https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59 When revising and editing, what are the specific things do you correct? en-us 2018-02-06 20:42:25 UTC 2018-02-06 21:47:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228864678 When I revise and edit I look for........

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]]> 2018-02-06 21:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228864678 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228866638 January is a fun month. It snows a lot where I live. I like to play in the snow . My brother likes to play in snow,too .We make snowballs and snow houses. I once made a snow man that was five feet tell ! When it gets dark, we go inside , but we know we can go out again the next day.]]> 2018-02-06 21:12:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228866638 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228866745 What is a city bird like ? Many birds  are pigeons . These birds are usually found on city sidewalks and on building rooftops . A pigeon weighs about half a pound ! It can fly up to 60 miles per hour ; most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years. ]]> 2018-02-06 21:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228866745 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228866847 What's a city bird like? Many birds that live in cities are pigeons. These birds are usually found on city sidewalks and on building rooftops. A pigeon weighs about half a pound! It can fly up to 60 miles per hour. Most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years.]]> 2018-02-06 21:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228866847 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228866902  Walt Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age , Walt liked to draw animals. He watched the farm animals carefully and made drawings of them. Walt's family did not have enough money for paper, but Walt was clever. He drew a pig on the wall of his house. Walt's parents were not happy. Then, Walt's aunt gave him drawing paper. ]]> 2018-02-06 21:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228866902 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867001 January is a fun month. It snows a lot where I live. I like to play in the snow. My brother likes to play in the snow.  We make snowballs and snow houses. I once made a snowman that was five feet  tall  !  When it gets dark , we go inside. We know we can go out again the next day.]]> 2018-02-06 21:14:04 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867001 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867342 What is a city bird like? Many bird that live in Cities are pigeons. These birds are usually found on City sidewalks and on building rooftops A Pigeon weighs about half a pound! it can fly up to 60 miles per hour. most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years.]]> 2018-02-06 21:15:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867342 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867489 What is a barcode? Look on the bottom of a cereal  box. Do you see a group of black lines and spaces? That is a barcode! A barcode identifies a product in a store. The thin lines, thick lines, and white spaces are used in a different pattern on every single product. It is like a fingerprint for an item in a store.]]> 2018-02-06 21:15:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867489 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867514 Walt Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age, Walt liked to draw animals. He watched the farm animals carefully and made drawings of them. Walt's family did not have money for paper, but Walt was clever. He drew a pig on the wall of his house. Walt's parents were not happy! Then Walt's aunt gave him drawing paper.]]> 2018-02-06 21:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867514 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867581 You are  in the car, you come to a big lake, and there is no bridge. How do you get across? In some places, you can take a boat called a ferry. A car ferry has ramps so you can drive onto the boat. Some ferries are for trains; these boats have tracks on them. Both kinds of ferries are over 300 feet long.]]> 2018-02-06 21:15:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867581 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867671 January is a fun month. It snows where I live. I like to play in the snow. My brother likes to play in the snow. We make snowballs and snow houses,I once made a snowman hats was five feet tall! When it gets dark, we go inside , but we know we can go out again the next day]]> 2018-02-06 21:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228867671 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868006 What is a city bird like? Many birds that live in cities are pigeons. These birds are usually found on city sidewalks and on building rooftops. A pigeon weighs about half a pound. It can fly up to 60 miles per hour. Most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years.]]> 2018-02-06 21:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868006 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868008 You are in a car. You come to a big lake. There is no bridge. How do you get across? In some places, you can take a boat called a ferry. A car ferry has ramps so you can drive on to the boat. Saome ferries are for trains. These boats have tracks on them. Both kinds of ferries are over 300 feet long.]]> 2018-02-06 21:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868008 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868034 Walt Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age, Walt liked to draw animals. He watched the farm animals carefully and made drawings of them. Walt's family did not have money for paper, but Walt was clever. He drew a pig on the wall of his house. Walt's parents were not happy. Then Walt's aunt gave him drawing paper.]]> 2018-02-06 21:17:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868034 23dearing_kayla https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868107 January is a fun month.
It snows a lot where I live.
I like to play in the snow.
My brother also likes to play in the snow .
We make snowballs and snow houses .I once made a snowman that was five feet tall ! 
When it gets dark we go inside .
We know we can go out again the next day.

]]> 2018-02-06 21:17:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868107 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868122 What is a barcode? Look on the bottom of a cereal box . Do you see a group of black lines and spaces? That is a barcode ! A barcode identifies a product in a store . The thin lines, thick lines,and white spaces are used in a different pattern on every single product . It is like a fingerprint for an item in a store.]]> 2018-02-06 21:17:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868122 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868360 What is a barcode? Look on the bottom of a cereal box. Do you see  a group of black lines and spaces? That is a barcode !  A barcode identifies a product in a store. The thin lines, thick lines, and white spaces are used in a different pattern on every single product. It is like a fingerprint for item in a store.]]> 2018-02-06 21:18:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228868360 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228870153 January is a fun month. It snows a lot where I live. I like to play in the snow.
My brother likes to play in the snow too. We make snowballs and snow houses. I once made a snowman that was five feet tall! When it gets dark,we go inside,but we know when we can go back out until the next day.]]> 2018-02-06 21:24:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228870153 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228870566 What is a barcode? Look on the  bottom of a cereal box .Do you see  a group of black lines and white spaces ?that is a barcode !A barcode identifys a products in a store .The thin lines , thick lines , and  white spaces are used in a driffent  pattern on every single product .It is like a fingerprint for an item in a store.]]> 2018-02-06 21:25:35 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228870566 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228876256 2018-02-06 21:42:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/e7nvryhxxd59/wish/228876256