https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py en-us 2022-04-10 17:18:38 UTC 2022-04-12 12:16:46 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f604.png https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139430099 🥝]]> 2022-04-11 16:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139430099 https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139451359 Cast, Director, Writer(s), Producer(s), Exec Producer (Martin Sharp), DoP, Prod Design, Editor(s), Composer/Sound, Casting Director]]> 2022-04-11 16:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139451359 https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139452591 Anais Young
Dan Barrett (two Ts, only one T in the edit)]]> 2022-04-11 16:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139452591 https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139452886 The music clashes with sam's audio at some point. Also the zooming in on sam's face during the speech is a bit jolty. perhaps a bit of tweaking with image stabilisation could fix this?]]> 2022-04-11 16:25:27 UTC https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139452886 https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139454528 Would like to see more cuts of Sam annoyed with bickering SU]]> 2022-04-11 16:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2139454528 https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2140702051 Script formatted correctly, needs more character and scene descriptions. I know it's a trailer, but on the page, it comes across as too jumpy. Also the title page needs to be formatted and credited correctly.]]> 2022-04-12 12:04:09 UTC https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2140702051 https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2140718037 I thought the episode was well directed and edited, interesting shots were used. Only point is there might be a continuity error going into Jacquelline's office (the corridor outside her office in the shots outside don't match up with the corridor that can be seen from inside her office)]]> 2022-04-12 12:16:46 UTC https://padlet.com/beckyclarkson18/dxgf64ctfndao6py/wish/2140718037