Problems of the informal letter by 梁文慈LEUNG MAN CHI https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6 Rewrite the sentences and make them formal enough to be able to fit in the application letter en-us 2024-05-12 10:59:35 UTC 2024-05-14 07:01:51 UTC hello@padlet.com Leung lmcg1 https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991996202 1. No addresses]]> 2024-05-14 06:35:23 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991996202 Travis https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991996715 Too causal

Take care

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]]> 2024-05-14 06:35:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991996775 Alex https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991996913 1.no greeting]]> 2024-05-14 06:35:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991996913 Short form https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991997231 2024-05-14 06:36:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991997231 Rain s20224001g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991997496 No subject

]]> 2024-05-14 06:36:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991997496 Travis https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991997524 Too many own feeling

Excited

]]> 2024-05-14 06:36:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991997524 Vina https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991997993 Informal greeting]]> 2024-05-14 06:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991997993 Take care not Yours faithfully https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991998157 2024-05-14 06:36:47 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991998157 https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991998334 not a formal closing

]]> 2024-05-14 06:36:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991998334 CCK s20191009g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991998344 I don't know

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]]> 2024-05-14 06:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991999326 Ian s20191003g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991999694 The Complimentary close is "take care"]]> 2024-05-14 06:37:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991999694 Short form s20191049g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991999848 2024-05-14 06:37:57 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2991999848 Rain s20224001g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992000571 no response to the requirements

]]> 2024-05-14 06:38:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992000571 I would like to apply for the position of English playground Instructor at Oxford University Press Ltd.as advertised in the menu on 5th May 2023 https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992013286 2024-05-14 06:46:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992013286 Rain s20224001g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992013713 I am writing to apply for the position of English Playground Instructor at Oxford University Press(China) Ltd. as advertised in the JobMarket website on 14th May.

]]> 2024-05-14 06:47:00 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992013713 Shelly s20191049g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992014139 I am writing to apply for the position of English Playground Instructor at Oxford University Press(China)Ltd. as advertised in the Jump website https://jump.mingpao.com on 14th May 2024.]]> 2024-05-14 06:47:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992014139 https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992014398 I am writing to apply for the position of English Playground

Instructor advertised in the Jump website

https://jump.mingpao.com/ on 8th May 2024. With a strong

passion for Education and relevant qualifications, I believe I

am a perfect fit.

]]> 2024-05-14 06:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992014398 Travis https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992015335 I am writing to apply for the English Playground Instructor at Oxford University Press (China) Ltd as advertised ming pao on 14th may

]]> 2024-05-14 06:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992015335 https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992016073 I writing to apply for the position of the English Playground Instructor at Oxford University Press(China)Ltd.on the 5th may,2024

]]> 2024-05-14 06:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992016073 Ian s20191003g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992016642 I am writing to apply for the English Playground Instructor at Oxford University Press (China) Ltd. as advertised on website of jobsdb hk.jobsdb.com on 8th may , 2024]]> 2024-05-14 06:48:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992016642 Vina https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992017806 Dear sir /madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of English playground instructor at Oxford university press advertised on the job market website on 5th may 2024.With a strong passion for education.I believe i am a perfect fit]]> 2024-05-14 06:49:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992017806 travis https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992027960 i have graduated from University of Hong Kong with a master degree in education

]]> 2024-05-14 06:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992027960 Shelly s20191049g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992029626 I have graduated from the University of Hong Kong and gained valuable knowledge in English Studies which enhanced my English foundation.]]> 2024-05-14 06:57:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992029626 Alex s20191037g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992031500 I have graduated form University of HK.]]> 2024-05-14 06:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992031500 CCK s20191009g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992033392 I am graduate from the University of Hong Kong with Bachelor degree in education.

]]> 2024-05-14 07:00:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992033392 I https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992036162 I recently completed my degree in Education at the University of HongKong.Through my university journey,i gained valuable knowledge in english studies which enhanced my english foundation.]]> 2024-05-14 07:01:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992036162 Ian s20191003g https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992036538 I have gradated form University of Hong Kong with a master degree majoring in language skills knowledge in English Studies ]]> 2024-05-14 07:02:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lmcg1/e0ntondfqv1spfg6/wish/2992036538