https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j Please leave a detailed note for Liam after his presentation! en-us 2017-04-03 18:20:52 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:58 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164440937 Clear and concise. Very well done. Explained the story very well and he had answers for all of my stupid questions ]]> 2017-04-03 18:30:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164440937 https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164441150 The writing style may be a tad cliche, but other than that, it's nice. Nice story though. It seemed to be just a normal ball, but it was more.]]> 2017-04-03 18:30:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164441150 https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164442046 The writing seems pretty strong, with very few if any errors. The emotional appeal to the ping pong ball is also what catches your attention, showing the connection between Liam and his dad.]]> 2017-04-03 18:33:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164442046 https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164445456 Strong detail in writing, catches your attention due to the importance of the tennis ball ]]> 2017-04-03 18:42:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164445456 https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164445675 An inte sting story and very emotional. Lots of egos. ]]> 2017-04-03 18:42:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164445675 https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164447870 The story was interesting and although it started off with the movie scene death of a parent, I enjoyed how it was different with the table tennis ball. Also, I was not expecting him to get the ball's ashes. ]]> 2017-04-03 18:49:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164447870 https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164447928 Very detailed and the writing was strong, but the storyline seemed a bit cliche. ]]> 2017-04-03 18:49:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164447928 https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164452132 I really liked how creative the story was and how well he summarized his story but still included the detailed needed for me to understand. I liked how he made his story different by actually letting the item be destroyed whereas in many situations the item still "survives". It was a very unique story! ]]> 2017-04-03 19:00:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164452132 https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164453954 Though the presentation was short, it was clear and straight to the point. I like how you twisted the point of The Things They Carried by making the item the soldier carried be lost. Your idea was really creative and I like how it differs from other items- since it's just ash. The story was quite emotional but unique. Your vocabulary was formal yet understandable. Overall, nice job with the story and the meaning behind the item!]]> 2017-04-03 19:06:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164453954 https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164456819 Good story, well written, flows good. Good job ]]> 2017-04-03 19:17:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164456819 maddiehrrs https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164456872 The story was very creative and detailed. I enjoyed that you had something that would not have been normally thought of as something to be taken into war.]]> 2017-04-03 19:17:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e48hoobmfg2j/wish/164456872