https://padlet.com/27cbenoit/e72fb7682cqeenny Leave me some feedback on my pieces en-us 2022-01-31 14:13:20 UTC 2022-04-11 16:55:05 UTC hello@padlet.com 27kchen https://padlet.com/27cbenoit/e72fb7682cqeenny/wish/2023428521 Star: I like how you created a hook that hooks the reader because your hook makes me want to know more about the soccer fields for kids.

Star: I like how you added some sensory details into your Essay, it helps me picture the kids playing on the field with joy.

Wish: I want you to revise your Essay because there are 2 counterarguments in your Essay.]]> 2022-02-01 14:29:04 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbenoit/e72fb7682cqeenny/wish/2023428521 27mmigliaccio https://padlet.com/27cbenoit/e72fb7682cqeenny/wish/2023447714 Cayden, I liked how your counter argument was so clear of the other peoples view. You clearly stated how people who might not want to play soccer isn’t an issue. However, I wish that you only had one counter argument in your piece. Your data really helped me to see where you are coming from when you said “The field will help them to get better on skills individually.”]]> 2022-02-01 14:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbenoit/e72fb7682cqeenny/wish/2023447714 27alourenco https://padlet.com/27cbenoit/e72fb7682cqeenny/wish/2023815271 HI! I liked your first data because it let me know how soccer improves childrens social skills. I also liked your counter arguement it gave a clear understanding to the opposing view. My wish/comment is that you added you counter arguement twice in the first paragraph.]]> 2022-02-01 17:06:30 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbenoit/e72fb7682cqeenny/wish/2023815271 John_Laudman https://padlet.com/27cbenoit/e72fb7682cqeenny/wish/2139499676 Arsenal better btw]]> 2022-04-11 16:55:05 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbenoit/e72fb7682cqeenny/wish/2139499676