https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp Leave some encouraging feedback for your classmate based on the rubric! en-us 2017-09-27 13:02:47 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662806 -clearly you know about your topic 
~look more at the audience and don’t stutter honey your doing great be confident ! 
-interesting topic ]]> 2017-09-27 13:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662806 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662831 - make a little more eye contact 
-really knows about her topic
- talk a little louder
- you stay clear and right it the point 
- relax, let loose. You’re a little stiff
- I like your elaboration on each slide
- you know how to tie in the presentation ]]> 2017-09-27 13:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662831 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662845 She has a concise thought process in her presentation. She's a little shy when she presents and can her project her voice more. She should provide more eye contact and try to not look at the screen as much. Also, giving a little more passion in her words and making her slides more organized would have made her presentation better. Yet, she wrote a solid presentation and some visuals that helped make her point across. She gave a pretty decent and thorough presentation, well done.]]> 2017-09-27 13:46:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662845 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662877 She was a little too quiet but also not quiet beings where I couldn't hear her. Make sure not to look down and focus more on the audience. Don't stumble upon your words. Be confident in yourself. ]]> 2017-09-27 13:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662877 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662903 You should look at the audience more allowing for a more clear and concise presentation.

You have awkward pauses in between information, try to keep a steady flow rather than stop and try to think of what information you should present next.


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Speak up, look at us not the wall

Give us more insight

Delve deeper into your topic and provide more detail

Don't provide us with information that is common knowledge

People go to lectures to learn so keep the audience intrigued 

Flow more, know your slides like the back of your hand

Thank you for not being glued to your iPad

Good job at staying clear and concise

Just keep talking, don't stop for anything but transitions

Don't compare transgender medical procedures to cancer]]> 2017-09-27 13:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662909 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662912 - A little nervous but good explanation


]]> 2017-09-27 13:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662912 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662940 You had a strong presentation, but maybe next time familiarize yourself with your presentation more so you aren't just reading off of your PowerPoint. I could tell you felt very strongly about what you were  presenting. ]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662940 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662951 You seem nervous, and make eye contact with us give ]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662951 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662952 - Don’t be so nervous! Speak confidently 
- Very confident about opinions! (Can still dig deeper tho) -More analysis based on facts!

]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191662952 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663032 - Seem very nervous, assert some more confidence.
- PowerPoint is a little wordy. Try to condense it down to the most important information.
- I liked how I could tell you spent time on this. 
- Very passionate]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663032 shraitar000 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663051 -Speak up and face the audience.
- Don't pause so much
Rice gum gang gang]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663051 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663073 - Try to say "like" and "um" less, sound more professional
- It would help to speak up a little
- Be more confident
- Try to pause less while talking
- Try to read less from the slide right before talking
- It was good that you went in depth with your opinions and talked about why you chose your opinions]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663073 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663107 Long awkward pauses but good information on orese]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663107 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663204 Kept me entertained and a good topic.]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663204 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663261 Off the bat its shaky, just breathe and you would be fine. I like why you chose the project, and how you included specific experiences from her time in prison. You also had the background of why your character was sentenced which not many other people did👍]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663261 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663397 The grammar in your PowerPoint could have been improved a bit. Don't put a space between the word and the subsequent comma (ex. 'word, next word' not 'word , next word')
The specific examples in your PowerPoint added to your argument solidly.
Try maintaining more eye contact with the class, and attempt to improve the flow of your speech. 
There were a lot of interesting quotes in your presentation!
Try arguing against the opposing points of your presentation ]]> 2017-09-27 13:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663397 bayonjoh001 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663767 Very nervous 
Lots of info presented 
More confidence]]> 2017-09-27 13:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191663767 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191664153 -speak louder and more confidently 
-don't look at the slides so much 
-have more pi]]> 2017-09-27 13:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191664153 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191664929 - Talk a little louder 
- Eye contact with audience 
- Don't looks at your slides as much 
- Good point at the end 
- Like all of the information 
-]]> 2017-09-27 13:50:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191664929 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191665936 Seemed really nervous, but your presentation was really good.]]> 2017-09-27 13:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191665936 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191667768 Interesting]]> 2017-09-27 13:54:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191667768 https://padlet.com/elsong/e1s2pzi455zp/wish/191669835 -good points
- detailed and interesting information 

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