Conviction Piece: What Do You Notice? - f25-32509 by Christen McGaughey

Leslie Mendoza

2025-10-28 15:29:47 UTC

I see a different perspective than what the norms are usually set. A position to make a change with a hopeful tone.

Leslie Mendoza

2025-10-28 15:31:31 UTC

They all take actions! They make a decision and take action. Decide the process and accomplish and meet their goals.

Leslie Mendoza

2025-10-28 15:33:30 UTC

They include other peoples opinions or statements known regarding their topic. Common beliefs and usual views from specific topic. Including other resources or experiences.

Leslie Mendoza

2025-10-28 15:34:51 UTC

They are all brilliant and brave! They are all making an impactful change.

Joseph Huerta

2025-10-31 19:47:20 UTC

Most of the pieces were personal. The writers shared lived experiences and were not afraid to be vulnerable. This made them honest and authentic.

Joseph Huerta

2025-10-31 19:53:25 UTC

There seemed to be a before and after in all of the articles. There was a naive phase that moved to struggle, and then awareness. The transformations the authors made were emotional and logical. The writers walked us through their experiences and how they came to realization.

Joseph Huerta

2025-10-31 19:58:50 UTC

The writers used personal stories as opposed to statistics or data for evidence. The power of the personal experience sometimes exceeds facts because it is lived, it's not something you read in the newspaper or a book.

Joseph Huerta

2025-10-31 20:06:37 UTC

Their vulnerability was a source of strength and being open didn't weaken the message. It was regaining power and identity.

Ivette Cruz

2025-10-31 21:17:52 UTC

While reading the articles I really appreciated how authors shared both positive and negative experiences. Their tone brought truth and demonstrated how belief could be impacted in either perspective.

Ivette Cruz

2025-10-31 21:24:30 UTC

While most writers provided evidence based on personal stories, they weren't afraid to challenge others beliefs. They brought forth examples into how people can be swayed into believing facts that have been proven or already established.

Ivette Cruz

2025-10-31 21:28:16 UTC

In the articles there always seemed to be a cause or motivation into taking action. The author's didn't seem satisfied in set ways of the past and wanted to break free of these restrictions. They brought forth how their thinking or methods could bring more options and opportunities for people.

Ivette Cruz

2025-10-31 21:31:57 UTC

Being vulnerable and open minded tended to be a consist theme in these articles. It portrayed how struggling leads to more acceptance and there's no harm in following what we believe is right.

Victoria Quintero

2025-11-01 21:21:17 UTC

One thing I noticed from each writer is that they share their own experiences this showed their raw emotions and how they truly felt during their experiences. Their tone changed through every detail of what they said and by the tone it made you feel the emotions they felt.

Victoria Quintero

2025-11-01 21:58:42 UTC

The evidence shown that the authors used was their own experiences and not just their own but other experiences as well. To me using your own experiences makes things more credible because it is something that actually happened to someone which just makes things more credible.

Victoria Quintero

2025-11-01 22:04:35 UTC

I think each author showed some sort of motive for things they always explained what the bigger issue was and how it started.

Victoria Quintero

2025-11-01 22:09:01 UTC

I think each author had powerful stories and because of them being strong enough ti share their own experiences they were able to create something so thoughtful.

Maricela Jacuinde-Ortiz

2025-11-01 23:27:28 UTC

There was a few articles that were very raw, they didn't attempt to sugar coat any experience instead they said it how it was. I really like how some of the authors spoke about their negative experiences in a positive tone.

Maricela Jacuinde-Ortiz

2025-11-01 23:30:31 UTC

The first article packet we received included a lot of conclusions of studies and they included article links to those studies. There was a lot of personal experiences that were used to backup the article title.

Maricela Jacuinde-Orttiz

2025-11-01 23:32:52 UTC

I noticed that a lot of the articles start of with a reflection of a personal observation. It followed by learning a little bit about the narrator and their perspective on that observations. I think there was a lot of personal opinion involved in each paragraph.

Maricela Jacuinde-Ortiz

2025-11-01 23:34:05 UTC

I really enjoyed how authentic and personable many of these articles are. I prefer to read articles that involve peoples observations and opinions as well as seeing the way they process things throughout their writing/article.

Bethany ramos

2025-11-02 00:39:41 UTC

I liked how the authors used personal experiences, showing vulnerability and openness making their writing have a strong sense of honestly and authenticity.

Bethany ramos

2025-11-02 00:43:53 UTC

The writers included outside viewpoints and familiar beliefs on the subject, and backed up the information with evidence from various resources.

Bethany ramos

2025-11-02 00:47:31 UTC

They actively made choices that needed to be fix and followed them with actions that helped them reached their goal.

Bethany ramos

2025-11-02 00:51:46 UTC

Their determination for change, paired with their bold actions which makes them powerful with lasting influence.

Rishita Agarwal

2025-11-03 02:58:20 UTC

Across all of the videos, the presenters seem to have very strong and bold personalities. They also call out outdated and wrong societal norms.

Rishita Agarwal

2025-11-03 02:59:16 UTC

They all use their life experiences to back up their claims, which makes everything feel more personal.

Rishita Agarwal

2025-11-03 03:01:52 UTC

All of the articles have a personal connection to whatever social justice issue they talk about.

Rishita Agarwal

2025-11-03 03:02:30 UTC

They all have incredible self awareness and emotional maturity.

Destiny Murillo

2025-11-03 04:16:32 UTC

The writers sounded honest and personal. Their tone made their beliefs feel real and easy to connect with.

Destiny Murillo

2025-11-03 04:17:12 UTC

Most used personal stories as evidence, showing real experiences that shaped their beliefs.

Destiny Murillo

2025-11-03 04:17:33 UTC

Each started with a belief or story and built on it with reflection, making the flow smooth and natural.

Destiny Murillo

2025-11-03 04:17:52 UTC

They all felt genuine and showed growth, turning personal moments into powerful lessons.

Kevin Stephens

2025-11-03 05:17:15 UTC

Being able to step into someone showing knowing you can't be like them but understanding means you have a good idea of perspective. Always have a nice tone people tend to look for that in messages and in speaking.

Kevin Stephens

2025-11-03 05:18:48 UTC

Its all types of evidence , use every bit of it too, always be aware and observer. Be open minded to how the author writes, act and their tone .

Kevin Stephens

2025-11-03 05:22:25 UTC

When i hear structure i'm thinking the foundation, what's holding the essay together . When i think about organization i see how the other puts the quote into perspective .

Kevin Stephens

2025-11-03 05:24:00 UTC

What makes you somewhat different from other you know . What allows other to connect from things that happened in the past life.

Heey Lee Lopez

2025-11-03 06:09:27 UTC

I noticed that it was more of a personal story majority of the time. Their purpose was mainly to share their experience.

Lillie Baeza

2025-11-03 06:15:11 UTC

Lillie Baeza - I noticed that most of the stories were personal and inspiring. The speakers shared their real feelings and struggles, which made their stories honest. They explained why their beliefs are important by telling where they came from and how it affected their lives. Using their own experiences helped me understand their points better.

Lillie Baeza

2025-11-03 06:23:08 UTC

Lillie Baeza - I noticed that the authors use personal stories to explain their beliefs. For example, in one of the recent ones, Shane Wickes talked about being gay while coaching football and how it affected his life. Amanda Williams shared her experiences growing up in Chicago and how it inspired her art. Using stories like this makes their ideas easier to understand and feel more real. It shows why their experiences are important and helps people connect with them.

Lillie Baeza

2025-11-03 06:27:43 UTC

Lillie Baeza - I noticed that all the writers decided to take action based on what they believed! They didn’t just talk about their ideas, they did something to make a difference. This shows that acting on your beliefs can help change things and have an impact on other people.

Lillie Baeza

2025-11-03 06:33:54 UTC

Lillie Baeza - I noticed that all the writers were brave and powerful. They decided to take action based on what they believed instead of just talking about it. Being brave and open minded helped them make a difference and inspire other people. Their words and actions were powerful and showed that just one person can create change.

Heey Lee Lopez

2025-11-03 06:59:58 UTC

The evidence they would use is more personal based, what I mean is that they are telling their own personal story so it really is just evidence from their own story.

Heey Lee Lopez

2025-11-03 07:01:56 UTC

One thing that I really liked about these is that the all had something motivational, not matter what it was on they had that in their. They also did mention a lot about their own personal stories but I like how each one was very unique to one another.

joshua quirarte The tone of each writer's personal experience was very honest, the way they share their beliefs and explain why it matters to each of them, explain and show their own experience for me as a person. I don’t have the confidence to do that so reading that kind of amazes me.

2025-11-03 09:28:42 UTC

joshua quirarte

2025-11-03 09:31:55 UTC

I know how the authors use examples based off their personal life stuff that matter from their life, and sometimes I also notice how they mention examples from other people’s life to make their point even stronger

joshua quirarte

2025-11-03 09:34:14 UTC

The reading was really easy to follow and understand because the way they structured it was readable. They usually started a story explaining about their life struggles or their personal life beliefs This idea made the article flowable to read.

joshua quirarte

2025-11-03 09:35:47 UTC

The reading was very relatable as a reader. Honestly, I personally can’t relate what they were going through in life and their personal belief, but as a reader, I understand, and I relate, and I could go inside in their shoes and see their point of view of what life was for them.

Kailah Fierro

2025-11-03 23:12:53 UTC

The tone sets the mood and helps understand what the speaker is feeling about a situation.