Writing Institute Body Paragraphs by Kayla Zitzmann

kzitzmann1 — 2024-10-10 15:29:36 UTC

Children are truly benefiting from the camels of Garissa. It is changing them as readers. In paragraph 10 it mentions, “It is a great way to engage the children’s hearts and minds through a book.” And also in paragraph 11 it mentions, “Muchilwa hopes to encourage children to become lifelong readers and learners.” ______________________

kzitzmann1 — 2024-10-10 15:32:14 UTC

____________________________________________________. “Now, around 80% of adults in the country are able to explore the world of books.” So its not only useful for the kids but the mobile library can also can be useful for adults too!

kzitzmann1 — 2024-10-10 15:35:21 UTC

Because the Camel Mobile Library is making a big difference, on camel delivery at a time is helping grow the ability to read and write all across Garissa. The text reads, ______________. This reveals, that at least every delivery has an impact on the percentage of literacy and that number can keep increasing as the succuss of the mobile library grows.

kzitzmann1 — 2024-10-10 15:38:29 UTC

___________________________________________. In the selection it says, “Local residents are used to seeing products such as food and medicine arrive by camel.” This shows that people in the Garissa region are used to using goods and services from camels.

kzitzmann1 — 2024-10-10 15:41:33 UTC

The government of Kenya has worked hard to improve Garissa's reading and writing skills. It has for

sure helped because 80% of adults in the country are able to read and write. In the text it says "The people of Garissa work as animal herders and move about from place to place. Permanent libraries aren't always nearby, so books come to the people instead." This shows _______________.

kzitzmann1 — 2024-10-10 16:15:11 UTC

The Camel Mobile Library also benefits the government of Kenya, too. By providing books, the CML helps children learn to read. _______________________________________. With CML, Kenya will surpass 80% literacy improvement because of the children learning how to read with these mobile books.

kzitzmann1 — 2024-10-29 16:47:18 UTC

One way the Camel Mobile Library affected people in Garissa is by going into places that aren't very accessible. The article states, _________________________________. It's not easy for people in Garissa to get books from an actual library, the Camel Mobile Library is helping put books in everyone's hands no matter what their living conditions.

kzitzmann1 — 2024-10-29 16:48:42 UTC

Another way the “Camel Mobile Library” has affected people in Garissa is that children get the opportunity to read and learn from the books. The “Camel Mobile Library” works with school classes so the children at school get an opportunity to read. “The librarians carefully arrange books by subject. School classes take turns sitting under the tent, and each child eagerly reaches out to receive a book.” _______________________________________.

kzitzmann1 — 2024-10-29 16:49:57 UTC

The camel library inspired Alfre Muchilwa, an illustrator of children’s books. He believes that reading is a toolkit that helps people communicate with others. He is always searching for stories that are meaningful to children in his country. _________________.

2024-10-30 18:27:12 UTC

This shows how the mobile library has positively affected the people of Garissa.

Exemplar 1

2024-10-30 18:27:52 UTC

Missing EXPLAIN:

ADD: This shows that the camel library benefits the children of Garissa by encouraging them to become more proficient readers.

Missing a topic sentence to introduce the paragraph.

2024-10-30 18:29:34 UTC

2024-10-30 18:30:58 UTC

Missing the text evidence to show the percentages of how literacy has increased across the area.