IE. WRITING TASK 1. REVISION by Do Trong https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98 Được tạo với sức mạnh để thành công en-us 2021-09-08 15:09:47 UTC 2026-03-01 07:57:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f60d.png Group 1 trongdulis https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727784296 2021-09-09 12:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727784296 Group 2 trongdulis https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727784549 2021-09-09 12:02:00 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727784549 Group 3 trongdulis https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727784685 2021-09-09 12:02:06 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727784685 Group 1 trongdulis https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727784847 2021-09-09 12:02:12 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727784847 Group 2 trongdulis https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785044 2021-09-09 12:02:18 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785044 Group 3 trongdulis https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785173 2021-09-09 12:02:23 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785173 Group 1 trongdulis https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785383 2021-09-09 12:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785383 Group 2 trongdulis https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785553 2021-09-09 12:02:36 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785553 Group 3 trongdulis https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785737 2021-09-09 12:02:42 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1727785737 These day, some parents put more pressure on their children as they want them to succeed in life. That can become a motivation for them to try harder. However, this may have unfavorable effects on children's future. The children are made to study subjects that do not interest them and have a career in something they do not have passion for. Therefore, this could cause job dissatisfaction and lead to them resenting their jobs https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728034799 2021-09-09 13:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728034799 Firstly,i believe parents pressure their kids to be successful in order to form discipline for their children. As they are still young, their awareness hasn't been matured yet, which needs the involvement of parents in educating the kid. Children tend to be addicted to games, or some social networking sites such as facebook and so on. https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728035324 2021-09-09 13:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728035324 Phuc Reverse Yag https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728035552 Advantages: 
+ Parents can hold their children attention in studying, prevent them from procrastination.
+ Guiding them to the right way. Lead them to the brightside of socialism
Disadvantages:
+ Limit children from being free to choose their future career.
+ Some can be depressed and commit suicide.]]> 2021-09-09 13:32:56 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728035552 Parental pressure (APhuc) https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728035976 On the one hand, parental pressure brings certain benefits to children. Most of children always spend their days playing video games, watching TV or check out their friends on social media. They are not self-disciplined and hard-working enough, while educational achievement is absolutely important. In order to make children avoid having regrets and have a bright future, a little push from parents is necessary. Parents have gone through so many stages in their life, so they know what is the best for their kids.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks. The problem of overloaded work at a very young age occurs in so many countries. Receiving constant criticism from parents results in anxiety, self-hate or even comitting suicide. In addition, children ought to be free to follow their own dreams and pasions. They are not the miniature version of the parents to do whatever their parents are lack of.]]> 2021-09-09 13:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728035976 https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728036718 Pushing children to get success at an early age could deal detrimental consequences in the brain. Parental pressure which is opposite from the children's will is only cracked the emotional well-being.It is obvious that children want to explore the amazing world with pleasure and forcing them to do as their parents' will would create a gritty desire to fight back.Therefore,children will not exposure and understand clearly what have been taught and just try to get to it.Besides, this pressure only cause serious health problems on their child]]> 2021-09-09 13:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728036718 https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728037754 While parental pressure may have some positive aspects, it is outweighed by the more significant negative aspects. First of all, that overworking children from an early age will turn to some serious health problems is the one of top drawback. Moreover, children overwhelmed in workload and under a high pressure, so they tend to headache in a long term and drowsy on a regularly basis. In addition, offspring become exhausted not only mental but also physical health. As a result, they don't gain high scores, and have a bad consequence. Second, they will depend on the decision of parents, which make them become a indecisive person. When children has problem in life, the always linger]]> 2021-09-09 13:33:29 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728037754 https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728038353    Advantages: 
- Children will be well-trained to confront with a number of potential problems in life.
- Fully provided with various skills: time-managing, stress-managing, goal-setting...
- To direct sustainable future for children
    Drawbacks: 
- Depression -> sleeping disorder, loss of appetite and several physical damage
- break the pond among family members]]> 2021-09-09 13:33:39 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728038353 https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728046948 There are both up and downside of this topic. The preliminary advantage is that the pressure brings the motivation to the children. Motivation is an indispensable thing to be able to succeed. Moreover, they will become more resilent and gritty after a failure. Besides, children surely can learn to tolerate discomfort to overcome challenges.
Negative: create bad self-image for them, learning should be fun]]> 2021-09-09 13:36:00 UTC https://padlet.com/trongdulis/dvq37njnjf2eut98/wish/1728046948