https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l PRAISE and POLISH en-us 2018-02-12 19:16:12 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:36 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230783237 2018-02-12 19:21:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230783237 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230785424 Praise: The storyline was interesting and unique!
Polish: Maybe have a bit more emphasis with your voice on some parts of the book :-)]]> 2018-02-12 19:24:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230785424 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230789646 Such a cute story~]]> 2018-02-12 19:31:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230789646 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790067 i like the ending because there is a lesson learned]]> 2018-02-12 19:31:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790067 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790079 -I like the story I think it’s very cute and can teach a good lesson
-I think you could’ve been a bit louder but over all it was good]]> 2018-02-12 19:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790079 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790176 I really liked your book, I liked how it can teach kids that all their actions have consequences. ]]> 2018-02-12 19:32:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790176 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790194 Praise:
Polish:]]> 2018-02-12 19:32:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790194 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790221 I like your story it was very simple and smooth and got to the point.
- I would like if you speaker a little lou]]> 2018-02-12 19:32:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790221 tontra000 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790285 Praise: illustrations were very colorful and nice
Polish: maybe speak up just a little more :)]]> 2018-02-12 19:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790285 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790338 I really like the art,
I feel like there could have been more ]]> 2018-02-12 19:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790338 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790451 1. I like how you came up with the story  
2. Make the speech bubbles a little more present ]]> 2018-02-12 19:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790451 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790458 Her book had good design in it ]]> 2018-02-12 19:32:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790458 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790609 1) I like how colorful it was
2) might be a little hard for smaller children to comprehend ]]> 2018-02-12 19:32:57 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790609 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790657 I like the originality and the pictures
It was a little short]]> 2018-02-12 19:33:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790657 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790745 Praise: I liked the storyline
Polish: I wasn’t able to see the pictures]]> 2018-02-12 19:33:15 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790745 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790862 Praise: Nice colorful pages
Polish : Confidence]]> 2018-02-12 19:33:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230790862 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230791010 Pr:absolutely beautiful
Po:the pics were good but small]]> 2018-02-12 19:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230791010 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230791026 I like the book and the story. It would have been nice if you talked a little louder.]]> 2018-02-12 19:33:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230791026 https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230791936 Praise: it was really good and colorful
Polish: pictures and speech bubbles were not big enough ]]> 2018-02-12 19:35:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/edadfh8qd15l/wish/230791936