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INTRO

nhutien77 — 2024-03-01 10:05:58 UTC

INTRO

Topic: ……………….

Thesis statement:……………….

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence:…………………….

-Point 1:………………………..

-Supporting sentence 1 (PEER)::…………………….

-Point 2:…………………….

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) :…………………….

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence :…………………….

-Point 1 :…………………….

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER) :…………………….

-Point 2 :…………………….

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) :…………………….

CONCLUSION

Xuan Uyen - Minh Chau

2024-03-01 10:18:04 UTC

INTRO

Торіс: increased tourism

Thesis statement: strength > weakness

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

Topic sentence: environmental pollution
Point 1: tourist discharged garbage
Supporting sentence 1 (PEER): Results: water and air pollution because of many vehicles
Point 2: destroy natural
Supporting sentence 2 (PEER): Results: cut tree for building

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

Topic sentence: economic growth
Point 1 : promote job opportunities
Supporting sentence 1(PEER): local people selling goods for tourist
Point 2 :expand domestic and international markets
Supporting sentence 2 (PEER): export goods, attract foreign investment

CONCLUSION

Quyên + Trúc

2024-03-01 10:19:32 UTC

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence:

-Point 1: Damaging the environment

-Supporting sentence 1 (PEER): build infrastructure to meet tourism nedds

-Point 2: Increase crime rate

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER)

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence:

-Point 1: Economic development

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER)

-Point 2: Promote national culture

-Supporting sentence 2(PEER)

Thành - Ly

2024-03-01 10:19:48 UTC

INTRO

INTRO

Topic: tourims

Thesis statement: benefits > drawbacks

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence: disadvanteges

-Point 1: littering

-Supporting sentence 1 (PEER):: tourist guest > resuilt : enviroment pollution

-Point 2: spread disease

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) : example: covid

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence : learn more languages

-Point 1 :…………………….

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER) :

-Point 2 : promte internatiol cooperation

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) :………………….

CONCLUSION

2024-03-01 10:20:27 UTC

OUTLINE (TYPE 2)

INTRO

Topic: Increasing tourism has more benefits than disadvantages.

Thesis statement: Increasing tourism has more benefits than disadvantages.

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

- Topic sentence: disadvantaged to increasing tourist travel

- Point 1: attract investment

- Supporting sentence 1 (PFER)

- Point 2

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

- Supporting sentence 2 (PEER)

- Topic sentence

- Point 1

Swosipporting sentence 1(PEER)

- Point 2

- Supporting sentence 2 (PEER)

CONCLUSION

Summarize the main points/ Restate thesis statement

Closing sentence (e.g., warning, prediction, course of action, ...) optional

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Ngọc Trâm + Mộng Tường

2024-03-01 10:20:52 UTC

INTRO

INTRO

Topic:

Thesis statement:……………….

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence: Disadvantage

-Point 1: Pollute regional environment

-Supporting sentence 1 (PEER): Global tourism can lead to deforestation to make room for constructions such as hotels and restaurants to serve visitors.

-Point 2: Increase crime rate

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) : Areas are difficult to control

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence : Advantage

-Point 1 :

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER) :

-Point 2 :…………………….

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) :…………………….

CONCLUSION

Hiền + Băng

2024-03-01 10:20:54 UTC

INTRO

Topic: International travel

Thesis statement: advantages > disadvantages

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence: disadvantages

-Point 1: harm to local culture

-Supporting sentence 1 (PEER): there are more modern fun activities than finding cultural inspiration

-Point 2: affects the environment

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER): littering, animals and plants being hunted, lots of emissions

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence : advantages

-Point 1 : Economic developmet

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER): spent a huge amount of money on hotel, food, and shopping

-Point 2 : helps to improve the standars for living

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER): have a lot of job opportunities

CONCLUSION

Khánh - Trường

2024-03-01 10:21:09 UTC

INTRO

Topic: International travel - advantages and drawbacks

Thesis statement: Advantages outweigh disadvantages

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence: Disadvantages

-Point 1: spread infectious diseases

-Supporting sentence 1 (PEER):

-Point 2: increase crime

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) :

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence : Advantages

-Point 1 : economic growth

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER) : Tourists use many types of services

-Point 2 : attract international human resources

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) :

CONCLUSION

Tiên - Hoà (34)

2024-03-01 10:22:11 UTC

Topic: International travel

Thesis statement: advantages, disadvantages.

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence: disadvantages

-Point 1: Harm to local culture

-Supporting sentence 1 (PEER):: people follow the trend and gradually forget their culture

-Point 2: increase in crime

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) : criminals are easy to avoid in many places

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence :advantages

-Point 1 : economic development

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER) : bring international money to the home country

-Point 2 : protect natural environments

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) : develop a natural tourism model to attract tourists

CONCLUSION

Dung-Hùng

2024-03-01 10:25:02 UTC

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence: cons

-Point 1: contributing air pollution

-Supporting sentence 1

Ex: increased emissions vehicles

Explain: many car used by tourism

-Point 2: animal can be harmed

-Supporting sentence 2

Ex: Elephant riding, trophy hunting

Explain: serve human pleasure

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence : pro

-Point 1 : increased economic

Ex: improves facilities of the host destination

Explain: income from tourism

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER) :…………………….

-Point 2: learn more new languages

Ex: people communicate together

Explain: people learn from tourism different languages

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER)

CONCLUSION

nhutien77 — 2024-03-01 10:27:39 UTC

Loan + Thảo(30)

2024-03-01 10:30:45 UTC

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence:

-Point 1: Lost of natural balance and biodivasity

-Supporting sentence 1 (PEER)::…………………….

-Point 2: Harm to local cultur

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) :…………………….

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence :…………………….

-Point 1 : Attract investment

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER) :…………………….

-Point 2 : Economic development

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER) : spent a huge amount of money on hotel, food, and shopping

CONCLUSION

Khánh - Trường

2024-03-01 10:32:27 UTC

TOPIC It is true that the work of increasing low-cost international tourism has expanded in recent years, helping economic growth for the country.

THESIS STATEMENT

Although this trend may find some weaknesses, I believe that its benefits are more important.

- есом

Although this trend has certain disadvantages, I believe that the economic benefits will outweigh these disadvantages.

Xuan Uyen - Minh Chau

2024-03-01 10:32:43 UTC

It is the fact that tourism plays a crucial role in our life. At the present time, an increasing number of people are concerned about needs of travel. Some people consider to the view that tourism has negative but I am one of those who believe agree this industry brings many benefits.

Ngọc Trâm + Mộng Tường

2024-03-01 10:32:49 UTC

It is true the increased of cheap global travel has become popular in recent years. Although some drawbacks can be seen from this trend, I believe that the benefits are more significant

Hiền + Băng

2024-03-01 10:33:08 UTC

It is true that travel abroad has become popular in recent years because it is not costing a lot of money. Although some drawbacks can be seen from this trend, I believe that benefits are more significant.

Mỹ Tiên - Hoà (34)

2024-03-01 10:35:04 UTC

It is true that the international tourism has become popular in recent years. Doing economic development in the tourist country, although some drawbacks can be seen from this trend, i believe that the benefits are more significant.

Tuyền, Trần Thị T.Vy (34)

2024-03-01 10:35:46 UTC

Topic: increase tourism

Thesis statement: benefits > drawbacks

BODY 1

(Weaker side)

-Topic sentence: disadvantages

-Point 1: confict between local people and tourist.

-Supporting sentence 1 (PEER): result: racism,

-Point 2: environment pollution

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER): waste increase,

BODY 2

(Stronger side)

-Topic sentence : advantages

-Point 1: boost the economy

-Supporting sentence 1(PEER): create jobs for local people,

-Point 2: cultural exchange

-Supporting sentence 2 (PEER): Tourists have the opportunity to immerse themselves in diverse cultures

CONCLUSION

Dung, hùng

nlinhn888 — 2024-03-01 10:35:48 UTC

It is general that international tourism has many benefit for the global, economy, society and enviroment. Moreover, tourism can help protect and reserves natural resources and biodiversity

nhutien77 — 2024-03-01 10:39:24 UTC

Dung-Hùng

2024-03-01 10:40:35 UTC

In conclusion, while some idea supposed that increased travelers have many negative aspects. I believe they are outweighed by more significant positive aspects.

Ngọc Trâm + Mộng Tường

2024-03-01 10:42:02 UTC

In conclusion, while is the increased of cheap global travel many have some disadvantages. I believe they are outweighed by the more significant advantage

Khánh- Trường

2024-03-01 10:42:49 UTC

In conclusion, while the increase in low-cost international travel over the years has some negative aspects, I believe there are outweighed by the more significant benefits.

Mỹ Tiên - Hoà (34)

2024-03-01 10:42:51 UTC

In conclusion, while the international tourism has some negative aspects, I believe they are outweighed by the more significant advantages

Hiền+Băng

2024-03-01 10:43:11 UTC

In conclusion, while the rise in international tourism may have some negative affects, I believe thay are outweighed by the more significant advantages. In the future, I predict the foreign tourisn industry will not stop but will develop further

Thành - Ly

2024-03-01 10:43:18 UTC

In conlusion, There are drawback of internation tourims over the years. However, it seems to me that its advantages would be more important regarding learn more langueges and promote international cooperation mentioned in the essay

Xuan Uyen - Minh Chau

2024-03-01 10:43:52 UTC

In conclusion, while tends of tourism increase may have some negative aspects, I believe they are outweighed by the more significant positive. However, as far as I am concerned, government should enact laws for this industry for protect environment and push economic. Only by doing so can we ensure that people will have better lives.

Tuyền, Trần Thị T. Vy (34)

2024-03-01 10:47:50 UTC

In conclusion, there are drawbacks of increased tourism. However, it seems to me that its advantages would be more important regarding boost the economy and cultural exchange.

Dung, hùng

nlinhn888 — 2024-03-01 10:53:53 UTC

Those opposed to the idea of global tourism has its more advantage say that. However this trend would bring some drawbacks.

The most important disadvantage is that contributing air pollution due to dust and smoke from tourist vehicles, mainly cars and public transport

Dung-Hùng

2024-03-01 10:54:19 UTC

In spite of negative effect mentioned above. I suppose that rising travellers also bring more opportunities. The first thing is increase economic in poor countries. For instance, many job creatived to serve tourism and improve facilities of the host destination. This is because of the increased in the number of tourism make their income rose dramatically. Not only that, people can learn new languages from different countries. This is because tourism can communicate with some languages from many different place. Additionally, people also experienced some cultures from different countries in the world.

Thành - Ly

2024-03-01 10:55:50 UTC

On the one hand, it is clear that tradination travel would bring some disvantages.

The most important disvantages of tradination travel is environmental pollution. Because if tourim guest keep littering, this country will be pollution

Xuan Uyen - Minh Chau

2024-03-01 10:57:34 UTC

On the one hand, the rise of the tourism industry cause detrimentally affects local natural habitat. Firstly, many people come to tourist attractions synonymous traffic rise. Moreover, activities serving the needs of tourists such as cooking also create significant emissions. For example, more tourists use a larger amount of water, leading to

water shortage in the local area. Consequently, air quality there will be reduced due to emissions from vehicles. shortage.

In addition, a number of forests and mountains may be destroyed for building resorts and homestays, which results in a loss of wildlife habitats.Therefore, it has negative effects on the locals.

Mỹ Tiên - Hoà (34)

2024-03-01 10:57:40 UTC

On the one hand, it is clear that setting up video cameras in public places would bring some.

The most important disadvantage is that harm to local culture because people follow the trend and gradually forget their culture, that takes away the beauty of that country.

Khánh Trường

2024-03-01 10:58:13 UTC

Those opposed to the idea of cheap international travel argue that this trend will bring some disadvantages. This trend not only increases the spread of disease but also increases international crime rates.

The most important disadvantage of cheap international travel is the increase in infectious diseases

Hiền + Băng

2024-03-01 10:59:40 UTC

On the one hand, it is clear that travelling wordwide would bring some disadvantages.

The most important disavantages of international travel is increasing dependence on tourism because when tourism develops, people's income mainly depends on it. Therefore, when the epidemic broke out, their economy suffered a recession. A typical example is the covid-19 epidemic, the government ordered a lock-down. This leads to airports, restaurants, and hotels ceasing operations causing them to lose their main source of income.

Tuyền, Trần Thị T.Vy (34)

2024-03-01 11:00:27 UTC

On the one hand, it is clear that increase tourism would bring some disadvantages.

The most disadvantages is that environment pollution. For example, many tourists will leave behind a huge amount of waste. More and more vehicles lead to air pollution. This greatly affects people's health and the living environment.

Ngọc Trâm + Mộng Tường

2024-03-01 11:00:38 UTC

On the one hand, it is clear that cheap travel would buring some disadvantages. The most important disadvantages of cheap travel is Pollute regional environment. Because global tourism can lead to deforestation to make room for constructions such as hotels and restaurants to serve visitors. Result, the construction of hotels and resorts can lead to the destruction of natural habitats such as forests or coastal areas. Besides, ....