Fiction Workshop by Naomi Pandey https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi for all the fiction-enthusiasts in middle school. please make your submissions here under the proper columns! It's compulsory to put your name, you can't go anonymous! You may want to scroll sideways to access all columns for session 3. en-us 2021-06-13 15:52:59 UTC 2024-07-22 21:42:43 UTC hello@padlet.com Keisha https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604476752 Name of the character: Thinking
Protagonist or Antagonist: Protagonist
Gender: Girl
Age: 11
Appearance: Short black hair and intense olive green lined light green eyes, pale complexion and short.
General disposition: Sad/angry
Where: A lonely hill
Strengths: Is loyal to her only friend who's name I am still thinking and is good at dealing with other people's problems
Weakness: Gets annoyed easily and says things she later regrets
Paragraph: Two girls walked on the lonely hill, one girl very prominent because of her sudden movements. The wind whipped her black hair behind and made her look like she was a dark haired ghost. Her light green eyes darted around the hill for wild animals as her friend talked to her. Her friend, ___ was struggling to tie her long, curly, chocolate brown hair as it flew around her and never settled on her shoulders like it usually did. Her blue eyed friend knew ___ was deep in thought and did not make an effort to disturb her.


]]> 2021-06-14 06:41:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604476752 Pranit PranitGulati https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604493401 My character’s name is Joe Denver, he is the protagonist of my story. His gender is male; his age is 16 years old and was born on March 30 2005. He has black hair and he is the most handsome teenager in his class. He has been upset that the girls only be with him as he is very handsome but does not care of his talent so he basically is very addicted to the phone so that he feels good and just forget about the girls who just like him because of him being handsome also because the boys only be with him because of his pro gaming and do not care about his drama skills. He lives at Berlin, Germany with his mother as his father died two years ago and did not shift to London with his grandparents as Berlin is the final memory of Joe’s father to his family.

Strengths 

1.     Pretty good at drama
2.    Huge gamer
3.    Respectful 
4.    Kind
5.    Patient

Weaknesses 

1.     Has handsome hair which prevents his strength to be noticed.
2.    Usually alone
3.    Eating lot of junk food to not let anyone see he is sad
4.    Watches a lot of screen devices to not be sad of everyone not caring about his skills.

]]> 2021-06-14 06:52:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604493401 Navya Sundararajan https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604499136 My character is a protagonist with a sort of negative character arc. Its more of awareness. She's a woman, and was born on 5th September, 2000. She is very attractive. She has rosy cheeks, symmetrical features and straight brown hair, light brown skin. However after her character arc, she has a very demanding aura around her, and is intimidating. Shes been played with. Shes been taught the old ways of life and has been manipulated by the people in her lives. She doesn't trust anyone and hasnt been taught individuality until the character arc. The story is probably set in a dystopian era where only a few women reign and where most rich women are taught misogynistic gender roles (anne with an e types) after her character arc she becomes aware and bloodthirsty when required. Like very daunting. She also finds love after many tribulations!!


Strengths
Brave, ambitious, hardworking, willing to help innocents.
Weaknesses
Brutal, harsh, doesnt trust other easily, can manipulate others if she wants to, intimidating.]]> 2021-06-14 06:57:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604499136 Aanya hi_noobs_its_me https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604507561 The name of my character is mikano.She is a protagonist. She is a female and she’s 23 years old. She has bright blonde hair, short yet sleek. Her eyes are green like the plants and has a beautiful, yet enclosed choice of clothes since she’s colourblind. She has a scar on her eye that she got when her own mother tried to kill her. She’s very daring and independent, she does not let her emotions get to her and is rational, she’s always ready for an adventure. She has anger issues and if someone comments something negative about her she will get upset (she’s sensitive). She bottles up her emotions and she gets mad at every little thing. She was born in Denmark when her mother found out her father left her for another woman. She doesn’t settle at just one place. She see’s her friends as her family. She does not like animals nor does she like human interaction. As a child she was independent and strong, yet an introvert. She got bullied for having no parents and being poor. She stays strong and does not believe is miracles. Her mother had severe mental damage and was going insane, she tried to kill her own daughter thinking she was the reason her father left her. The era of this story is 2037. She also has an eating disorder.]]> 2021-06-14 07:03:29 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604507561 Vanisha Vanisha_Agarwal https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604541573 My character’s name: Lucy 

Protagonist or antagonist: She would originally be an antagonist (evil one) but she will appear as a good antagonist in between as well.

Gender: Girl

Age: Something around 12 or 13

Appearance: Short and curly brown hair, short height, dull brown eyeballs with chocolate brown lining, fair complexion.

General disposition: She would be over-proud in the beginning of the story but later on she will turn out be a very jealous girl when a new student joins in (who is far better than her in behaviour, academics, sports and illustration).But she would hide her jealous behaviour in order to be considered better than that new joiner by appearing as helpful and happy in the middle of the story.

Living place: London

Strengths: Studies well, Good in sports , drawing and painting.

Weaknesses: Over-proud in the beginning of the story, feeling of being the superior, disrespectful towards her classmates , she will dis value her classmates, mean, rude and selfish behaviour, jealous in the later part of the story.]]> 2021-06-14 07:26:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1604541573 Shriyanka shriyanka_srivastava https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609782062 The breeze blew softly shaking the trees, letting the beautiful yet delicate, pink flowers fall on the ground. Greenery surrounded the whole place giving it a euphoric vibe. The tree bent over as though trying to peek into the serene lake to admire it's beauty. The lake spread out covering most of the land. A small path had been carved between the astonishing tree and tranquil lake leading to a enchanting gazebo stood in the midst of the lake. the top of the gazebo was shaped like a pyramid as it provided shade whereas the sides had a captivating design carved into them. The banks of the lake were covered with thick, soft grass making it seem like a fluffy blanket that the earth was wearing.]]> 2021-06-16 11:58:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609782062 Vedanshee 6 kanha https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609784581 My character is a girl named Veda. Who is about 13 years old. 
Description: Height of a 9th grader. Short straight hair curled from the bottom. Always wearing a red bow on head. blue and white snickers. Blue short frock (up to knees).
Strengths
Quick learner
Explorer
Nature lover
Not stressful

Weaknesses
No track of time
Lost into own world most of the time

]]> 2021-06-16 12:00:29 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609784581 Kriday Babbar kridaybabbar https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609786606 the breeze blew gently shaking the beautiful blossomed tree right in front of a chinese style, double story hut but if i speak frankly it looked like a watchout tower in middle of a very neatly mown garden in the middle of which  a brown thin stream paved with small greenish stones. the stream ran swish swashing softly along the way, making the scene look  like paradise.
  ]]> 2021-06-16 12:02:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609786606 Radhika tayal radhikatayal007 https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609788502 There is a beautiful scenery which have have a small home type gate and small animals are there it is looking greenish.
There is a small thin pathway also  where we can go ,there are many gorgeous colour flower tree.]]> 2021-06-16 12:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609788502 Vedanshee https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609793716 The breeze were cold as snow. There were puddles all around. The floor was wet which would let anyone easily slip. The blossoming flowers were smiling towards me.  There was a little 2 story hut in between waiting patiently for someone to come in it. To be honest it looked more like a person with a hat and two tiny legs. I went in it and sat. There were some bushes somewhere near and I heard some rustling and turned my head to see nothing so I continued. I was lost in my own world with no track of time. Thinking of the world always being the same silent and peaceful, no one there to disturb.]]> 2021-06-16 12:07:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609793716 Mriya https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609806067 He pushed past the cascading vines and gasped. A beautiful tree with pale, rough bark and no leaves stood in front of a tranquil lake. The tree's thin branches drooped like a weeping willow's, weighed down by its many blossoms. The pretty blooms, delicate looking and a vibrant shade of pink, hung open. Behind the tree stood a serene lake, with flowers floating gently downstream. In the midst of the rippling lake stood a stately gazebo, antique looking with the elegant wooden panels. The wind softly rustled the leaves of the trees far behind like a sweet lullaby hidden away in this secret world.]]> 2021-06-16 12:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609806067 Radhika tayal radhikatayal007 https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609808355 A pink gorgeous  flower bending to welcome happily . That was a silent and peaceful place . ]]> 2021-06-16 12:17:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609808355 Vanisha Vanisha_Agarwal https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609811770 Here is my description:]]> 2021-06-16 12:19:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609811770 Vedanshee 6 kanha https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609822203 I was simply walking down the busy streets. cars were as usual honking at me as if I'd not known where to go while walking. I went on the bench nearby and sat there. Suddenly I started hearing creepy roaring at my back. My heart started pounding. I was too scared to turn my head around. But then something hugged me. I realised it was just my cousin giving me a hug. I hugged him back and questioned him about the roaring.
Me: Hey what's all that roaring you were doing?
Brother: Oh nothing, I just wanted to surprise you. I've been taking classes about making different types of voices of animals.
Me: Seriously? Where do you get classes which tell you how to make different voices of animals? By the way, whoever is taking such classes is crazy. What would you do by learning to make animal noises? Probably he's just doing it for time pass.
Brother: Hey, what are you lost in?
Me: Doesn't he get it himself because he is doing such a thing which makes no sense wouldn't the person wonder about it?
Me: Oh it's nothing. 
Brother: Then tell me how you like the classes!
Me: Seriously? Is he asking that?
Me: Yeah they seem interesting but…. Yeah… just ignore it.


]]> 2021-06-16 12:25:23 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609822203 Shriyanka shriyanka_srivastava https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609822323 *Leo POV*
Don't burst in flames, DO NOT burst in flames. Oh goddd ahhhhh
phew calm down it's just a date nothing more ok. Come on dude, get grip on yourself, what? you can die and come back but you can't face a girl? It's easy dude, you'll take her to the movies, go grab a bite and then take her back to camp. Alright let's just make something- oh great i don't have my toolbelt i knew i should've bought it but "Ms. perfect" (you know who i mean fellow demigods)
told me girls found it unattractive having a boy making machines during a date-like whatt? Anyways what's the time-IT'S 6:59! OH MY HAD- probably shouldn't, don't want hellhounds chasing us while we are in the movie hall. But she'll be here is my breath ok? are my clothes good enough?
"Hi Leo"
"Oh-umm-ah heeey Calypso..... wassup?"
"giggles seriously wassups the best you could do?"
"Uhm uh no?"
"I'm kidding valdez let's go!"]]> 2021-06-16 12:25:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609822323 Shriyanka shriyanka_srivastava https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609824774  Character
Name - Leo
Age -17 
Gender- Boy
Family - Sister (Mother died due to fire, dad is a god)
Favourite thing- Fire, food
Friends - Jason, Piper, Percy , Annabeth, Hazel, Frank.]]> 2021-06-16 12:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609824774 Radhika tayal radhikatayal007 https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609827714 Me :It was a now le day that everyone has , I was doing whatever I  do in a day , a message came of my father I checked it and it says :I am bring the camera today.
 After few minutes my mother and sister asked me what was the message .
Me: nothing just father said he is getting a new camera.
Mother : okay 
Me I was very very excited for it and waiting for when father will come and I was thinking a lot that. When the camer will come ,which model ,etc .
Father ,mother : came and said the new camera is kept In the main table. ..
Me : ok ,bye.

]]> 2021-06-16 12:28:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609827714 Vanisha Vanisha_Agarwal https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609850811 Here is my internal monologue:]]> 2021-06-16 12:41:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609850811 Aanya https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609854984 So, here I am waiting alone in the famous, and “beautiful” art museum. This is rubbish, just paint smeared along the canvas. Even I could do that. Hm, (name) hasn’t arrived yet. They know I hate when people aren’t punctual. Let me check my phone. What if they got caught? No, that can’t happen. They have a lot of body guards. Maybe they lost “it”. Nope, won’t happen. Hm, no text, or calls. It’s been 7 minutes since our actual time. Oh, I see their limo, a “great” way of being undercover. Okay, focus. Now I have to exchange the bag with my bag smoothly and slowly.]]> 2021-06-16 12:44:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609854984 Mriya https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609865179 I sat nervously, trying to ignore the rampaging thoughts that tore around like a pack of wolves in my aching head. I thought what Dira would have said if she was there. 'Your mind cannot be controlled without understanding. Do not hold your thoughts back. Let them guide you.' Her voice rang through my head, sounding so real, it hurt my heart. Focus, I told myself. One problem at a time.

So I let the thoughts surface. They clawed their way around and stormed their way through my mind like a hurricane. Each opened a wound deeper than the last. Is this the right choice? What if it's a huge mistake? Will this be worth it? What if... he's a traitor too? What if someone gets hurt because of me... again?

I shoved the thoughts out of my head, gasping. I couldn't take it anymore. My emotions swirled and rose, gaining more and more power as they mixed together - anger, sadness, betrayal, fear, grief. And determination. A growing determination that couldn't be quelled. I made myself a silent promise - Nobody was getting hurt this time.]]> 2021-06-16 12:49:22 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609865179 Keisha https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609869448 She’s left, (name) thought. She’s left. She felt a strange, empty, numbness inside her, as her chest heaved with emotion and she burst into tears. It was complete pandemonium Blurred and disconnected thoughts raced through her head. Is she coming back?... Is she sad too? But the most prominent thought in her head was Will she ever forgive me? It stayed in her head as she ripped apart pillows and curled up in her bed strangling blankets. End it, just end it, let it be over, let it be perfect again, let it be normal. Floods of tears poured down her face once again, and thunder boomed and it started to rain both inside and outside.]]> 2021-06-16 12:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609869448 Keisha https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609869977 The clear water of the lake had bubbles floating upon it. It looked like there was an alternate universe submerged deep in the small body of water. The little gazebo perched on the lake looked like it was floating, owing to the water crowded around it. A sweet-smelling cherry blossom tree had fallen flowers around it and the fragrant blooms were sitting peacefully on the lake. The path under the cherry blossom tree was surrounded by rocks and fungi, all arranged and lined up beside the narrow path. There were other trees too surrounding the lake, green flowy leaves growing on unpredictable branches of a young tree, its father standing beside him with identical messy, orange, hand sized leaves. The lone cherry blossom tree stood out greatly because of its beautiful, pink colour. Bushes looked up at the big trees, dreaming that one day they will be just as big as them.


]]> 2021-06-16 12:51:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609869977 Keisha https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609874242 The blue sky was streaked with orange and red hues. The tall mountain had clouds crowding around his head, and the mountain wore its crown like a king. The sun and the moon were shining, a deer darted around the hill under the moon which gave it a silvery look as it ran gracefully up the hill. Tall, beautiful pine trees swirled upwards towards the snowy tip of the mountain. At the feet of the tallest peak, a lake lay at its feet, reflecting the uniquely colored sky with its two beautiful balls of light. ]]> 2021-06-16 12:54:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1609874242 Mriya https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1613895660 She hadn't started out as a dragon. No, that had happened more a year ago. She slowly awoke with a screech, uncoiling her long, shimmering black body, stretched her powerful wings that would send an eagle cowering and rose, ready to blow out fire and torch... 'No.' She stopped herself just in time. It was getting harder and harder to fight it off, she realized wearily. Gently landing on the barren ground, she tried to get a grip.

Her eyes strayed to the softer scales on her stomach, that were violet.

'Violet. Your name is Violet. 392 days ago, you were a strong, intelligent, beautiful girl of 16. You had long black hair, olive brown skin and violet eyes. You were the most intelligent child in the village and pretty strong too so you had a few friends and many envious people. Life was good. But then an evil man came. He...'

Her recital stopped abruptly - she had forgotten the rest. But with that came a more frightening realization than amnesia - the beast was taking over.]]> 2021-06-18 07:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1613895660 Aanya hi_noobs_its_me https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1616112119 I take a deep breath and see him in a “disguise”. Ugh, he was in a LIMO! How’s that for a disguise? -.-
He enters the gallery, I notice him but I try not to show it, he’s disguising as a “nobody”- with a limousine.
“I betcha didn’t notice me.” he whispered in a proud tone, with a little wink accompanying his words.
“I did, but I guess I don’t need to show much importance to you.” I replied while shattering his pride.
“Okay Mikano, stop being so arrogant or the deal is over”
“Deal? Heh, I don’t really care, since the loss isn’t mine, but yours.” I spat a clever reply at him, but he wasn’t as satisfied as I was.
“Okay, fine. I have what you want in a pink bag. It’s been trending a lot, see?” 
He points at a bunch of people who have the exact same bag
“it’s pink and elegant and sleek. It’s cheap and amazing! I bought my wife the same one in blu-“
“Okay, shut up already?” I interrupt him bitterly
He raises his hand and remotely calls one of his bodyguards, who disguised as a painter. He brings a bag and reaches in the grab “it”.
“Sir, I think... I think we messed up.. the.. bags. uhm, it’s not here-. The only thing I can see is a sephora knockoff lipst-“ 
“WHAT?! YOU MESSED UP THE BAGS?!” He bursted out, literally!
“Now that you’ve messed up, the deal is off.” I say in a professional tone
“No, wait! Please. My boys will sort it out, please. Just wait.” He has a bit of desperation in his voice.
]]> 2021-06-20 12:25:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1616112119 Aanya hi_noobs_its_me https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1616112964 The gallery was full of people, it was open to the public. Many people with high standards usually visited this place. Paintings hung on the wall. As mikano said, they were just paint smeared across the canvas, yet they were so amazing and unique. The walls were white and lit, the ceiling and floor were a Sandy shade of plywood. It was very well lit, along with small, golden chandeliers hung on the sides.]]> 2021-06-20 12:27:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nataliehealer1/e10y8jzdwrrpfcqi/wish/1616112964