https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07 Please leave a detailed note for Marco after his presentation! en-us 2017-04-03 18:22:59 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:58 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164440507 You're vocabulary was strong and I liked the plot of the story. The detail presented throughout the story helped the audience (me) understand the plot better. The meaning behind the item was sweet yet shocking.]]> 2017-04-03 18:28:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164440507 maddiehrrs https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164445687 The vocabulary and good, and I liked that the plot went from focusing on the soldier to focusing more on the collateral damage that war can cause. ]]> 2017-04-03 18:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164445687 https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164446167 It was well written, some of the transitions were a little clunky, one was really sudden in my opinion. But the story the plot over layered the story with a thick layer of creativity, that was really well done and rich. The format was well done and the object was tied in very well. The language seemed to be very high military based language. Overall great job ]]> 2017-04-03 18:44:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164446167 https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164447784 The item is very creative, I think it was a great fit for this assignment and fits the story well good intro to the story. Sounds like a story, not an essay, really enjoyed it. I loved how the story switched from the soilder to the item.]]> 2017-04-03 18:48:57 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164447784 https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164448116 Nice setup and introduction. The flow is very smooth, and I would think it's the introduction of a book had I not known. There were nice character connections, and real emotional feelings in there.]]> 2017-04-03 18:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164448116 https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164450964 Marco from the beginning captures your attention with the detailed and vivid imagery. He's the only one so far that focuses on more than one main character, and even ours in side conversations that help build the plot. The tragic death at the end even though is forshawdowed is still Sulrising, and made me feel bad for the poor kid.]]> 2017-04-03 18:56:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164450964 https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164451250 there was a clearly planned out and strongly detailed plot. ]]> 2017-04-03 18:57:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164451250 https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164451262 Extended vocabulary, caught attention from the very beginning, well thought out story very creative ]]> 2017-04-03 18:57:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164451262 https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164453846 Marco's story was really different and ]]> 2017-04-03 19:06:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164453846 https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164454481 Story was very detailed. You could tell that alot  of thought was put into it. ]]> 2017-04-03 19:08:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164454481 https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164457554 I really enjoyed how detailed and descriptive the story was. I enjoyed how he read it, it kept me interested. The item he chose was very different and unique,it was very good! ]]> 2017-04-03 19:19:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/e146rafmwk07/wish/164457554