Scoring Essays Correctly by Aileecia Ceaser https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn Examining Wise Writing Decisions: 3rd, and 5th period en-us 2022-03-08 02:37:26 UTC 2025-12-23 06:33:45 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4da.png Explain why this essay scored a 3. What did the student do RIGHT? How could this student have earned a BETTER score? aileecia_ceaser https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023266 2022-03-08 02:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023266 Explain how this student used T-E-D-S-S to score a 3. What did the student do CORRECT? How could this student have earned a higher score? aileecia_ceaser https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023267 2022-03-08 02:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023267 Explain how this ESL student scored a 4! How did this student use T-E-D-S-S? What did they do well? What techniques can you steal for your writing? aileecia_ceaser https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023269 2022-03-08 02:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023269 Explain why this essay (written by an ESOL student/language learner) scored a 3. What did the student do WELL? How could this student have earned a HIGHER score? What techniques can you steal from this student? aileecia_ceaser https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023272 2022-03-08 02:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023272 T-E-D-S-S aileecia_ceaser https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023277 T- The THESIS statement clearly explained WHAT + WHY. Readers know EXACTLY what the writer thinks and the reason. 
E- The EXAMPLE is CLEAR and SPECIFIC. 
D- The DETAILS clearly SHOW readers who, what, when, where, why, and how. 
S- The "SO WHAT" or commentary that EXPLAINS how this example PROVES the thesis. It explains why this example matters.
S- The STRUCTURE for the essay is correct. The writer made smart choices such as: 
-using appropriate transitions to connect sentences WITHIN THE PARAGRAPH and from linking one paragraph to another. 
-each paragraph has a clear topic sentence  that moves from the paragraph before to the present paragraph
-the main idea is THREADED throughout the novel using appropriate synonyms. (For example, success= accomplishments, overcoming setbacks, rising above obstacles, achieving goals, etc. The writer doesn't repeat success over and over again. 
-the thesis is restated to provide the overall essay with a clear opening and closing]]> 2022-03-08 02:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023277 READ CAREFULLY! aileecia_ceaser https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023278 Each of these essays either scored a 3 (on grade level) or 4 (advanced grade level). Read each essay and tell me why this writer received a high score. Look at the types of reasons below. ]]> 2022-03-08 02:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023278 Explain how this student used T-E-D-S-S to score a 3. What did the student do CORRECT? How could this student have earned a higher score? aileecia_ceaser https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023281 2022-03-08 02:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023281 Explain why this essay score an ADVANCED 4! How did this student use TEDSS to achieve this high score? What technique can you steal from this writer? aileecia_ceaser https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023285 2022-03-08 02:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2083023285 Essay 6 sbri0979 https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086378790 This persons essay was very good because he explained his example very clear he gave his thesis in the intro and conclusion he used very good synonyms for words that mean the exact thing just grade level. ]]> 2022-03-09 15:58:00 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086378790 English https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086380500 Jesús García yes this student had perfect thesis and also very good example as well]]> 2022-03-09 15:58:51 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086380500 jcar0431 https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086381861 this student wrote a very well written example and explained everything in full detail i think they couldve gotten a higher score if they improved their statement]]> 2022-03-09 15:59:31 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086381861 Thesis statement is the problem doesn't give an example only give a reason on how support helps drui0144 https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086381965 2022-03-09 15:59:34 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086381965 Essay #3 kjen0324 https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086383149 This person restated their thesis in the introduction and in the conclusion. The example was clear and easy to read.]]> 2022-03-09 16:00:09 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086383149 Xuan Thy Doan https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086404524 She had specific examples and
detail by telling Bonnie, who receive support from Enzo, and how that support important to Bonnie. She also rewrite her thesis in the conclusion.]]> 2022-03-09 16:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086404524 Xuan Thy Doan https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086420709 This student have clear thesis statement tell what + why, she also had specific examples and
detail by telling Nathan Scott help and support his brother, Lucas Scoot with his dream becomes a baseketball player. She also rewrite her thesis in the conclusion.]]> 2022-03-09 16:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086420709 Elias Galicias--He had a good intro same with the thesis he used two clear examples and kinda explain them right egal0448 https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086664081 2022-03-09 18:18:48 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086664081 The essay was organized, but they could've used better transition words. eyri0472 https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086665043 2022-03-09 18:19:18 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086665043 This student had specific examples and detail by using a common example and a example of common life. The student also rewrite the thesis in the conclusion. This student could get a higher score by using more complex words, definitions or better transition words. eban0302 https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086698056 Erik Banuelos - 5th]]> 2022-03-09 18:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086698056 jcar0431 https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086782320 This essay is very organized and perfect examples but i wish they could used better grammar and vocabulary]]> 2022-03-09 19:24:53 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086782320 Strong and clear thesis statement. They used good clear examples and they also had a strong ending. dpic0154 https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086788083 2022-03-09 19:28:00 UTC https://padlet.com/aileecia_ceaser/e0apb52cbwzf4mkn/wish/2086788083