https://padlet.com/kbiester/james After James presents today, add one compliment, one question, and one suggestion in a box below. You may add your name or keep your comment anonymous; just be kind and constructive either way. en-us 2021-05-12 20:36:40 UTC 2021-05-12 21:32:52 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519223966 Is your story going to be about mainly facts and realistic fiction on alien society , or is it going to include more unrealistic factors ?    I like how much time and dedication James put into his book. I suggest adding romance, cause i like romance, but do what you want. - Jennifer ]]> 2021-05-12 21:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519223966 https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519224668 I like that he's wanted to do this for awhile and this gave him the opportunity to. I also like that it is about something he's interested in and he's comparing it to the world now. - Erica]]> 2021-05-12 21:09:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519224668 https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519226097 I think that the concept of an advanced alien society is absolutely inventive and I cannot wait to read it once it's published! I think one piece of feedback is, I'd like to know more about your creative process and how you decide what you want to write. When do you think the book will be published? -Bri]]> 2021-05-12 21:10:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519226097 jalevy1 https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519226592 James, I am so impressed by your tenacity and perseverance on writing your novel. I’ve really enjoyed following your process.  I want a signed copy when it gets published! Ms. Alevy]]> 2021-05-12 21:10:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519226592 https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519226736 Writing a novel takes a lot of time and effort, so I want to say great job! Your story sound very interesting, and I hope that you will continue to write more novels after this.
One question I have is why did you choose to express your creativity by writing a novel?
One suggestion I have is to have someone proofread your novel if you plan to publish it.]]> 2021-05-12 21:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519226736 https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519246694 I admire how hard-working, dedicated, and persistent you are. You should be really proud of yourself, and I'm proud too for being graced by your talent and skill. I know you're going places and it's exciting to see where you'll go. A question I have for you is how was your experience with meeting editors and people from all around the world? A suggestion I have is to be more confident in your work because it's really good.]]> 2021-05-12 21:20:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519246694 https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519251631 you did great but low key that was a really long chapter- jake]]> 2021-05-12 21:22:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519251631 foxydakillerpirate https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519273227 This Story, James is really awesome and that you tried to make these aliens as complicated as humans was a pretty good start for it, keep working on it dude]]> 2021-05-12 21:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kbiester/james/wish/1519273227