https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk Writing 4.15C en-us 2018-02-25 18:41:25 UTC 2023-02-15 08:19:55 UTC hello@padlet.com ricardo_alicea https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/235127031 Susan looked at him very hard, and he was quite sure from the expression on his face that he was not making fun of them. ]]> 2018-02-25 18:48:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/235127031 ricardo_alicea https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236369920 I notice Susan's name is capitalized. ]]> 2018-02-28 13:35:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236369920 https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236370584 I notice that there is a comma between hard and and]]> 2018-02-28 13:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236370584 ricardo_alicea https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236370725 I wonder why the author used the pronouns "he" and "him" instead of writing "The Professor. ]]> 2018-02-28 13:37:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236370725 s127513 https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236370798 Mya their was a comma]]> 2018-02-28 13:37:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236370798 s126835 https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236371161 I notice that after the comma there is a fanboy]]> 2018-02-28 13:38:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236371161 s1118831 https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236371335 I notice the coma ]]> 2018-02-28 13:38:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236371335 https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236372009 Susan is capitalized ]]> 2018-02-28 13:40:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236372009 s1118831 https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236372264 Susan is capital ]]> 2018-02-28 13:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236372264 https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236374593 I notice that they split the sentence with a comma]]> 2018-02-28 13:45:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ricardo_alicea/e39dajqxiqkk/wish/236374593