tinyurl.com/ydydrcpg PEEL paragraphs and Planning for Videos by Ian Gallie https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je Point, Evidence, Explanation, Link en-us 2018-08-30 01:54:24 UTC 2018-09-19 01:21:13 UTC hello@padlet.com igallie https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276455596 2018-08-30 01:56:33 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276455596 Audience Demographic 00110921_2 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477358 Audience Age : 20-30 (Adults), 60-80 (People who couldn't get out of their chair and want to watch action) (but they may get a heart attack) Adults usually have more time and money to learn how to mountain climb and buy the gear needed. People aged 60-80 may have been mountain climbers and want to relive the thrill of climbing a mountain, but this will depend on their economic class.
Audience Economic Class : C1 or B1, since they are similar economic class to Joe Simpson, so they can relate to him and root for him. They may also have enough time and expendable income to make mountain climbing an affordable hobby, which means that they will be more interested in the documentary. People in economic class D would not be interested, since they don't have the money for mountain climbing gear, and they would want to spend their free time relaxing instead of being on an adventure. This depends on their psychographic profile.            Audience Psychographic Profile : Explorers (People who seek adventure), since the documentary is an mountain climbing adventure documentary, so they will be interested since there is a sense of exploration in the documentary.            Audience Gender : Male, since they usually like action and adventure.        Audience Race : White people, since Joe Simpson and Simon Yates are both white, so it might be easier for them to relate.
Other : People who may have read the book and want to know more about it, or people who don't want to risk their own lives climbing a mountain and want to watch someone else do it.      (I wrote too much I know)]]> 2018-08-30 04:39:54 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477358 By looking in to touching the void, i think people that belong to the social status C1 and B are the ones who would watch this kind of documentary because they first of all have the money and the conditions suitable to go to do some expensive hobby, or that they just have nothing to do but are really interested in these kind of cool stories and people's experiences. To make this statement more specific I think that males will watch and be interested more of this documentary because biologically speaking males are more strong and sometimes more sporty and adventureous than most girls. https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477399 ---Ashley ]]> 2018-08-30 04:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477399 PEEL https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477418 The techniques used in the documentary clip makes the scene seem much more scary. They help build up tension and foreshadow the upcoming events. For example, they included strong winds and heavy footsteps as diegetic noise. The strong winds show that it’s indeed very cold and it’ll take a lot of skill for them to make it to the top. It also shows that they have a right to be scared. The heavy footsteps show that they are already very tired out from dehydration and starvation. They will be struggling to reach the summit. The non-diegetic noise used was narration and ambient music. The narration was done with a serious tone, suggesting that something bad was about to happen, and talking about it again was already too painful. The ambient music almost goes unnoticed, since it prepares the mood and already increases the fear in the audience without them realizing. As you can see, sound can have a big impact on the mood of a documentary. These techniques have a direct effect on the audiences emotions.
~Ariel]]> 2018-08-30 04:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477418 00110571 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477430 The audience should be in the B-C1 category because Joe Simpson (The author) is also in those categories.   The personality type should be an explorer because this documentary is adventure and action. The audience should be around 20-30 because they will have the energy to go climb. Audience that just watch it for entertainment should be around 60 because they are old and only watch boring stuff.]]> 2018-08-30 04:40:23 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477430 (RL) The audience are part of the B-C1 socioeconomic status group because people can afford to climb a mountain and they have enough to go out but the people below c1 are too tired and don't have time climb mountain and they cant afford climbing gear. 46170021 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477435 2018-08-30 04:40:25 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276477435 Age: 11 - 50Gender: Mostly Male and some femalePersonality: Risk TakerI think the people that watches the documentary are students that are trying to read this book, adults that likes climbing or people just like to watch documentaries and learn facts. For people that likes climbing but never climber so high before, they might watch other people climb and then decide whether they climb it or not. People doesn’t wants to risk their life to climb a mountain if they doesn’t even know how to climb. For other people in the rank C1 to B can afford the expensive climbing gear and travel fee, so I think most people watch this should be rank C1 to B. 46170011 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276801342 2018-08-31 03:37:47 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276801342 PEEL 0011048 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276801755 I think people with the socioeconomic status of C1 to B who enjoys expensive hobbies and a psychographic profile of an explorer , because only these people are the most likely ones that can afford expensive hobbies like mountaineering, the reason why explorers will enjoy this movie is because  explorers like to explore, try new things and take risks. The gender and age range will probably be 20-80years old males because adults in this age range are probably working in an office, they don't have much time to travel or their too old to travel.]]> 2018-08-31 03:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276801755 Peel paragraph 0011137 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802229 The people who will watch the documentary ‘Touching the Void’ are the ones with a C1-B job. This is because they have a moderate amount of money so they can afford to buy climbing gear like Joe Simpson and the other characters in the story. They should be about 20-60 years old, since younger kids would get bored.]]> 2018-08-31 03:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802229 Audience 0112020 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802244
Audience
There are not many people who would watch this film, because the film is extremely boring.  But people who are going mountain climbing maybe will watch the film, to understand more about mountain climbing.  But some people are also forced to watch the film.  Such as teenagers doing a book report have to watch the documentary.  Because the book is so boring, some teens tend to watch the documentary instead of the book, just so they won’t have nothing on their book report. The personality of people who would watch these out of interest would probably be similar to those of Joe Simpson.  People who are are ambitious to climb further.  These people are in around C1 to B, considering they are rich enough to afford a computer.  They are probably watching this to do this themselves, they need afford the gear, and they must have the skill the climb these mountains.  The audience can’t be D or E, because those people can’t afford to climb a mountain, and don’t have time to.The audience age should be about 20-30, the age that most mountain climbers are.  The audience age could also be 60-80.  Some poor old people who can’t move watch documentaries as their only entertainment.  
-Michelle Sun]]> 2018-08-31 03:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802244 Megan Ching 00110232 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802569 People with the educational profile of C1 to B and a psychographic profile of Explorers would mostly likely be interested in Touching the Void. Explorers are always thrill-seeking and in need of experience, action and adventure. Also, others with the educational profile of C1 or B tend to be in the same age - thirties to forties. They would be more intrigued about watching a documentary about something that is out of the ordinary. Since Touching the Void is more of an Action and Adventure documentary, Explorers would tend to enjoy this type of films. 

((I'm sorry, it's not a good piece of writing))]]> 2018-08-31 03:50:04 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802569 00110852 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802700 Audience age: Typically I think people who are aged between 20-30 or 60 and above, 20-30 because they might be interested in climbing mountains themselves or they just like adventure and thrill,  and for the elderlies, they might just want a little bit of adventure in their life as they probably can’t do anything dangerous/fun at their age.
 Audience economic class: I think people in the group C1 or B would most likely watch this film because climbing mountains in somewhere pretty far away is an expensive sport, and people in the higher class category will watch this since they can relate and they have the money or time to do this and it’ll be fun for them to watch Joe Simpsons journey.
 Audience race/gender: Male because they might find it more interesting than females do. Although all races can watch this film, but the most common might be white people because Joe and Simon are both white and they might relate better.
 Audience psychographic thing: explorers because Touching the Void is based on adventure and explorers tend to seek adventure

]]> 2018-08-31 03:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802700 There were a lot of techniques used in the documentary. One of the main techniques used in this documentary is sound and music. The sound and music helped create a sense of reality in the documentary. For example, the wind was a big part in the film. It makes the audience think its cold, uncomfortable, challenging, windy environment. Music also created a sense of scariness in the documentary. This made it seem that climbing to the summit was dangerous. Sometimes, the music created a climax as something bad would happen in the film. Audience: C1 and B because young mountaineers might get inspired by this clip, slightly older people because they sit in a chair all day and they're bored, so they might want to watch something more fun. Gender: Both female and male because there are female and male mountaineers. 00101562_1 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802911 2018-08-31 03:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802911 PEEL 00110821 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802980 Touching the void is a documentary about two mountaineers that go on a hike but one of them breaks a leg, falling into a snow hole. This documentary is partly 1st person and partly 3rd person, it is done by recreation. I think people about 20-30 will watch this because these age is when people are usually mountaineers and I also think they should be C1-B because you have to be rich enough to become a mountaineers and afford a computer to watch. I also think the watchers can be 65+ because I think old people like to watch documentaries because they won’t get to explore the world themselfs.


]]> 2018-08-31 03:53:40 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276802980 PEEL 00111231 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276803944 In this section (13:51~16:02) of the documentary film, Touching the Void, based on Joe Simpson’s real-life account of his adventures while climbing the Peruvian Andes, director Kevin McDonald tries to create more tension and the sense of danger and intensity. During this section of the documentary, the sound of howling winds are used to illustrate the dangerous setting Simpson’s adventure is taking place in. This makes the viewer feel like the tension in the film is building up. It encourages the audience to keep watching the documentary. It makes the audience feel the kind of scared emotion Simpson and Yates were feeling at that time. It’s just like being placed in the shoes of the character in the documentary. The howling wind sound effect may have been diegetic, but there is a very high chance the sound effect has been exaggerated when making the movie. The director and the editing team did this because they want to make the scene more dramatic. It makes the plot more action packed and interesting. It makes the audience feel the cold of the mountain. In conclusion, the sound effects of the documentary can affect the viewers. These techniques can directly trigger the audience. ]]> 2018-08-31 04:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276803944 PEEL Paragraph 01120102 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276804856 The Genre of the film “Touching The Void” would be a reconstructed documentary. It is a documentary with many filming techniques like using zoom ins and outs, music and sound effects, voice overs etc. They help build up tension, gives a sense of danger, and foreshadows the things that will happen in the next part of the video. For example, they inserted howling wind sounds and heavy footsteps as diegetic noise. The Audience Age for this film: 20-30 (Adults who have a dream or seek adventure), 60 - 80 (elderlies who are too old to get out of their chair and want to watch action but they may get a heart attack) . The blue effect in some of the scenes make the mountains seem extremely cold and dangerous. Audience: C1 and B because they only have part time jobs, and they have spare time to enjoy their life. At the same time, they are in a similar economic class as Joe Simpson, so they can relate to him. They may also have enough time and income to make mountain climbing an affordable hobby, which means that they will be more interested in the documentary. The audience can’t be D or E, because those people can’t afford to climb a mountain, and don’t have time to since they will be busy trying to earn money.
The audience can't be A either, because they are committed into very heavy work load jobs.]]> 2018-08-31 04:11:13 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276804856 Conclusion 0011138 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806408 To conclude, director Kevin McDonald achieved his intention of foreshadowing and increasing the fear in his audience. He does that by adding a variety of edited noises in the background to suggest the difficulty of this climb. He also edited some frames so that it would look more blue or more dark, making it seem they did the climb during nighttime, which is much more dangerous. Linking that back to the concept of perspective, he, in a way, forces the audience to think a certain way about this documentary. The audience will think that the climb was dangerous and that it wasn't Simon's fault he had to cut the rope to save both their lives. ]]> 2018-08-31 04:24:23 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806408 Conclusion 00110921_2 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806484 In conclusion, director Kevin Mcdonald achieved the intended effect of making the audience feel engaged more and more tense while watching the show by using suspenseful music, slow motion and ambient music to set the scene. He also uses voiceovers which help to show that truth can be understood through different perspectives. For example, some of us thought that it was wrong for Simon Yates to cut the rope, but from his perspective, it was the only way to save his own life, and if he didn't cut the rope, there would be 2 lives lost instead of just 1. This shows that while some people may think the right decision was not to cut the rope, others may have thought the opposite. Linking that to the idea of truth, the director makes you think that it isn't Simon's fault by using voiceovers of Simon and Joe talking about the situation.]]> 2018-08-31 04:25:04 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806484 Conclusion 00110571 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806536 to conclude, director Kevin McDonald achieves his attended affect by using blue lighting for the night time affect, slow motion to make it seem more dramatic, and a tense music. The inquiry of this unit is that truth can be understood from different perspectives. This is hinting that this documentary may not be an actual representation of the actual way things happened. There are many perspectives of viewing this documentary, some people think that cutting the rope was the right thing to do, some people think it was wrong. The author is using the voiceovers to show the audience that they were both clueless of what was happening so i think that it was neither of their faults.]]> 2018-08-31 04:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806536 Conclusion 0011137 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806565

]]> 2018-08-31 04:25:54 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806565 Conclusion 0011048 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806625 To conclude, director Kevin Mcdonald did not achieve his intended effect of making this film realistic by using blue special effect over the screen to make it look like night time and trying to make the audience feel cold, it looks very unnatural and you can tell the night scenes are filmed during day because I don't believe night looks that blue on the mountains. They also try adding wind sound effects but that also made it look fake because wind doesn't sound like that clear when record on the mountain. ]]> 2018-08-31 04:26:26 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806625 conclusion 00110852 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806677 In conclusion, director Kevin Mcdonald achieved his intention of building tension, making everything more dramatic and keeping the audience excited like for example using slow-mo when Simon cut the rope, or having extremely sad music when Joe was alone dangling in the middle of nowhere. As the SOI states, "the truth can be understood through different perspectives", I think it's correctbecause there are always more than one perspective in  a story, like Joe's side of the story where he might've thought the opposite of Simon's POV .]]> 2018-08-31 04:26:59 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806677 Introduction 03140062 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806705 Touching The Void was originally a book written by Joe Simpson based on a real life story that happened to him.  Later on he made a documentary that was reconstructed, meaning that he paid other actors to act out the same thing that he experienced on the mountain he climbed with his climbing partner.  In the documentary, a variety of techniques were used, for example, using different angles to make some scenes look dangerous, scary, and incredibly steep.  Using these techniques make the documentary look more realistic and more believable.  Other techniques like using a voiceover and sound effects also helps the entertain the audience watching the  documentary.

]]> 2018-08-31 04:27:17 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806705 Conclusion 46170011 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806781 In conclusion. Director Kevin McDonald achieved to recreate the scene and made it very tense. It uses dramatic music and different kind of techniques like lighting and different camera angles.I think you should look at both perspectives before say Simon or Joe was wrong. Simon cut the rope to save himself instead die with Joe. Joe could have survived, but his fingers were frozen, so he messed up. I don't think it is any of them's fault, because it was dark and they probably can't see much. ]]> 2018-08-31 04:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806781 Conclusion 03140062 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806794 In conclusion, Directer McDonald succeeded in making the documentary realistic (which is what he intended to do). He used certain techniques with different lighting, angles, and sound effects to really make the dark and scary moments stand out.]]> 2018-08-31 04:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806794 Conclusion 00101562_1 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806795 In conclusion, director Kevin McDonald was successful in making this documentary realistic. He used a lot of cinematic techniques like dramatic music, filming from different angles, making some of the film seem like nigh time etc. Also, after watching this film, people should look at both Simon, and Joe's perspective. This is because they both can't be blamed. They both made mistakes. ]]> 2018-08-31 04:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276806795 Conclusion: 00111231 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276807481 To conclude, director Kevin McDonald achieves his intended effect of making the scene more dangerous and dramatic, by using the cinematic techniques of sound effects, color of the scene, and the narration. Linking to the concept of perspective, I think that there are many ways of viewing everything, just like this documentary. The documentary can look like this when it is on screen, but it might’ve looked completely different without all those techniques and effects added. Reflecting on the statement of inquiry, which states that:“Truth” can be understood through multiple perspectives; Director Mcdonald made this documentary seem different than the real situation that happened with Joe Simpson and Simon Yates. How we view this story right now, may not have been the real story that happened.

]]> 2018-08-31 04:34:02 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276807481 Conclusion 01120102 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276807587 In conclusion, Director Kevin McDonald succeeded in making the documentary engaging and convincing. He used filming techniques like sound effects, filters behind the camera, lighting. music etc to make the film seem more realistic. ]]> 2018-08-31 04:35:09 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/276807587 Link to rubric igallie https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/277442437 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CggDzcsVpBoRbVYjRHCToxjaHw5MZ9fQgi_EBAIVdPQ/edit

]]> 2018-09-04 07:08:38 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/277442437 Link to Coggle - TEAM BOBFWISH 0011138 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280647046 Ariel, Michelle, Hailey, Richard
https://coggle.it/diagram/W5ilcziZy4DtWKx9/t/brainstorming-conventions/4acf1ec9326ad77118ae1b0cbac1719b38f9007569fdca9bc2b543d402ff56e6]]> 2018-09-13 03:28:58 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280647046 link to coggle 00110852 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280647205 hong kiu, sophia, michelle, jamee, tiffany
Our mind map : https://coggle.it/diagram/W5ipjGRd24K0uFjP/t/documentary

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Group members: Sophia (well, kinda in the group), Laura, Ashley, Megan, Oscar


Megan Ching]]> 2018-09-13 03:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280647319 The Baboons - Link to Table 00110921_2 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280647521 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZZIwZ5sbjGzZLCBK4IrWeP6YX9mCIREm2NwsbNWv46s/edit

The Baboons group members : Valarie, Anthony, Kiu, Tiffany

]]> 2018-09-13 03:31:46 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280647521 Link to Table - TEAM BOBFWISH 0011138 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280648323 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1i6Lc8IBZCOIJrxnOhJe-c8XRE-XWnQVQOdeFHGUW8zY/edit?usp=sharing
Ariel. Michelle. Hailey. Richard.]]> 2018-09-13 03:37:30 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280648323 https://coggle.it/diagram/W5ikc6YlrWIHT7lu/t/storyboard https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280648365 ----Ashley'S LINK TO COGGLE
(Ashely, Sophia, laura, Meghan, Oscar)]]> 2018-09-13 03:37:45 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280648365 Link to cogggle 46170011 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280648473 Ashley, Sophia, Megan, Laura

https://coggle.it/diagram/W5ikc6YlrWIHT7lu/t/storyboard]]> 2018-09-13 03:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280648473 link 0011048 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280648515 https://coggle.it/diagram/W5ikc6YlrWIHT7lu/t/storyboard
Laura, Megan, Oscar , Ashely, Sophia]]> 2018-09-13 03:38:48 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/280648515 Link to Google Doc~Narwhale 00111231 https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/283206763 https://docs.google.com/document/d/14icSVxYDCtnmI5KdWRjBLz3fmSRPTmEJ9cy6JiEOX4k/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2018-09-19 00:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/283206763 https://docs.google.com/document/d/16KopaNf2rxEeabs6QCzdFiGPTF6fzZuN8yyGbflA-CA/edit https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/283206860 link to google doc]]> 2018-09-19 00:41:32 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/easjfm8g88je/wish/283206860