English 7C by FLORES-VO, Sabrina (sflor26) https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2 Unit 4 - Exploring Indigenous Poetry and Song en-us 2021-10-12 03:49:10 UTC 2023-03-27 05:23:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f428.png Hate He Said - Steven Oliver sflor26 https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1809584103 2021-10-12 04:03:09 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1809584103 Transcript and Voice Recording sflor26 https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1809593636 2021-10-12 04:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1809593636 Personal Frame sflor26 https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1810541360 How does this poem make you feel? ]]> 2021-10-12 12:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1810541360 Structural Frame sflor26 https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1810546400 How has Steven Oliver used vocal qualities (volume, pitch, pace, pauses, emphasis) to engage audiences?
Do any language features stand out? (eg. rhyme, repetition, alliteration, metaphor, simile, inclusive language, rhetorical question)
How is the poem structured? (eg. stanzas, rhyming patterns) Does this (or do these) change/ influence the meaning of the poem?

]]> 2021-10-12 12:37:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1810546400 Cultural Frame sflor26 https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1810550377 ·       When was this text produced? 
·       What social and cultural traditions are represented in the text? / What events are referred to in the poem?

]]> 2021-10-12 12:38:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1810550377 Critical Frame sflor26 https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1810558828 ·       What does this text invite us to believe and do?
·       Whose perspective (point of view) has been included? 

]]> 2021-10-12 12:41:46 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1810558828 personal frame https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812333729 Oliver's poem made me feel like the other person didn't care or dint want Anzac day to be a real holiday and same with the other aboriginal holidays.]]> 2021-10-13 00:35:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812333729 personal frame~Amarleeeee https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812333836 oliver's poem, 'hate he said' makes me feel appreciative of his understanding and wanting for a change and the fact that he is willing to fight for it. i think he wrote this because he loves his culture and traditions.]]> 2021-10-13 00:36:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812333836 Personal Frame - Maddi :] https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812335356 Oliver's poem... gave me some sort of empathy, but as I didn't fully understand the poem. The poem was about how the Aboriginals where murder and stolen, and as it is forgotten.]]> 2021-10-13 00:36:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812335356 Personal Frame - Queen Atalia https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812336806 Mr Oliver's Poem " Hate He Said" , made me feel touched and sympathetic, I liked how he fought hard to have a day for those who fought for their country, for those who died doing that. I liked it overall.]]> 2021-10-13 00:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812336806 Personal Frame - Val :D https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812337408 Oliver's poem did not make me feel anything in particular. This poem is about someone indigenous wanting a holiday for remembrance for what happened to those who died.]]> 2021-10-13 00:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812337408 Personal Frame - Sahraj https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812342756 Oliver's poem, 'Hate He Said' made me feel sympathy for Indigenous Australians and how they've been mistreated for many generations. I think the poem is about enforcing a day celebrating the Indigenous lives and generations that were lost. ]]> 2021-10-13 00:39:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812342756 Personal Frame - Adam https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812344136 Steven Oliver's poem makes me feel sad for the Aboriginals and scared because Steven does not sound very happy and he says hate a lot.]]> 2021-10-13 00:40:29 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812344136 Personal Frame-#1 Nicmo https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812344188 Oliver's poem made me feel empathy as his poem was full of emotion as he talked about the past events that have happened and that he was willing to fight for the right for the people who gave their lives to protect the land and that he also believes in his opinion and values. ]]> 2021-10-13 00:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812344188 Personal Frame - Isak https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812345030 Oliver's Poem makes me feel like I should give more empathy about Survival Day or even just the Aboriginal People in general more than I already do, by describing the dispossession of their land after the fighting for their land]]> 2021-10-13 00:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812345030 Personal Frame- Sean Ginez https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812346089 Oliver's poem, 'hate he said,' made me feel connected to his perspective, how aboriginals have been mistreated since the arrival of the Europeans. This poem highlights the mistreatment of the Aboriginals. ]]> 2021-10-13 00:41:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812346089 Personal Frame - Lira :) https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812348389 Oliver's poem made me feel some empathy but I was kind of confused on what he was talking about. His voice was strong but in my opinion I didn't fully understand it or like it that much.]]> 2021-10-13 00:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812348389 personal frame - Lillian Stevenson https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812348701 I think the poet is smart because they are telling us their point of view in a fictional argument, while telling the reader. 
The poem makes me feel heartbroken that other events get their own day, and that that one day does not.]]> 2021-10-13 00:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812348701 cultural frame~~~aMArlEE https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812349569 the poem was produced on the 25th of jan 2013. some of the social and cultural traditions are, ' anzac, boxing day, naidoc and easter' thas pretty much it i think]]> 2021-10-13 00:42:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812349569 Personal Frame - Protik https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812350646 Steven Oliver's poem 'Hate He Said', made me understand Steven's point and informed me about his belief and perspective.]]> 2021-10-13 00:43:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812350646 Personal Frame - Lee Marinak https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812351043 Oliver's poem was well written because of the use of several points of view which caused me to think about this poem's unique style.]]> 2021-10-13 00:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812351043 Cultural Frame - QUEEN ATALIA https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812352982 Mr Oliver's Poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013. The cultural traditions were Naidoc, Anzac Day, Boxing Day, Christmas ect. Good Job Mr Oliver.]]> 2021-10-13 00:44:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812352982 Cultural Frame - Val :P https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812353958 The poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013, which was one day before Australia day.]]> 2021-10-13 00:44:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812353958 Cultural Frame - Maddi :] https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812354150 The poem was produced on... the 25th of January, Steven Oliver released, 'hate he said'. Which is the day before Australia day. This was on purpose as he intended to educated the public about the troubles that are hidden and forgotten. ]]> 2021-10-13 00:44:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812354150 Personal Frame-Khaynh https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812357867 How does this poem make you feel?
Oliver's poem makes me feel more educated on Survival Day and about why people acknowledge this day and the importance of it.

]]> 2021-10-13 00:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812357867 personal frame - sunreet https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812357990 Oliver's poem makes makes me feel empathy and this poem is to explain another way of thinking about Australia Day celebrations. ]]> 2021-10-13 00:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812357990 Personal Frame - Maria https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812359660 Oliver's poem made me feel empathetic towards Aboriginal people because they don't have a day for them. For example there is Australia day, there's a day for horses but no day for Aboriginal people.]]> 2021-10-13 00:47:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812359660 cultural frame : kulan :I https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812361089 The poem was  produced on the 25 of January 2013,the cultural traditions represented in this video where: Anzac day, NAIDOC week are the only two social and cultural traditions represented in the text]]> 2021-10-13 00:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812361089 Personal frame- Elizabeth https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812361663 Oliver's poem made me feel really touched and taught me more about Survival day because he talks about how unfair the Europeans treated the Indigenous people. ]]> 2021-10-13 00:48:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812361663 Cultural Frame- Sean Ginez https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812364170 This poem was produced on the day before Australian day, 25th January, 2013. The social and cultural events represented in the poem were, Anzac Day, New Years, Christmas, Labor, Easter and more.]]> 2021-10-13 00:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812364170 Cultural Frame - Sahraj https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812365563 The text was published on 25 January 2013, which is also 1 day before Australia Day. Some of the social and cultural events that are represented in the text are ANZAC Day, Boxing Day, NAIDOC Week and Australia Day.

]]> 2021-10-13 00:49:48 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812365563 Cultural Frame - Isak https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812366316 This poem was produced on the day before Survival Day otherwise know as Australia Day the 25th of January, 2013. Oliver described the event of the British raiding Australia and taking the land and the war they had for the land along the shore of East Australia.]]> 2021-10-13 00:50:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812366316 Cultural frame - Sunreet https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812367110 Oliver's  poem was produced on 25th of January  and it was one day before Anzac day. some of the events that show's in the text is Boxing day , Australia  day and  Naidoc week, Christmas Easter and etc.]]> 2021-10-13 00:50:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812367110 Culture Frame-Aleerah https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812369212 How does the poem make you feel?
The poem makes me feel that the thing he said could be true and making me wonder why we have a lot of those things. He was also saying to not forgot the past and he explain why not to forget it ]]> 2021-10-13 00:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812369212 Cultural Frame- #1 Nicmo https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812369737 The poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013 as he was talked about the event people should not forget the significance of these events such as NAIDOC week, Australia day and Anzac day . ]]> 2021-10-13 00:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812369737 Cultural Frame - Adam https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812370431 The poem 'Hate He Said' by Steven Oliver was made in 2013 on the 25 of January and the poem is about Aboriginals history and some events in the text that were mentioned are ANZAC day, Australia day, The Queens birthday, new year, Christmas, Labour day, Easter and Boxing Day.]]> 2021-10-13 00:51:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812370431 Personal Frame - Isaac Baice Tangi https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812371142 Oliver's poem is touching in a weird way because the way he expressed him self and telling us why there's other day's that are useless such as boxing and the Aboriginal people don't have a day that talks about Aboriginal peoples past and how they survived or maybe there life back in the day. ]]> 2021-10-13 00:52:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812371142 Cultural Frame - Lira... https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812371597  The poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013 and Oliver was talking about how its important to support the dates like NAIDOC week and New Years and Anzac Day. ]]> 2021-10-13 00:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812371597 Cultural Frame-Khaynh https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812371914 When was this poem produced?
This poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013.
What social and cultural traditions are represented in the text?
The social and cultural traditions represented/mentioned in this text was ANZAC Day, Survival Day, Boxing Day, Easter and NAIDOC Week.


]]> 2021-10-13 00:52:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812371914 Cultural frame - Lillian Stevenson https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812372977 The text was made on the 25th of January (day before Australia day). The poem mentions many events of the year, 'We have a day for Australia, the Queen, for New Years and Christmas and all those between like Labour and Easter, the ANZAC parade...'. Oliver uses those special days as an example for the argument poem. To get their point of view.]]> 2021-10-13 00:52:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812372977 Cultural Frame- Elizabeth https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812378022 Oliver's poem 'Hate He Said' was produced on 25th of January, 2013 which was 1 day before Australia day.He uses the special event for the agrument poem.]]> 2021-10-13 00:54:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812378022 Personal Frame- Aleerah https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812378260 Oliver's poem makes me feel.
Empathy but he likes to express himself and his feeling, why he thinks the other days are unless such as boxing day 

]]> 2021-10-13 00:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812378260 Cultural Frame- Lee Marinak (: https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812379397 I think that, because of the date of the poems release (25 January), Oliver's poem was intentionally released the day before Anzac day to show that he might want another day more dedicated to Aboriginal Australians.]]> 2021-10-13 00:55:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812379397 Cultural frame - Maria https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812380035 this text was produced on January 25th 2013. Which was also one day before Australia day. ]]> 2021-10-13 00:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812380035 Cultural Frame - Protik https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812381546 Steven Oliver's poem 'Hate He Said', was published on the 25th of January. This poem acknowledged the events that happened when the Europeans arrived.]]> 2021-10-13 00:56:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812381546 Cultural Frame - Isaac Baice Tangi https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812385631 The text was produced in January the 25th 2013.
The public holidays that were displayed/told such as Christmas, boxing day, Easter and Anzac day.]]> 2021-10-13 00:58:09 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1812385631 Critical Frame - Adam https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818833892 The text invites us to think about how unfair life is for the Aboriginals and think about it from a Aboriginals point of view.]]> 2021-10-15 03:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818833892 Critical frame - Lillian Stevenson https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818847403 'Hate he Said' invites audiences to see a debate in someone else's view. It shows the point of view of the poet, and gives a bit of a perspective on the opposer. ]]> 2021-10-15 04:07:38 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818847403 Structural Frame - Sahraj https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818854456 Steven Oliver used vocal qualities such as emphasis, pace, and pauses to capture the audience's attention, make the poem flow smoothly and create a greater impact on audiences. In the phrase '...Where the whole nation stops, like it does for a horse!...' the author uses a rhetorical question to get audiences thinking and involved. It also helps non-Aboriginal audiences to understand the struggles of Aboriginal people. Oliver mostly incorporates an 'AABB' rhyming scheme to keep the audience engaged. He also effectively uses stanzas to point out an idea to focus on for each stanza. ]]> 2021-10-15 04:12:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818854456 critical frame- kulan :I https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818855984 the text invites us to believe that one of the people that were in the text believed that Australia day and ANZAC day was a waste of time and there was no point to Australia day or ANZAC day, in the poem Steven Oliver fights back with how Australia day and ANZAC day are not a waste of time because they both are about the thing we lost/took and how we need to respect what happened in the past. ]]> 2021-10-15 04:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818855984 Poetic devices - Hate He Said https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818863484 Steven Oliver uses many poetic devices in his poem, 'Hate He Said'. He used repetition with the phrase 'hate he said...', he used strong emotive language like; empathy, mourn, discriminate. The poet also uses a lot of emphasis when he voiced his poem in his video.]]> 2021-10-15 04:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818863484 Critical Frame- Lee Marinak https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818871931 'Hate He Said' invites the audience to see an argument in two different perspectives. it further states the point of view of the poet, and the point of view of the opposing person. ]]> 2021-10-15 04:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818871931 Structural Frame - Isak https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818874056 Oliver used vocal qualities such as pace, pausing, emphasis and volume to engage the audience to listen to the poem and get his message out and his rhyming made the poem flow. there was repetition in many areas including at the beginning where he said 'Hate he said, . Hate he said,  …' to emphasise the hatred of 'he'. Oliver made it so he stayed on topic while rhyming so it made sense and so the audience gets hooked in by the rhythm. ]]> 2021-10-15 04:26:59 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818874056 Sunreet Structural meaning https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818877775 1) To engage the audiences Steven Oliver used emphasis ,pitch and pause.

2) Steven Oliver poem " Hate He Said " uses variety of language features like repetition, alliteration, rhetorical question and inclusive language to put a impact on audience. 

3) The poem is structured in stanzas because to highlight the mistreatment of the Aboriginals. ]]> 2021-10-15 04:29:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818877775 Structural Frame-Khaynh https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818879767 How has Steven Oliver used vocal qualities (volume, pitch, pace, pauses, emphasis) to engage audiences?
Do any language features stand out? (eg. rhyme, repetition, alliteration, metaphor, simile, inclusive language, rhetorical question)
How is the poem structured? (eg. stanzas, rhyming patterns) Does this (or do these) change/ influence the meaning of the poem?
]]> 2021-10-15 04:31:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818879767 structural frame- kulan :I https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818891818 in the poem Steven has used anaphora for the phrases "hate he said X3" and "I mourn X3"it also uses repetition on both of them as well. in his voice through the video it would go from a quiet volume to a very loud yell his pace was fast, he rhymed a lot and he used a rhetorical question in the phrase "a day, is that too much to ask." . during the poem Mr Oliver used rhyming patterns from the first two anaphora phrases he did this to influence this on how mad he was by the other person who didn't care about the aboriginal holidays.]]> 2021-10-15 04:40:33 UTC https://padlet.com/sflor26/dzsty0lidvlrzhb2/wish/1818891818