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      <title>Writing project: The enchanted lighthouse by Lara Wolter</title>
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      <description>This padlet will guide you through your Dalton writing project.</description>
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      <pubDate>2023-11-03 14:41:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Information about the project</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>In the next weeks, you will have to <strong>plan</strong>, <strong>write </strong>and <strong>record </strong>your own story titled "The Enchanted Lighthouse" with the help of your English teacher.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Step 1: Planning your story</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ol><li><p><strong>Write an outline for your text:</strong></p><p>Plan the beginning, the middle and the ending of your story, for example in a mind map (an example can be found in the picture). Use the title and the words in the grid.</p><p><mark>beginning</mark>: Who are the characters?</p><p><mark>middle</mark>: What problem do they have?</p><p><mark>ending</mark>: How is the problem solved?</p></li><li><p>Think about vocabulary you need and structure it (check out p. 75 for help)</p></li></ol>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-03 14:57:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Step 2: Writing a first draft</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/L_Wtr/ec7850k1f2ovffne/wish/2775455962</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<ol><li><p><strong>Write a first draft </strong>of your story using a <mark>Word document </mark>(type, don't handwrite)!</p></li><li><p><strong>Improving your draft part 1</strong>: Add and mark time phrases, linking words, complex sentences <mark>in another color.</mark></p></li><li><p><strong>Improving your draft part 2</strong>: Add and mark adjectives and adverbs (quite, a bit, really, etc.) <mark>in another color.</mark></p><p><br/></p></li></ol>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-03 15:11:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Step 3: Proof-Reading with Online Tools</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/L_Wtr/ec7850k1f2ovffne/wish/2775459317</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<ol><li><p>Copy your improved version into <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://Deepl.com"><strong>Deepl.com</strong></a> and have the program translate your story into German. Check if all your ideas make sense. </p></li><li><p><strong>If there is a problem</strong>, use the help this program can give you: write the sentence in German and have the program translate it into English by clicking on the arrows (<em>Pfeile</em>). Also find out how the program would phrase certain sentences by translating the German version into English again. Then compare “your” version” with the program suggested. What is different? What is the same?</p></li><li><p>Write down or <mark>mark</mark> what you changed in your story after working with DeepL.</p><p><br/></p></li></ol>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-03 15:13:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Second feedback</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/L_Wtr/ec7850k1f2ovffne/wish/2775471146</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>In Dalton or English class:</strong></p><p><strong>Present </strong>your results from steps 2-3 to your teacher to<strong> obtain feedback</strong>. Bring your story and your notes on using DeepL.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-03 15:22:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Step 4: Recording your story</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/L_Wtr/ec7850k1f2ovffne/wish/2775475066</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<ol><li><p><strong>Practice reading</strong> your story. If you don’t know how to pronounce a word, ask your teacher OR go to <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://leo.org">leo.org</a> / <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://pons.com">pons.com</a> and listen.</p></li><li><p><strong>Record your story.</strong></p></li></ol>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-03 15:26:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>How to evalulate your work</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-03 15:28:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>First feedback</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/L_Wtr/ec7850k1f2ovffne/wish/2775481078</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>In Dalton or English class:</strong></p><p><strong>Present your outline to your teacher</strong> to obtain feedback.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-03 15:31:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Step 5: Finishing the project</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/L_Wtr/ec7850k1f2ovffne/wish/2776002923</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>If everything is ok,<strong> upload your story</strong> on your Teams task. Otherwise, record a new version and present it again.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 08:32:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Final feedback</title>
         <author>L_Wtr</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/L_Wtr/ec7850k1f2ovffne/wish/2776003374</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>In Dalton or English class (voluntary):</strong></p><p><strong>Present a first recording</strong> to your teacher to obtain feedback. </p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-11-04 08:33:17 UTC</pubDate>
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