Writing Workshop Week (601/SP21) by Rebecca Harris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601 (1st) Plan (2nd) Accomplishments (3rd) Comment on 5 classmate posts en-us 2021-03-25 22:02:59 UTC 2021-04-10 15:52:43 UTC hello@padlet.com Dr. Harris’ example dr_rebeccalharris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1355146560 Plan:
  1. To explain the current practice that my  reform  is responding to.
  2. Explain my reform in more detail.
  3. To strengthen the details of my philosophy of education
 
Accomplishments:
  1. I strengthened my research by adding 3 sources.
  2. I developed details on the current practice my reform responds to and my reform itself.
  3. Made sure the theme of equity is clear across each section of my essay
]]> 2021-03-25 22:02:59 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1355146560 Lauren Schnabel https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1363855857 Plan:
1. To carefully review all feedback given from Dr. Harris and make sure appropriate changes are made.
2. To have a family member in the Education system proof read my paper for feedback.
3. Explain more in detail the main points of each section. 

Accomplishments:
1. I analyzed all feedback and incorporated/fixed/strengthened anything that had comments.
2. My sister who's a teacher has read and analyzed section by section and gave her input as well.
3. I strengthen my proposal, and made sure my reform was clearly stated with supporting research.

]]> 2021-03-29 12:51:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1363855857 Ashley Woolard https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1364748874 Plan:
1. To reread all of Dr. Harris's feedback and ensure that I make all of the changes she recommended.
2. Double check that my paper is in the correct format before submitting.
3. Have another person proof read and double check for any grammatical mistakes. 

Accomplishments:
1. I learned more about the required format and have made the required improvements with each section turn-in.
2. I have analyzed all of Dr. Harris's feedback and have incorporated and fixed what she commented on. 
3. I have learned more about equity and its role, and have made sure to include the theme of equity into my essay.]]> 2021-03-29 16:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1364748874 Holly Brown https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1365328384 Plan:
1. Read all feedback that Dr. Harris  has given me on my papers.
2. If I run into an area I am 
not sure about I will email Dr. Harris.
3. Double check my works cited information and make sure format is correct.
4.I will make sure my information is supporting my reform.

Accomplishments:
1. I have learned writing a strong paper makes for your n reform to stand out.
2. My proposal  is strong on my advocation I am pushing for.
3. Philosophy plays a major roll in my paper and therefore states why we need this reform.

]]> 2021-03-29 18:27:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1365328384 Elisabeth Newman https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1365972981 Plan:
1. Double check all of my works cited information and make sure everything is cited correctly and in the correct format. 
2. Read all of my feedback and make changes. 
3. Have multiple people read and proofread my essay and give feedback. 

Accomplishments:
1. I have gone back and made sure my sources are cited correctly and in the correct format. 
2. I have learned a lot about writing a powerful paper. 
3. I have strengthened each part of my essay by going back and making all corrections. ]]> 2021-03-29 22:30:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1365972981 Taylor Moore tnm7553 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1366669059 Plan:
1. Find additional research to improve my purpose section
2. Per Dr. Harris' feedback on my proposal, I will edit it by breaking it down into organized paragraphs
3. For equity, I plan to outline my section then find research supporting my ideas prior to putting it all together

Accomplishments:
1. I created an outline, gathered research and completed my equity essay
2. I have gathered all of my essays and gathered all feedback for the respective essays. I am now currently making edits to improve my past work
3. I updated Dr. Harris on my standing of where I am with the BTA paper
4. I have all of my talking points for the conclusion mapped out

]]> 2021-03-30 04:12:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1366669059 Amanda Stevens https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1369643883 Plan: 
1. To carefully go through and reread all the sections of my paper and try to put them all together to make them all run together fluidly for the final paper.

2. Read all of my feedback from Dr. Harris and make changes to correct my paper. 

3. I will strengthen my paper by doing more research to support my reform. 

Accomplishments:
1. I learned a new strategy with how to better organize my paper by adding in subheadings.

2. I analyzed my paper's feedback and have decided to restructure my sections 1&2 to better focus my reform's purpose instead of it being generalized.
 
3. I have done more research to support my ideas of reform.]]> 2021-03-30 20:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1369643883 Theresa Hill https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1370296581 1. Carefully read through all feedback to see all similarities.
2. Fix major fixes at a time. Ex: fix all citations in all documents so they are done at once, fix all run on sentences at a time so that they are all finished.
3. Combine all documents to form a concise document so that they do not feel like separate essays to the reader. 

Accomplishments 
1. I have a lot of statistics  supporting my reform
2. There are real and local examples of improvement based on my reform goal
3.  Addressing the relevance to my topic, and providing clarity , structure , and using the information that I gathered wisely. ]]> 2021-03-31 01:57:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1370296581 Anaia Bright https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1372018293 Plans: 
1. Go through all feedback given by Dr.Harris 
2. Assemble my paper into one paper 
3. Finish my equity and conclusion section 
Accomplishments:
1. I updated Dr.Harris 
2. Got a better understanding of the equity section through webex with Dr.Harris 
3.Researched more in order to better support my paper 
Accomplishments for strengthening essay 
1. Went over the rubric for each section to ensure I answered each question throughly 
2. Went over teacher feedback and corrected]]> 2021-03-31 14:42:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1372018293 Ryan Walston https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1372044476 Plan:
1. Go through and correct grammatical issues.
2. Read feedback and correct issues regarding sentence structure.
3. Fix formatting and citation issues.
4. Finish my final portion of the essay. 

Accomplishments:
1. Paper now has less grammar issues.
2. Corrected issues with runoff sentences. 
3. No longer repeating citations from the book. Citations are also now properly cited with the APA format.
4. Paper is completed. ]]> 2021-03-31 14:49:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1372044476 Trent Lineberry https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1372829037 Plans:
1. Go through feedback more in depth 
2. Work on my citation format information  and structure
3. Improve on wording i use to cut down run-off sentences.

Accomplishments
1. I have improved some of my writing skills over this course and look forward to growing my skills even more
2. Learned that equity and equal are different
3. Gaining a plan to combine all these concepts for my final paper

]]> 2021-03-31 17:57:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1372829037 Aubre https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373171749 Plan
1. Take more time to finish this final essay
2. Use more sources
3. Assemble papers into one and turn in

Accomplishments
1.
2.
3.
\]]> 2021-03-31 19:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373171749 Cameron Royster https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373420397 Plan
1. Add more sources to my final paper
2. Expand more on the different topics of my paper
3. Reorganize my paper

Accomplishments
1. I included more sources to my paper.
2. I have went back and made my paper longer by expanding on certain topics.
3. My paper is organized into one paper.]]> 2021-03-31 21:00:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373420397 Denisse Rosales https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373436845 Plan
1. Continue to read over Dr. Harris' feedback on my past sections.
2. Make sure I follow all APA guidelines and carefully review the rubric.
3. Edit and review my writing to be cohesive and understandable before submitting it. 

Accomplishments
1. Have taken Dr. Harris' feedback into account to improve my writing and formatting errors
2. Have learned from my past mistakes in other sections previously submitted
3. Have learned a lot from my reform and how it applies to what we are learning in this class. ]]> 2021-03-31 21:08:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373436845 Jacquelyn Howard jhoward013 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373527792 1. Provide more clarity on how my reform would be taught in schools.
2. Correct grammatically incorrect sentences.
3. Review APA 7th Edition.

Accomplishments
1. Explained how my reform would be taught
2. Had my paper proofread for grammatical errors
3. Updated reference list with new sources. Reviewed in-text citations. Doubled checked sources]]> 2021-03-31 21:56:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373527792 Kendall Evans https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373659187 Plan: 
1. Review the feedback given by Dr. Harris, and staying in communication via email with any questions or concerns. 
2. Have peers and roommates proofread my paper to check for any grammatical errors and to make sure my paper sounds good.
3. Follow the guidelines of the rubric as well as APA format. 
Accomplishments:
1.
2.
3.

]]> 2021-03-31 23:25:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373659187 Nicole Waller https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373680622 Plan:
1.Go over all the feedback provided by Dr. Harris.
2. Reach out to Dr. Harris for help and guidance along the way. 
3. Review APA guidelines. 

Accomplishments: 
1. Throughout this process, I have learned so much about education and the struggles some students and teachers face.
2. I think my writing has improved throughout this process.
3. I have a better understanding of what it means to be a teachers advocate. ]]> 2021-03-31 23:39:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373680622 Diane Milne dgmilne123 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373773679 Plan:
1. Take note of the feedback from Dr. Harris and use her suggestions to improve my paper.
2. Have others proofread my paper to make sure it makes sense and is interesting.
3. Do more research on my topic so that I truly know what I am writing about. 
Accomplishments:
1. I have turned everything in on time.
2. I have become a stronger writer.
3. I learned a lot about teacher salary and have become very passionate about the issue. ]]> 2021-04-01 00:31:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373773679 Emma Hutchens https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373837827 Plan: 
1. Read through each paragraph of each section individually and make corrections. 
2. Read through each section to make sure my paper flows nicely. 
3. Double check that there are citations whenever I use a source. Also, I will correct in-text citations like Dr. Harris recommended. 
Accomplishments: 
1. I have reviewed all of Dr. Harris' comments on the Proposal, Section 1, Section 2, and Section 3 papers. 
2. I have read through all of the papers individually to check for errors. 
3. I have read each section closely and considered if anything needed to be added or taken out of the paper. ]]> 2021-04-01 00:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1373837827 Leah Guerra leahguerra1979 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1374020416 Plan:
1. Re-read each part of the essay and the feedback provided by Dr. Harris.
2. Making corrections and adjustments based on Dr. Harris's suggestions to improve the quality of my paper.
3. Work thoroughly and ask for someone to proofread and critique my paper. Paying close attention to detail
Accomplishments:
1. I have learned so much about the dedication a teacher needs to have in order to have a successful classroom for his/her students.
2. I have been improving my writing abilities.
3. I have learned/discovered that thorough research makes for a better paper. ]]> 2021-04-01 02:19:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1374020416 Bridget Killian bridgetkillian1317 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1374057452 Strengthening Plan:
- Review each rubric on each section of the essay and make bullet points on what will help make my essay flow better.
-Review all notes that I wrote down from the phone meeting with Dr. Harris.
-Ask others to proofread my essay and ask them to look for grammar mistakes and make sure the research goes along with my reform.
- Make sure the essay is in APA format and references are in Alphabetic order.
Accomplishments:
1. Figuring out the best way to make the paper clear and understanding. 
2. More research and not opinions as much. 
3. Grasping a better understanding of what expected of each section of the essay. 



]]> 2021-04-01 02:37:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1374057452 Kendall Evans Accomplishments https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1380131185 1. Completed my Becoming a Teacher Advocate paper
2. Gained helpful feedback from peers to help improve my paper
3. Successfully advocated for my reform]]> 2021-04-04 01:00:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1380131185 Jasmine Mcnair https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1380715622 Plan:
1. Include more evidence from my sources to strengthen my introduction 
2. Shorten my Philosophy section; take out unnecessary filling
3. Explain how my reform will help promote equity amongst the U.S education system
Accomplishments:
1. Added more information to my introduction and cited more evidence
2. Shortened my Philosophy section by 150 words
3. Clearly explained the connection between my reform and the increase in equity in the U.S education system ]]> 2021-04-04 12:28:13 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1380715622 Emma Daves https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1383102510 Plan:
1. Triple check my citations and bibliography. APA is not my strong suit (most of my papers are in Chicago so I need to make sure I'm doing it right.)
2. Review and apply feedback given by Dr. Harris to my paper.
3. Make sure all of the sections of my paper are well written, with no grammatical errors.

Accomplishments: 


]]> 2021-04-05 13:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1383102510 Sophia Ricks https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1400195813 Plan:
1. I will carefully read the feedback that Dr. Harris provided me.
2. I will take in the advice that Dr. Harris provided and will make the proper corrections.
3. I will get more in depth with the research and provide more informative information in my paper.
Accomplishments:
1. I have gained a better understanding of the APA style writing.
2. Have gained a better understanding of what it means to reform topics and what it takes to be an advocate.
3. I have finished my paper to the best of my knowledge with the feedback from Dr. Harris]]> 2021-04-09 14:47:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1400195813 Emma Daves https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1402737345 Accomplishments:
1. I am much more familiar with the APA citation style. 
2.  I added more research into my paper.
3.  I have a better understanding of what it means to be a teacher advocate.

]]> 2021-04-10 15:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeekSP21_601/wish/1402737345