Rebecca Bassett by Kevin Van Dyke

Dylann Huyser

2014-02-10 21:14:35 UTC

I love the way your essay flowed!!! I also DO think that communities without drugs are WAY safer! People who are taking drugs can't make good decisions so therefor if there weren't anyone taking drugs in the community the community would be safer and able to make better decisions. Love your essay!

Hadley

2014-02-10 21:18:09 UTC

I agree communities with less drugs would be a safe place.

Brooke

2014-02-10 21:19:49 UTC

I think you made a good point and i want people to stop doing drugs too. Also you need to work on your spacing. But I agree with you.

Karen Jonna

2014-02-11 05:43:13 UTC

I have figured out you r whole class has been making these essays and some don't make any sense to me and some do. I think yours did because I have a mother who smokes and after I read your essay I wanted my mother to read it and after words she was encouraged to stop. I think she is doing great and I wanted to thank you for that so thank you so, much you have changed somebody's life and that is so great!

Denali Conover

2014-02-11 14:32:50 UTC

I think having less people smoking will help this community be safer. I agree with you and I love your essay!

Karen/Grandma

2014-02-12 01:04:39 UTC

I really enjoyed your article and excited that you and many of your classmates have participated in the D.A.R.E. program. You are wise to not want to ever have anything to do with drugs and smoking. Drugs can cause you to make very unwise choices. Keep up the great work Rebecca!