Outline for "Eleven" by Marcello Silva

Thesis Statement

silvam20 — 2017-02-03 15:14:16 UTC

The sweater is a symbol of ruin because it pretty much ruins Rachel's birthday.

Map 1

silvam20 — 2017-02-03 15:16:47 UTC

The teacher believes the sweater is Rachel's, although she never wore it, and puts it on Rachel's desk.

silvam20 — 2017-02-03 15:19:55 UTC

Map 2

silvam20 — 2017-02-03 15:20:22 UTC

The teacher forces Rachel to put on the disgusting sweater, which smells like cottage cheese.

Map 3

silvam20 — 2017-02-03 15:21:24 UTC

Right before the bell rings for lunch, Phyllis Lopez says the sweater is actually hers, and the teacher pretends everything's okay.

Annoying Teacher

silvam20 — 2017-02-03 15:24:49 UTC

Quote 1

silvam20 — 2017-02-03 18:53:37 UTC

"'Of course it's yours', Mrs. Price says. 'I remember you wearing it once.' Because she's older and the teacher, she's right and I'm not."

Quote 2

silvam20 — 2017-02-03 18:55:43 UTC

“‘Rachel,’ Mrs. Price says. She says it like she’s getting mad. ‘You put on that sweater on right now and no more nonsense.’ ‘But it’s not--’ ‘Now!’ Mrs. Price screams”.

Quote 3

silvam20 — 2017-02-03 18:59:23 UTC

"But the worst part is right before the bell rings for lunch. That stupid Phyllis Lopez, who is even dumber than Sylvia Saldivar, says she remembers the red sweater is hers! I take it off right away and give it to her, only Mrs. Price pretends like everything's okay."