"Two Kinds" Collaborative Annotations by https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw Students will use the collaborative annotation protocol to respond to the short story "Two Kinds" Students will respond to each question on the padlet then discuss their responses. Each student will silently respond to the following questions: en-us 2018-11-27 16:06:09 UTC 2018-12-09 21:10:42 UTC hello@padlet.com jonathanlam2003 https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309134013 It becomes clear why the story is entitled "Two Kinds" when the speaker emphasizes her mother saying that "there are only two kinds of daughters". This quote is from the highest point of tension in the story, or climax of the story.]]> 2018-11-29 04:18:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309134013 jonathanlam2003 https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309134719 Throughout the story, Jing-Mei's mother has a more or less consistent theme for what she wants Jing-Mei to be like. Her mother would often find examples from their television and use it as the main structure of her expectations.]]> 2018-11-29 04:23:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309134719 jonathanlam2003 https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309135332 Jing-Mei differs from her mother's views as she just wants to be herself which constantly conflicts with her mother's high expectations for the duration of the story.]]> 2018-11-29 04:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309135332 jonathanlam2003 https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309135478 Jing-Mei's mother's background is the most significant reason for why her expectations are so high. By losing everything in China and later moving to America, she believed that there was a much better future to be had in the US.]]> 2018-11-29 04:30:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309135478 jonathanlam2003 https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309135770 In the story Jing-Mei is constantly bouncing back from internal and external conflicts. Some forms of internal conflicts is seen when she begins to have a dispute between who she is and what she sees in herself. This is an internal conflict as it is caused and dealt with by herself. Some examples of external conflicts are shown when her mother begins to force her to play the piano after having disappointed her mother at a talent show. This is an example of external conflict as it involves someone other than the speaker herself.]]> 2018-11-29 04:33:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/309135770 2/4 mishka_douglas https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/312715366 Incomplete response. Your claim and quote does not fully answer the question and your commentary needs to analyze the quote in more detail and show how it proves your claim. ]]> 2018-12-09 21:05:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/312715366 1/4 mishka_douglas https://padlet.com/jonathanlam2003/dyxrs0ld6okw/wish/312715682 Incomplete response. Needs a claim that answers the question clearly as well as textual evidence and a commentary.

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