AP Research Feedback by Alessio Nakani

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2024-10-04 05:56:44 UTC

Try to have less words on your slides

bkafi25 — 2024-10-04 05:56:58 UTC

Make the text more understandable and concise for people who do not know phyjics

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-04 05:57:09 UTC

anaul_25 — 2024-10-04 05:57:11 UTC

I like you're use of slide

Use less text and more visuals

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-04 05:57:14 UTC

I would say make your slides more engaging so either the text or the color or overall way of formatting everything together

mgardner25_4 — 2024-10-04 05:57:19 UTC

There were too many words on the first slide, a picture of a black whole and some text would be just as efficient.

selsaadany25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:57:24 UTC

establish more context defining different terms to the audience who is unfamiliar by what this means

2024-10-04 05:57:26 UTC

Have more eye contact and engagement with the audience

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-04 05:57:33 UTC

I would all more picture and less words to your slides

2024-10-04 05:57:36 UTC

melsissi25 — 2024-10-04 05:57:38 UTC

more colors, too dark and. dull

you are talking well to the audience.

mgardner25_4 — 2024-10-04 05:57:38 UTC

Try to balance out your use of words and images

mkashef_25 — 2024-10-04 05:57:45 UTC

Good audience engagement

bkafi25 — 2024-10-04 05:57:45 UTC

not too much info so good more pics

melsissi25 — 2024-10-04 05:57:48 UTC

Good job understanding your project

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-04 05:57:49 UTC

This is a very specialised topic - make sure to use clear, layman's vocab + explain your ideas thoroughly

mburney25 — 2024-10-04 05:57:55 UTC

considering not showing us the equation as i still struggle to understand

2024-10-04 05:57:56 UTC

Good job teaching us quantum phyjics

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-04 05:58:00 UTC

good job explaining what your formula is to the unfamiliar audience

2024-10-04 05:58:02 UTC

melsissi25 — 2024-10-04 05:58:08 UTC

good description of the equation and loud speaking

How will you be able to measure this and gather the data for an actual black hole.

abao25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:58:08 UTC

Good audience engagement when talking about the equation and why you chose it

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-04 05:58:11 UTC

Recent research is integrated

mburney25 — 2024-10-04 05:58:12 UTC

You clearly have put a lot of time and effort into understanding these concepts

bkafi25 — 2024-10-04 05:58:25 UTC

could you use more engaging visuals? How can you decrease the amount of writing and replace it with visuals?

mtaddese_25 — 2024-10-04 05:58:31 UTC

It is clear that you understand your topic, but how are you ensuring that you data collection will be feasible considering the fact that this is a complicated topic?

mkashef_25 — 2024-10-04 05:58:35 UTC

melsissi25 — 2024-10-04 05:58:36 UTC

maybe talk faster

Talking too much to audience about the context, just move on

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-04 05:58:36 UTC

How do you plan on collecting enough data to research this, especially as a high school student. I like how unique the topic is.

selsaadany25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:58:38 UTC

how will you be able to measure the confounding variables?

2024-10-04 05:58:38 UTC

use citations and make your slides visually appealing

2024-10-04 05:58:42 UTC

what is the "so what" of your research, what are you solving or bringing attention to through this? what is the purpose?

rsaboor25 — 2024-10-04 05:58:43 UTC

Wouldn't the person that published this equation have to prove it consistently works, are you sure there is a hole in the knowledge that isn't already covered by the individual who created this equation

abao25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:58:44 UTC

mmousbah25_2 — 2024-10-04 05:58:47 UTC

give us more context for the situation, it may be a it hard to follow along at times since astrophysics isn't a topic we're normally taught unless we want to learn. How do you plan to get your data? Where are you getting it from?

Is this feasible to research?

rsaboor25 — 2024-10-04 05:58:57 UTC

You have a good idea for the methodology

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-04 05:58:59 UTC

You did a good job explaining a very complicated topic.

selsaadany25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:59:01 UTC

How would you actually test this? This RQ is interesting, but how would you actually develop this and use personal studies?

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-04 05:59:05 UTC

you did a good job of breaking down the equation to make it easier to understand

mtaddese_25 — 2024-10-04 05:59:10 UTC

Your audience engagement was great, you used a good variety of gestures and tone

2024-10-04 05:59:13 UTC

Considering that the equation was only found in 2019, is there enough research for a meta analysis?

mburney25 — 2024-10-04 05:59:21 UTC

You did a really good job at simplifying the complexity of your research.

rsaboor25 — 2024-10-04 05:59:22 UTC

mmousbah25_2 — 2024-10-04 05:59:24 UTC

good job with your topic you clearly understand what your problem is.

There was too much writing in the slides, place more emphasis on images

2024-10-04 06:00:06 UTC