CAT 05 Film essay analysis 10M 2017 by Andrew Bergh https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey Made with a taste for adventure en-us 2017-09-08 01:43:05 UTC 2017-09-08 02:24:32 UTC hello@padlet.com Clear intro https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742679 I wrote a good and clear introduction preparing the readers for a planned essay format ]]> 2017-09-08 02:10:48 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742679 Used Multiple Examples to Prove My Point https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742715 I wrote more than two film techniques in each paragraph to prove my point.]]> 2017-09-08 02:11:05 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742715 Improvements to applyi https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742729 Include the film technique(s) being discussed in the paragraph in the topic sentence. 

Use "and" instead of an ampersand.]]> 2017-09-08 02:11:11 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742729 Punctuation https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742732 I need to learn how to use punctuation properly and learn how to use punctuation so that it will be affective in my writing.]]> 2017-09-08 02:11:12 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742732 i cant spelll https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742841 hatetered]]> 2017-09-08 02:11:41 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742841 Examples https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742935 I clearly explained what each example shows]]> 2017-09-08 02:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742935 USING FILM TECHNIQUES https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742959 I explained film techniques well and used multiple examples]]> 2017-09-08 02:12:15 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742959 Using clear examples https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742999 I used good and clear examples from the film to back up my points ]]> 2017-09-08 02:12:30 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185742999 PARAGRAPHS https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743025 I wrote well-structure paragraphs]]> 2017-09-08 02:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743025 Speling https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743084 I need to work on my speling. 

   ]]> 2017-09-08 02:12:58 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743084 One thing i did well https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743123 One thing i did well was not caring about this class lol]]> 2017-09-08 02:13:12 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743123 Contractions https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743130 I used contractions.]]> 2017-09-08 02:13:14 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743130 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743155  ]]> 2017-09-08 02:13:22 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743155 SPELLING https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743159 I need to work on spelling a little bit]]> 2017-09-08 02:13:24 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743159 Film Shots https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743309 I used film shots to back up my ideas.

]]> 2017-09-08 02:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743309 Did well in and did badly in. https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743312 I wrote a succinct introduction which prepares reader for a planned essay format. 

I need to improve my paragraph structure.

Love Noah]]> 2017-09-08 02:14:15 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743312 I Need To Improve On Writing Topic Sentences https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743316 I missed out on writing a topic sentence on a paragraph.

]]> 2017-09-08 02:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743316 Spelling/grammar https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743446 I need to prove on my Spelling and grammar more]]> 2017-09-08 02:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743446 Spelling https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743447 I need to work on my spelling because its the only thing holding me back form merit]]> 2017-09-08 02:15:00 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743447 Missing topic sentences https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743467 I need to focus more in making clear topic sentences ]]> 2017-09-08 02:15:06 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743467 well written introduction https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743473 I am able to correctly introduce the reader to the subject matter of the essay and the topics of each paragraph]]> 2017-09-08 02:15:09 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743473 THA WHOLE ESSAY https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743510 I need to improve on writing essays]]> 2017-09-08 02:15:23 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743510 SPELLING https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743515 Need to learn how to spell marriage and other words.]]> 2017-09-08 02:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743515 Structure https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743527 I didn't write a fully structured paragraph that relates to the question]]> 2017-09-08 02:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743527 Clearly explaining what each example shows https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743546 I clearly explained my examples and film techniques in the text]]> 2017-09-08 02:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743546 EXPLANATIONS https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743552 I clearly explained how the examples relate well]]> 2017-09-08 02:15:40 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743552 Structure https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743580 Something that i did well was that i had good structure in my essay and i had a introduction, 3 paragraphs, and a conclusion. And I tried my best to use the TEXT format.

]]> 2017-09-08 02:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743580 Formal Words https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743636 I need to try to imput formal words instead of informal?   ]]> 2017-09-08 02:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743636 Bad grammar + Great explanation of film shots samantha_pratt1 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743675 2017-09-08 02:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743675 In https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743678 2017-09-08 02:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743678 Clearly stated the film techniques used in a particular scene for a particular purpose https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743684 Included the director's usage of close ups, two shots, mid shots, dialogue, etc. and described the effect of these techniques.]]> 2017-09-08 02:16:19 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743684 A good introduction https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743756 I wrote a good introduction that prepares reader for a planned essay format.]]> 2017-09-08 02:16:41 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743756 Structure https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743768 I need to work on the structure of my paragraphs and remember to tie back.

]]> 2017-09-08 02:16:45 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743768 I need to have better grammar/punctuation https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743847 I need to not use contractions ]]> 2017-09-08 02:17:15 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743847 BODY PARAGRAPH STRUCTURE https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743874 I need to work on having a clear topic sentence]]> 2017-09-08 02:17:23 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743874 Structure https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743912 I understand a structure of an essay.]]> 2017-09-08 02:17:41 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743912 I didn't use the correct tense https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743927 Was instead of is]]> 2017-09-08 02:17:46 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743927 completion https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743929 yet again, I was unable to finish my essay and neatly wrap up with a conclusion]]> 2017-09-08 02:17:47 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743929 Better paragraph structure https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743940 I need to make sure i have to include tie backs ]]> 2017-09-08 02:17:55 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743940 explanation https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743946 i wrote a clear explanation and need t]]> 2017-09-08 02:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/e11u4rhaltey/wish/185743946