big and colourful and could shoot lasers.

4) The story concludes with all of us going home and we agreed that we wanted to go back to Sentosa again.]]> 2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732969 Address the bullet points pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732971 Write down your answers to the following points:

  • when and why your friends visited Sentosa
  • what activities you participated in
  • what your friends enjoyed most about the visit
  • why you will want to go back there again
]]> 2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732971 Ms Ingrid pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732974 - September holidays; enjoy yourselves, take a break from studying
- animal show, cycling and Merlion]]> 2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732974 Recall pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732975 Remember that we are doing narrative writing and describing events.

We need to write in 1st person and past tense. Remember to use "I" and "We" to write your sentences. You can also use noun phrases.]]> 2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732975 Ms Ingrid pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732976 Text type: Narrative
P:
A:
C: ]]> 2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732976 Guided Writing pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732978 We will now write your narrative, one paragraph at a time.]]> 2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732978 Paragraph 1: Introduction pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732979
  • Introduce the 5W1H
  • Describe what happened before the first activity
  • How did you get to Sentosa? 
    • ]]>     2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732979     Paragraph 2 pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732980 Describe the first event:
    • what you did, 
    • what you saw, 
    • how you felt 
    ]]>     2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732980     Paragraph 3 pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732981 Describe the second event:
    • what you did, 
    • what you saw, 
    • how you felt 
    ]]>     2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732981     Paragraph 4 pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732982 Describe the third event:
    • what you did, 
    • what you saw, 
    • how you felt 

    This is activity you enjoyed most.
    • explain why you and your friends enjoyed this most
    ]]>     2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732982     Paragraph 5 pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732983
  • What happened at the end of the visit to Sentosa?
  • Why do you want to go back again? 
    • ]]>     2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732983     Paragraph 1 pathlightelexp https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732986 During the September holidays, my friends and I met at Vivo City to take the Sentosa Express monorail to visit Sentosa. We went there because we wanted to enjoy the sun and spend time together. It was our first chance to take a break from studying.]]> 2020-08-24 01:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693732986 Paragraph 1 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693886101 The day dawned crystal clear and glorious on the 17 September .I got ready in the speed of lightning and took MRT to Sentosa.This is because, my friends Tom and Ben and I planned to go to Sentosa for a break after studying
        ]]>     2020-08-24 03:40:53 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693886101     Kendrick https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693886369 Text type: Narrative 
    P: Purpose 
    A: Audience
    C: Context]]>     2020-08-24 03:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693886369     Paragraph 1 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693886729 On 7 September, Peter, Mary and I  went to Sentosa to bond with them. We visited the Sentosa Merlion and we took a great photo together. ]]> 2020-08-24 03:41:35 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693886729 Paragraph 1 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693887064 During the September holidays, my friends, Darius and Dylan, and I went to Sentosa for staycation at the Hard Rock Hotel from 7 September to 9 September to take a break from studying. We took train together starting from King Albert Park to buy chocolate cakes for us to eat.]]> 2020-08-24 03:41:58 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693887064 Darius https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693887986 Text type: Narrative
    P: Purpose
    A: Audience
    C: Context]]>     2020-08-24 03:43:01 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693887986     Javier Wan https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693889459 P:purpose 
    A:audience 
    C:context ]]>     2020-08-24 03:44:40 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693889459     Kendrick https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693889577 -June or November holidays; enjoy yourselves, take an epic adventure of Sentosa.
    -By looking at the beach , event show , aquarium , taking a bath and more.]]>     2020-08-24 03:44:49 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693889577     Javier Wan https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693893093 Because it is so fun and I went there a lot of times ]]> 2020-08-24 03:48:50 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693893093 Darius https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693896417 I can’t remember when. Maybe a few years/days back.

     I visited Sentosa because it has a lot of fun activities to take part in.]]>     2020-08-24 03:52:12 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693896417     Paragraph 2 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693897569 When I reached my destination at Sentosa , I spotted  my friends waiting for me at the bench.By the time they spotted  me, we started to explore around Sentosa.We first started to visit the Animal Encounters where we got to interact with monkeys, amazing reptiles and colourful parrots.]]> 2020-08-24 03:53:23 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/693897569 Kendrick https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/696445626 1. I]]> 2020-08-25 03:18:36 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/696445626 Paragraph 2 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707859748  When we were at Sentosa, we also went to animal encounters to interact with the monkeys and parrots. Peter took out his phone to take photos of them. After that, we took a tram to Palawan beach to play with sandcastles. ]]> 2020-08-31 03:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707859748 Kieran https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707860047 We went to MacDonald ]]> 2020-08-31 03:03:28 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707860047 Intro https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707860127 During the September holidays, I visited Sentosa with my friends. Let me share my experience there.]]> 2020-08-31 03:03:33 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707860127 Paragraph 1 (not based on a true story) https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707860400 Last year, my family and I went on to Sentosa after the final semesters exams. We went there by taking the metro]]> 2020-08-31 03:03:48 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707860400 Kendrick Paragraph 1 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707861174 Last September holidays, I went to Sentosa with my friends Kent, Joshua and Charles.We went there because we enjoy the Nature, Cycling and visiting the Merlion last year.


    ]]>     2020-08-31 03:04:31 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707861174     Kieran https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707862007 I didn’t go to Sentosa in 2020

    ]]>     2020-08-31 03:05:21 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707862007     Eshmael https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707863762 P: Purpose 
    A: Audience 
    C: Context]]>     2020-08-31 03:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707863762     Kieran https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707863835 Only from 2017 to 2018]]> 2020-08-31 03:06:47 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707863835 Javier Wan https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707864421 1) my family and I went to Sentosa for a visit during the weekends 
    2) me and my family went in my father’s car and drove to Sentosa.
    3) after we reached Sentosa,we parked our car and went to see the view of it.
    4) after we looked at the view, it was time to go home so we went back to our car and drove back home. It was a pleasant and enjoyable trip.]]>     2020-08-31 03:07:18 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707864421     Paragraph 1 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707865123 My friends and I  visited Sentosa during the September holidays and it is because it is a place of fun with three activities over there.]]> 2020-08-31 03:07:54 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707865123 Kieran https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707866771 When the first time going to Sentosa, it was so fun]]> 2020-08-31 03:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707866771 Dylan Yeo edwardheng210 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707872933 P: Purpose
    A: Audience
    C: Context]]>     2020-08-31 03:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707872933     Paragraph 2 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707876288 After we get there and we first go to the aquarium, we saw some sea creatures like octopuses and squids. They look like they will be in my plate anytime soon. We also see some fishes like salmons and sea bass. And then we went to the Merlion to take a view of Sentosa, it was beautiful, but scorching hot at the same time.]]> 2020-08-31 03:17:14 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707876288 ... https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707879785 2020-08-31 03:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707879785 Kendrick Paragraph 2 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707879810 I visited the GOGREEN CYCLE and SENTOSA MERLION. We took a leisurely cycle around Sentosa to explore its numerous attractions with one of Gogreen Cycle’s rental bikes. We were visiting its most famous, 37-metre tall Sentosa Merlion.]]> 2020-08-31 03:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707879810 Not real at all https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707880182 Paragraph 1

    During the September holidays, my friends 😠 and I went to the 

    Sentosa aquarium. We went there by the MRT. We went there because 

    we wanted to take a break from studying for a day.]]>     2020-08-31 03:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707880182     Paragraph 2 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707883607 My friends and I first participated in  animal encounters, which we interacted with monkeys, amazing reptiles and colourful parrots at the Palawan Amphitheater. Second is the gogreen cycle, where we collected our bikes at the bike rental at the ticketing counter at Beach Station and went for a leisurely cycle around Sentosa with our cycling map and navigation via dedicated bicycle tracks. Lastly, we ended off with a view of the Sentosa Merlion. It is 37 metres tall and 60 metres above sea level.]]> 2020-08-31 03:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707883607 Emm... https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707885010 2020-08-31 03:24:50 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707885010 Ragnar paragraph 3 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707887591 After the Animal Encounters , we visited the Gogreen Cycle.Where we  got to cycle around Sentosa with one of Gogreen Cycle’s rental bikes.Finally we visited the Sentosa Merlion where we enjoyed it the most.]]> 2020-08-31 03:27:12 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707887591 Climax https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707888422 The best part of them all was the rides like roller coasters, water rides and even 4-D rides too.]]> 2020-08-31 03:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707888422 Ragnar paragraph 4 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707895394 This is because its not just only famous, but it is also a 60 metres above sea level.Where we can see a wide variety of buildings in Singapore. After Sentosa Merlion, we made our way home in our separate ways.]]> 2020-08-31 03:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707895394 Still not real 🐟🐠🐡 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707895787 Paragraph 2

    We went inside and saw loads of fish and other sea creatures. I 

    wanted to see seahorses but there weren’t any. Later, we went to 

    Animal encounters where interact with monkeys, amazing reptiles, 

    colourful parrots and other animals. Sentosa’s animal friends 

    will delight with their playful antics This is a free attraction 

    with 15-minute shows every afternoon. Then we went for the 

    Gogreen cycle. We took a leisurely cycle around Sentosa to explore its 

    numerous attractions with one of Gogreen’s rental bikes. We picked a 

    copy of Sentosa’s cycling maps and navigate our way.]]>     2020-08-31 03:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707895787     Kendrick Paragraph 3 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707902857 I think Charles most visited was the Animal Encounters because he like animals so much that he wanted to visit each month. Kent most visited was the Gogreen cycle because he likes Cycling a lot and Joshua visited the most was Sentosa Merlion because he likes taking a break with the Sentosa Merlion.]]> 2020-08-31 03:40:38 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707902857 Darius https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707903440 1) The story begins when my friends and I arrived at Sentosa.
    2) When my friends and I went for our first activity, animal encounters at the Palawan Amphitheater.
    3) The most exciting event is when we reached the second activity, Gogreen cycle, which is what we all like.
    4) The story concludes with the view of the Sentosa Merlion, which is 37 metres tall and 60 metres above sea level. Then we went home and had a great time at Sentosa and wished to go back there again.]]>     2020-08-31 03:41:09 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707903440     Ragnar paragraph 5 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707904514 While I was on my way home, I texted to Tom and Ben that since we had an enjoyable time at Sentosa, we should go to Sentosa again for a staycation.They replied to me that they couldn’t agree more.]]> 2020-08-31 03:42:01 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707904514 Paragraph 3 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707911470 We enjoyed the animal encounters because we could get to learn about habitats. ]]> 2020-08-31 03:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707911470 Paragraph 4 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707917052 After that, we went home. We enjoyed ourselves at Sentosa. ]]> 2020-08-31 03:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/707917052 Kendrick Paragraph 4 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710729226 I did explore the Gogreen cycle to explore numerous attraction with one of Gogreen cycle’s rental bikes. I saw some plants, buildings , birds , beach , cable cars and more. I felt like I explore a lot of the Sentosa places, buildings and more.]]> 2020-09-01 03:41:58 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710729226 Paragraph 2 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710729838 Once we reached the hotel, Darius and Dylan waited for me to book the hotel room for us to stay. I took the key and take the lift to our hotel room for us to stay for 3 days. We ate some chocolate cakes 🎂 before heading out for some activities.]]> 2020-09-01 03:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710729838 Paragraph 3 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710730637 My friends and I enjoyed the Gogreen cycle because it is a fun journey as we had our Sentosa’s bicycle maps and navigation via dedicated bicycle tracks.]]> 2020-09-01 03:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710730637 Javier Wan(paragraph 1) https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710730761 During the weekends,my family and I went to Sentosa for a visit .]]> 2020-09-01 03:43:15 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710730761 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710731124 2020-09-01 03:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710731124 Kieran https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710732902 2020-09-01 03:44:50 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710732902 Paragraph 3 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710734825 We head out to the Animal Encounters to interact with monkeys 🐒, reptiles 🦎 and colourful parrots 🦜 at the Palawan Amphitheatere. We saw many animal friends were delighted with their playful antics. It’s a free attraction with a 15 minute show every afternoon. We get to watched it just in time before the show had started. We enjoyed ourselves during the show! ]]> 2020-09-01 03:46:31 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710734825 Dylan Yeo edwardheng210 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710735624 - During the June holidays, to spend our holidays at and enjoy ourselves
    - Animal Encounters, GoGreen Cycle and Merlion.]]>     2020-09-01 03:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710735624     Kieran https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710738747 2020-09-01 03:49:43 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710738747 Javier wan(paragraph 2) https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710738867 Me and my family went in my father’s car and drove to Sentosa

    ]]>     2020-09-01 03:49:48 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710738867     Dylan Yeo edwardheng210 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710740361 1) My friends and I went to Vivocity by MRT before taking coach to Sentosa.
    2) At Sentosa, we went to see an animal show, cycled around Sentosa and looking at the view from the Sentosa Merlion.
    3) We enjoyed seeing the Merlion because it was colourful and huge and could shoot colourful lasers.
    4) After having a holiday at Sentosa, we went back by bus and wanted to go back to Sentosa again next year.]]>     2020-09-01 03:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710740361     Javier wan(paragraph 3) https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710743331 After we reached ]]> 2020-09-01 03:53:16 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710743331 Paragraph 4 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710743540 After that we went to Gogreen Cycle for a bicycle ride around Sentosa to explore it's numerous attractions with one of Gogreen Cycle's rental bikes and we took a copy of Sentosa's cycling map and navigate our way via dedicated bicycle tracks. Bike rentals are available at the ticketing counter at Beach station.]]> 2020-09-01 03:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710743540 Kieran https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710745330 Hi there]]> 2020-09-01 03:54:54 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/710745330 Paragraph 5 https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/724418092 It's day 2 of our Sentosa staycation! We went to the Sentosa Merlion to visit the 37 metre tall Sentosa Merlion. At 60 metres above sea level , you will actually be seeing Singapore from a height. We soaked up  the 360* view of Sentosa! That concludes the end of our Sentosa staycation and we enjoyed ourselves there. It was very fun and we hope to come there again!]]> 2020-09-07 07:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/pathlightelexp/elmnarrative/wish/724418092