Sentence Fluency by Tara Richards https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b These sentences break a common rule to create a specific effect. en-us 2016-11-02 15:29:51 UTC 2026-03-15 03:02:32 UTC hello@padlet.com You could see stones and tombs and vaults and memorial plaques. You could see the occasional dash or scuttle of a rabbit or a vole or a weasel as it slipped out of the undergrowth and across the path.            --from The Graveyard Book  tara_needham https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134818636 2016-11-02 15:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134818636 I could hear the rustling of the trees and the howling of wolves and the beating of my own heart.                                                                       --sample by Mrs. Richards tara_needham https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134819028 2016-11-02 15:34:03 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134819028 https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893272 He took one step, another step, another step, CRACK!! 
-- Tyler R.]]> 2016-11-02 18:24:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893272 Spooky Paragraph https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893281 It was a dark night. You walk towards the house and wonder why you accepted the bet, you just didn't want to look like a wimp. You knew it was a bad idea but you wanted the money. As you approach the house you hesitate and then you ask yourself "what if its dangerous in the house?"  Then step by step you slowly move towards the house and as you step inside you hear the door shut and lock itself, and the last thing you friends hear that night is a blood, curdling, scream.

~Gavin P ]]> 2016-11-02 18:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893281 Jake could see animals and people and machines and even planes from different times in the past. https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893409
                                ~ by Zach S 


]]> 2016-11-02 18:24:57 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893409 You wonder if there are monsters and ghosts and bats inside the strange house.           https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893588 ~Emma B.]]> 2016-11-02 18:25:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893588 She had her candy bag and her costume all ready and ready to go trick or treating https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893647 {Caroline}

]]> 2016-11-02 18:25:30 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893647 The next thing I know I'm looking in a bowl filled with skittles and chocolate and suckers and at the bottom of the bowl a king size Hershey bar! https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893655 ~~~Abby S]]> 2016-11-02 18:25:31 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893655 https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893663 They could see the spider webs and the peeling wood and the broken furniture and the dead plants. There were even creepy paintings on the walls. They could also hear the rustling of who -knows what.

~Joshwin T.

]]> 2016-11-02 18:25:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893663 I could hear the sound of leaves crunching and the twigs snapping and the wind whistling  at me to leave before it is to late. https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893725 ~Hope F.]]> 2016-11-02 18:25:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893725 https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893746 There were ovens and stools and homemade cookies and fruits and candy.
-- Hunter L.]]> 2016-11-02 18:25:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893746 I BROKE A RULE https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893873 I was thinking why the lady was so weird could she have a problem or was she crazy or just trying to be funny.  -Josh]]> 2016-11-02 18:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893873 The house was silent and dark and scary https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893877 ~Taylor F]]> 2016-11-02 18:26:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893877 As I started to look around I saw tombs and bones and dust and a ton of other creepy decorations https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893914 ~Mya D.

]]> 2016-11-02 18:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134893914 I light the candle and I see pictures and bones and spiders on there webs and bugs all over and flying in my face. https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894286 ~ Maddie I.]]> 2016-11-02 18:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894286 As I approached the spooky and old and window-cracked house, I felt chills up my arms. https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894346 *Savannah H*]]> 2016-11-02 18:27:03 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894346 I could see out of the corner of my I spider webs and pumkins and a doll. https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894530 JOSHUA]]> 2016-11-02 18:27:31 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894530 https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894548 I occasionally got a whiff of Cookies or Hot Chocolate or Candy
                               ~ Lennon S.]]> 2016-11-02 18:27:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894548 Tony sees trees and bushes and roads and cars and houses but no people https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894596 ~Natalia ]]> 2016-11-02 18:27:38 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894596     https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894701 As I took another step, Someone was up stairs.(creek)!

-Jett R]]> 2016-11-02 18:27:52 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134894701 I could see cobwebs in the corners and dust on the porch and trash in flower beds. https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134895057
~ Linzy W]]> 2016-11-02 18:28:44 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134895057   https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134895685 2016-11-02 18:30:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134895685 https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134896084 He was trying to think of all the reasonable ways the house isn't haunted. It could be a joke or a pranks or a person really into decorating for Halloween.
~Josie]]> 2016-11-02 18:31:17 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134896084 https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134896687 As i was walking up to the house, out of the corner of my eye i saw a bid spider and a lot of other creepy things. -Josh]]> 2016-11-02 18:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134896687 https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134896871 I knock on the door only to find an old lady with a huge bucket of candy with reeses and kit-kats and caramel apple lollipops!

~Lily]]> 2016-11-02 18:33:13 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134896871 As Jake got suffocated... https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134897197 {CAROLINE]]> 2016-11-02 18:34:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134897197 After a few minutes of looking around, I noticed some bones on the floor. https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134897358 ~Mya D.]]> 2016-11-02 18:34:23 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134897358 My mine started racing, the house looked so scary with the dead tree and the tall grass and the broken windows and the smoke from the chimney (I don't know why the chimney part was scary). https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134897574
~Aidan C]]> 2016-11-02 18:34:55 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134897574 As you unconfertably walk up to the spooky house, you see the bright windows turn into eyes glaring at you in the dark night. https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134898446 ~Lily]]> 2016-11-02 18:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134898446 i broke a rule https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134898471 2016-11-02 18:37:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134898471 As I approach the scary house my heart pounds threw my chest. I hear wolves howling, its pitch black and i'm hearing things. https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134898514 By Josh]]> 2016-11-02 18:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134898514 I tunneled my way out and I was safe https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134898985 ~MYA]]> 2016-11-02 18:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134898985 Hi https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134899192 2016-11-02 18:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_needham/dxke3kpgz22b/wish/134899192