Writing Assignment - Unit 1 by Fatmah Aljohanny

Raghad Alshamrani

2020-09-10 07:47:14 UTC

First Draft:

1- My mom is a teacher.
2- She Teaches a high school students.
3- the main skill are patience ,confidence , and organisation.
4- she teaches at second secondary school.
5-she does work in office.
6-she doesn't work at factory.
8- she like to meet her friends every day and helps her students with their problems
9-teaching can be tough and stressful .
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My Mom's Work
My mom is a teacher at Second Secondary School. She works at an office not in a factory.The main skills at teaching students are confidence, patience , and organization.Teaching can be stressful and tough sometimes , but she really likes to meet her friends everyday during the week, and also helps her students with their problems.

Final Draft:

My Mom's Work
My mom is a teacher at Second Secondary School. She works at an office not in a factory.The main skills at teaching students are confidence, patience , and organization.Teaching can be stressful and tough sometimes , but she really likes to meet her friends everyday during the week, and also helps her students with their problems.

2020-09-10 07:47:21 UTC

Rahaf

First Draft:1- My father is a Specialist in public relations.
2-He is work in a company.
3-He speaks with other companies to buy the necessary materials for the company.
4-He has a lot of friendships in his work.
5- His work is from 8 in the morning until 4 in the evening.
6-His work is very nice but I feel a little tired.

“ Dad’s Great Work”
My father is a specialist in public relations. He is work in a company, he has a lot of friendships in his work. He speaks with other companies to buy the necessary materials for the company. His work is from 8 in the morning until 4 in the evening.His work is very nice but I feel a little tired.

Final Draft:

Dad’s Great Work

My father is a specialist in public relations. He is work in a company, he has a lot of friendships in his work. He speaks with other companies to buy the necessary materials for the company. His work is from 8 in the morning until 4 in the evening.His work is very nice but I feel a little tired.

Ghaida Khalid.

2020-09-10 07:47:27 UTC

First Draft:
1- My father is a teacher.
2- He teaches people.
3- He works in the office, in the school.
4- He like how to students learn from him.
5- He loves his students.
6- He should be patient and kind.

My father is a teacher. He teaches people. He works in the office, in the school. He like how to students learn from him. He loves his student. He should to be patient, and kind with his students.

Final Draft:

“My Father’s Job“
My father is a teacher. He teaches people. He works in the office, in the school. He like how to students learn from him. He loves his student. He teaches elementary school, so he should to be patient, and kind with his students.

Sarah Khalid

2020-09-10 07:47:31 UTC

First Draft :
- My Uncle is dentist
- He work in the hospital
-Helps protect teeth
-He loves his patients
-It provides health care and protection for the patient’s mouth .
-He does not like the patient to come without brushing his teeth

My Uncle work.
My uncle is dentist. He work in the hospital.He helps protect teeth. it provides health care protection for the patient’s mouth .He is always busy,he has many patients.

He loves his patients. He does not like the patient to come without brushing his teeth .

Final Draft :

My Uncle work.

My uncle is dentist. He work in the hospital.He helps protect teeth. It provides health care protection for the patient’s mouth .He is always busy,he has many patients.

He loves his patients. He does not like the patient to come without brushing his teeth .

Loreen

2020-09-10 07:47:35 UTC

First Draft:
1.My father is a operator.
2. He operates machines at the factory.
3.You should be strong,patient and speak English to work there.
4.He works in Yanpet Company.
5.He likes his friends there,so is the salary.
6.He does not like his work because he works very long hours.

My father work
My father is a operator.He operates machines at the factory.You should be strong,patient and speak English to work there.He works in Yanpet Company.He likes his friends there,so is the salary.He doesn't like his work because he works very long hours.

Final Draft:
My father work
My father is a operator.He
operates machines at the factory.You should be strong,patient and speak English to work there.He works in Yanpet Company.He likes his friends there,so is the salary.He doesn't like his work because he works very long hours.

Samar

2020-09-10 07:47:37 UTC

First Draft :
- My brother is a pharmacist.
- He provides prescriptions to patients.
-He has to pay attention to details.
-He also has to order and purchase medical supplies.
-he is able to deal with emergency situations.
-He works in a hospital.
-He loves his job because he has the desire to work in hospital and the desire to work with children.
-What he doesn't like about his job is working hours.

My Brother's Job
My brother is a pharmacist. He provides prescriptions to patients , he has to pay attention to details , he is able to deal with emergency situations ,and also has to order and purchase medical supplies.He works in a hospital. He loves his job because he has the desire to work in hospital and the desire to work with children.What he doesn't like about his job is working hours.

Final Draft:

My Brother's Job
My brother is a pharmacist. He provides prescriptions to patients , he has to pay attention to details , he is able to deal with emergency situations ,and also has to order and purchase medical supplies.He works in a hospital. He loves his job because he has the desire to work in hospital and the desire to work with children. What he doesn't like about his job is working hours.

Nouf Alomary

2020-09-10 07:47:39 UTC

First Draft:
- My cousin works as doctor.
- She helps people and also trains the staff whenever the medical district needs to be updated .
- She goes to work very early in the morning.
- She works in hospital in an office.
-She cares for her job so much. because there are lives on the line
-She needs to be brave because this job isn't easy, and she has to be quick witted.

My Cousin’s Job
My cousin works as a doctor. She goes to work very early in the morning. She helps people, and also trains her staff whenever the Medical district needs to be updated. She works in a hospital in an office. She cares for her job so much because there are lives on the line, therefor she’s so brave, and she has a quick wit because this job isn’t easy.

Final Draft:

My Cousin’s Job
My cousin works as a doctor. She goes to work very early in the morning. She helps people, and also trains her staff whenever the Medical district needs to be updated. She works in a hospital in an office. She cares for her job so much because there are lives on the line, therefor she’s so brave, and she has a quick wit because this job isn’t easy.

Reema Fahad

2020-09-10 07:47:48 UTC

First Draft:
1- My cousin is a pilot.
2-He like to travel.
3-He work in a plane.
4-He work 4 or 5 days and after that he takes 3 days a vacation.
5-He enjoys his work because he travels a lot.
6-He travels and ferry passengers.

Career Of My Cousin

My cousin is a pilot, He like to travel, He work in a plane, He work 4 or 5days and after that he takes 3 days a vacation ,He enjoys his work,He travels and ferry passengers.

Final Draft:

Career Of My Cousin

My cousin is a pilot,He like to travel,He work in a plane, He work 4 or 5days and after that he takes 3days a vacation,He enjoys his work, he travels and ferry passengers.

Ghaida Al juhani

2020-09-10 07:47:50 UTC

First Draft
1 My father is a Soldier .
2 He works to repair and launch missile .
3 It need to be strong.
4 He works in the military field .
5 He like the work hours .
6 He do not like the work. environment , and the warm atmosphere .

My Father Work
My father works as a soldier
He works to repair and launch missile ,it need to be strong, and the work hours are good but ,sometimes there are some problems so there is pressure,
but the work environment is bad and the atmosphere is hot as well .

Final Draft
My Father Works
My father works as a soldier he works to repair and launch missile it need to be strong and the work hours are good ,but sometime there some problems ,so there is pressure ,but the work environment is bad and the atmosphere is bad as well .

Basmah Baqais

2020-09-10 07:48:00 UTC

First draft :
1.My older sister is a dentist.
2.
-She treat her patients.
-Teach them the correct way to clean their teeth.
3.
-How to deal with patients.
-Length of mind.
-Smooth work.
4.She work in clinic.
5.She love helping patients and meeting a lot of people.
6.She don't like rude people and people neglect their dates.
My Sister's Job
My older sister is a dentist her name is Ghadeer, she work in F.R.B clinic here in Yanbu.
The most important skills of my sister are : how to deal with patients, length of mind, smooth work on her patients.
She treat her patients and teach them the correct way to clean their teeth.She love helping patients and meeting a lot of people.She hate rude people and people neglect their dates.

Final draft :

My Sister's Job
My older sister is a dentist her name is Ghadeer, she work in F.R.B clinic here in Yanbu.The most important skills of my sister are : how to deal with patients, length of mind, smooth work on her patients.
She treat her patients and teach them the correct way to clean their teeth.She love helping patients and meeting a lot of people.She hate rude people and people neglect their dates.

Shatha Abdoh

2020-09-10 07:48:14 UTC

First Draft:

1-My father works for YASREF company.

2-He works day and night in factories.

3-Laedership and direction.

4-He works for YASREF company.

5-Not in the office.

6-Yes, in the factory.

7-He likes that he works alone.

8-He doesn't like when he comes back to make sure of the mistakes of the workers.

My Father Job
My father works for YASREF company, he works day and night in factories, leadership and direction, he works for YASREF company, not in the office, yes in the factory, he likes that he works alone, he doesn't like when he comes back to make sure of the mistakes of the workes.

Final Draft:

My Father Job

My father works for YASREF company, he works day and night in factories, leadership and direction, he works for YASREF company, not in the office, yes in the factory, he likes that he works alone, he doesn't like when he comes back to make sure of the mistakes of the workes.

Ellen Khalid

2020-09-10 07:48:22 UTC

First Draft:
1- My father owens cars workshop and he is the manger of it.
2-He is the manger so he checks what does workers do,he contact with the customer’s and he checks if everything is alright.
3-My father’s job requires patience,responsibility,and justice.
4- He works in his own office.Where he do most of the job such as contacting with customers.
5- My father really like his job beacuse he loves cars and since he was young he memorized all the cars names,so after he retired from Sabic Company he bought this workshop.
6-He doesn’t like that dealing with workers is very hard ,and he have to check on them otherwise they won’t be working correctly.
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My Father’s Job
My father’s owens a cars workshop.He is the manger of it. As a manger he has a lot of duties.He checks what does workers do,he contacts with the customer’s and he checks if everything is alright. My father’s job requires patience,responsibility,and justice. He works in his own office where he do most of the job such as contacting with customers. My father really likes his job beacuse he loves cars and since he was young he memorized all the cars names,so after he retired from Sabic Company he bought this workshop. He doesn’t like dealing with workers beacuse it’s very hard ,and he have to check on them otherwise they won’t be working correctly.

Final Draft:

My Father’s Job

My father’s owens a cars workshop.He is the manger of it. As a manger he has a lot of duties.He checks what does workers do,he contacts with the customer’s and he checks if everything is alright. My father’s job requires patience,responsibility,and justice. He works in his own office where he do most of the job such as contacting with customers. My father really likes his job beacuse he loves cars and since he was young he memorized all the cars names,so after he retired from Sabic Company he bought this workshop. He doesn’t like dealing with workers beacuse it’s very hard ,and he have to check on them otherwise they won’t be working correctly.

Reem Ahmed

2020-09-10 07:48:25 UTC

First draft:
1- My Mother is a Teacher .
2- In every morning , she goes to school , she gives lessons , She teaches and helps students .
3- I think the most important skill in teaching is how to interact with students, especially teenage students , Also Flexibility in teaching and practicing different ways of learning .
4- My mom works in middle school, studies science, and she has a wonderful office, too
5 - My mom likes to talk to students and teach them, meet new people.
6 - My mom doesn't like the stress of working and dealing with students overwork .

My Mom job .
My Mother is a Teacher .In every morning ,she goes to school , she gives lessons , She teaches and helps students .I think the most important skill in teaching is how to interact with students, especially teenage students , Also Flexibility in teaching and practicing different ways of learning . My mom works in middle school, studies science, and she has a wonderful office, too .My mom likes to talk to students and teach them, meet new people. My mom doesn't like the stress of working and dealing with students overwork .

Final draft:
My Mom job .
My Mother is a Teacher .In every morning , She goes to school , She gives lessons, She Teaches and Helps students. I think the most important skill in teaching is how to interact with students, Especially teenage students ,Also Flexibility in Teaching and Practicing different ways of learning . My mom works in Middle school, studies science, and She has a Wonderful office, too. My mom likes to Talk to students and teach them, meet new people. My mom doesn't like the stress of working and dealing with students overwork .

Remail

2020-09-10 07:48:41 UTC

First draft :
1. My sister is a teacher.
2 . She likes to learn people .
3. She work’s in alhussan school .
4.She wake up everyday at 6 am to go to the work .
5. She likes to teach kids .
6. She Don't like long work hours .

My sister is a teacher, she loves to learn people especially children, she works in the alhussan school, she always gets up at 6 in the morning to go to school and comes back at 4 pm, in fact she loves to teach children and play with them, she don’t like the long working hours .

Final draft:
My sister is a teacher, she loves to learn people especially children, she works in the alhussan school, she always gets up at 6 in the morning to go to school and comes back at 4 pm, in fact she loves to teach children and play with them, she does not like the long working hours .

safia

2020-09-10 07:48:42 UTC

First Drarft:
My mom is a teacher.
2-Every morning you go to class
3- lt helps people learn She works in the second primary.
4-Educating people and benefiting .
6- Long time.

My mom is a teacher, Every morning you go to class
lt helps people learn She works in the second primary. Educating people and benefiting , Long time.

Lamya Tasji

2020-09-10 07:48:43 UTC

First Draft:
1-My mother was working as Teacher.
2-She teaches students.
3-She have to be good , Patience and idol teacher.
4- She work at school.
5- in office and classes.
6-She like to meet many people .
7-She don’t like The naughty students.

My Mother Work
My mother was working as teacher.She teaches a students.She have to be Good at explaining,Patience,idol teacher.she was working at school Every Morning.she was work in office and classes.She like to meet many people and make more relationships .She don’t like the naughty students but she must be patient with them.

Final Draft:
> My Mother Work<

My mother was working as teacher.She teaches a students.She have to be Good at explaining,Patience,idol teacher.she was working at school Every Morning.she was work in office and classes.She like to meet many people and make more relationships .She don’t like the naughty students but she must be patient with them.

2020-09-10 07:48:53 UTC

Dana
First Draft :

Final Draft:

Ghofran saleh

2020-09-10 07:48:55 UTC

First draft:
1.My cousin is a nurse.
2.She works in a hospital.
3.She helps people.
4.She attention to the details very well.
5.Her work makes her popular with patients.
6.She likes her job,but she doesn’t like to work long hours.

My cousin is a nurse.She works in a hospital.She helps people.She attention to the details very well.Her work makes her popular with patients.She likes her job,but she doesn’t like to work long hours.

Final draft:
“ My Cousin’s Job”
My cousin is a nurse.She works in a hospital.She helps people.She attention to the details very well.Her work makes her popular with patients.She likes her job,but she doesn’t like to work long hours.

Houda

2020-09-10 07:49:13 UTC

First Draft:
1-My sister is a great Teacher
2- She teaches students every day.
3- has a lot of skills like patience , time management, leadership.
4-she works at school and has an office.
5-She loves to learn and help students.
6-She doesn' t like wake up 6Am in the morning every day.

My sister is a great Teacher she teaches students math every day. She has a lot of skills like patience, time management, leadership. She work at school and has an office. She loves to learn and help students. She doesn't like wake up 6AM in the morning.

Final Draft:
A Sister Job
My sister is a great teacher she teaches students math every day. She has a lot of skills like patience, time management, leadership. She work at school and has an office. She loves to learn and help students,but she doesn't like wake up 6AM in the morning.

Shahad

2020-09-10 07:49:25 UTC

First Draft :
1- My father is a teacher .
2- He teaches three stages .
3- He likes to learn the students something new.
4 - He graduated from King Abdulaziz University in Jeddah.
5- He has office to teach students.
6- He is a computer teacher 👨🏻‍💻.

My Father
He is a computer teacher, he is graduated from King Abdulaziz University in Jeddah Information systems major, he teaches three stages , and he has office to teach students , he likes to learn the students a new things, and he like and enjoy in his work.

Final Draft:

My Father

He is a Computer Teacher. He is graduated from King Abdulaziz University in Jeddah. Information systems major. He teaches three stages , and he has office to teach students , he likes to learn the students a new things. Finally he likes and enjoy in his work.

Hadeel Fuad

2020-09-10 07:50:35 UTC

First Draft:
1-My uncle is a Teacher.
2-He teaches the student.
3- He liked his job very much .
4-Every day he tries to be positive,to give student this positive energy.
5-He always treats his student as his close relative so that the student don't put a distance.

My Uncle's Job
My uncle is a Teacher, he teaches the student, he liked his job very much . Every day he tries to be positive,to give student this positive energy. He always treats his student as his close relative so that the student don't put a distance.

Final Draft:

My Uncle's Job
My uncle is a Teacher, he teaches the student, he liked his job very much . Every day he tries to be positive,to give student this positive energy. He always treats his student as his close relative so that the student don't put a distance.

aljohannyf — 2020-09-10 07:59:16 UTC

Fatmah Aljohanny

2020-09-10 08:02:25 UTC

Sulaf
1- Mom and dads do the same job.
2- They are both mathematics teachers .
3-My father studies high school , and my mother is middle school.
4-They love their job , because it's close to home and her good salary.
5- They see it as an ideal profession.
6- l feel they are the best.
7- l trust their skills.

First draft:

The Mathematics Family
Mom and dads do the same job.They are both mathematics teachers .My father studies high school , and my mother is middle school.They love their job , because it's close to home and her good salary.They see it as an ideal profession. l feel they are the best teachers ever.l trust their skills.

Final draft:
The Mathematics Family

Mom and dads do the same job.They are both mathematics teachers .My father studies high school , and my mother is middle school.They love their job , because it's close to home and her good salary.They see it as an ideal profession. l feel they are the best teachers ever.l trust their skills

Reema Tawfeeq

2020-09-10 08:12:15 UTC

First Draft :
- My Mother is a teacher.
- She Is teaching English.
- She knows how to deal with students.
- She is a teacher , so she Works at school .
- She likes about her job That it have regular hour.
- She enjoys teaching students ,but she gets tired sometimes.
Mom’s job
My Mother is a teacher, she is teaching English. She is teacher ,so she works at school . She knows how to deal with students.She enjoys teaching students , but she gets tired sometimes . She likes about her job That it have regular hour.

Final Draft:
Mom’s job

My Mother is a teacher, she is teaching English. She is teacher ,so she works at school . She knows how to deal with students.She enjoys teaching students , but she gets tired sometimes . She likes about her job That it have regular hour.